Shikuro Nara "exp exp exp!!!"

Subject: Shikuro Nara "exp exp exp!!!" Thu Aug 11, 2011 11:26 am

Character Name: Shikuro Nara

Username: Shikuro

Link to Character Bio: Nara

Stats: 5+ Speed, 5+ Spirit Power, 5+ Fighting Skill

Current Rank: 6

Current Exp: 40/85

Roleplays to be Evaluated

RPWO

Solo

Subject: Re: Shikuro Nara "exp exp exp!!!" Thu Aug 11, 2011 2:44 pm

RPWO: 7/10

Nice relaxed thread there. Okay, there aren’t many, just a few spelling mistakes, and the odd typo, I don't think that's really an issue, just re-read once you think you're done, and you should spot them, and the post lengths could be longer, but I suppose you couldn't write a lot every post, due to the subject of the thread. So yeah, good thread, just check what you've wrote and you should be fine.

Solo: 7/10

Pretty much the same as what I said above, a few spelling mistakes, and typos, so yeah, just work on that. Also considering it is a solo; it couldn't hurt trying to make it a bit longer, okay that is all. Another good thread.

Subject: Re: Shikuro Nara "exp exp exp!!!" Wed Aug 24, 2011 12:04 pm

More EXP!!

RPWO

FCT

Subject: Re: Shikuro Nara "exp exp exp!!!" Wed Aug 24, 2011 10:15 pm

Since I'm in the FCT I'll take on the RPWO. Sorry about that Shik. Shame I'm in so many threads this has come up quite often.

The thread is rather short, and the posts are too. I can understand the tone; Kaiyo is "dead". Just not very exciting. And it's not because there's mostly dialogue. It's just like when to guys meet up and nod greetings: not much to get into.

[2/10]

Subject: Re: Shikuro Nara "exp exp exp!!!" Tue Aug 30, 2011 11:28 am

RPWO - 5/10 - Good thread. Nice overall story with decent length. I found that some of the posts were a bit, but were made up for by others, other than that not bad. BTW that is one old thread Razz

Subject: Re: Shikuro Nara "exp exp exp!!!" Thu Sep 01, 2011 4:43 am

Solo

If this doesn't score higher than average... then my idea of this system was wrong ;P

Subject: Re: Shikuro Nara "exp exp exp!!!" Thu Sep 01, 2011 9:27 am

Solo: 6/10

A few typo's here and there, but not many problems overall. The read itself was great, and the length was also great, and a solo in your inner world was quite interesting, so good work.

Subject: Re: Shikuro Nara "exp exp exp!!!" Mon Apr 09, 2012 12:37 pm

A RPWO

Subject: Re: Shikuro Nara "exp exp exp!!!" Mon Apr 16, 2012 6:24 am

Trying to be civil: Decent RP 7

Subject: Re: Shikuro Nara "exp exp exp!!!" Sat Jan 19, 2013 12:19 pm

FCT

RPWO

2nd round.

RPWO

RPWO

Number of Posts : 207 Age : 34 Registration Date : 2012-07-29

Old threads, good writing aside from extreme overuse of Mister Comma. However all the threads were rather short.

610
Would have done well if u guys had finished it.

6/10
just a little check up with kaiyo it seems

3/10
Barely above minimum thread requirements, but decent writing

5/10
You did well for your part, he wasn't giving you much to work with, and is notorious for now knowing character limits.

so total of, 20 exp

Subject: Re: Shikuro Nara "exp exp exp!!!" Sun Jan 27, 2013 10:24 am

Subject: Re: Shikuro Nara "exp exp exp!!!" Mon Jan 28, 2013 12:47 am

At a glance: [5/10]

Meeting the for the first time and feeling each other out. I figured a long heated debate might erupt toward the beginning. No dice. Shame that would have made more development between them. Ended with a tour of the grounds. Thread seemed longer than it was, but forgot how big your signature was.

Subject: Re: Shikuro Nara "exp exp exp!!!" Fri Feb 08, 2013 9:46 am

Subject: Re: Shikuro Nara "exp exp exp!!!" Tue Feb 12, 2013 12:49 am

Give it back: [6/10]

I did tell you to wait to do this thread, but honestly don't think it would have mattered. Even with your newly acquired powers the difference in rank would have still made up the difference. Kaiyo would have just went Kenpachi on you. Maybe a strike or two might have connected. Still you fought well to keep the one sided fight less one sided. Keep on trucking.

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