Ezrachek RankUp

Character Name: Ezrachek Rayone

Username: Ezrachek Rayone

Link to Character Bio: https://thebleachworld.darkbb.com/t3545-ezrachek-tripmine-rayone#26508

Current Rank: 2

Current Exp: 34/45

Roleplays to be Evaluated: https://thebleachworld.darkbb.com/t3550-zanpakuto-training#26509
https://thebleachworld.darkbb.com/t3551-a-simple-spar#26524

Requested Stat Point Increases:

Zanpukto training: [4/10]

A little quick for a solo. Not much in a wind-up; why he was hunting wolves, how he got to the tree, etc. Still it worked to some extent although there was little challenge from the wolves or the man that attacked him.(he did kinda come out of nowhere) Not sure Seireitei smiles on shinigami students slaying random people. Let a witness no less....

A simple spar: [4/10]

Started rather thin in post, but you build up from there. Again felt somewhat short, but both of you enjoyed yourselves so I guess it all worked out.

Character Name: Ezrachek Rayone

Username: Ezrachek Rayone

Link to Character Bio:https://thebleachworld.darkbb.com/t3545-ezrachek-tripmine-rayone#26508

Current Rank: 0

Current Exp: 8/20

Roleplays to be Evaluated:https://thebleachworld.darkbb.com/t3554-dinner-with-shakaku

Requested Stat Point Increases:
+5 Speed

Dinner with Shakaku: 4/10

I am pleased with how this turned out. A decent thread with good development and length. Short post sizes, but that's to be expected in a thread with multiple people. Keep up the good work.

PS: you don't have to write up your points and intended stat increases every time. Just give us the links to the threads and we'll edit your top post to monitor your progress.

Oh k thanx

Thread to be Evaluated: https://thebleachworld.darkbb.com/t3571-to-russia-with-love#26649

I see your point... This was late at night and my brain was scattered... it was meant to unlock more information about his past, and the whole reason why he killed them was because of what they did to his father, i still have not discussed how his mother and father were killed, because im thinking of making a very sick and twisted way of how they were killed, which will be the reason the Ezrachek is how he is, but i see your point on the lack of quality. I suppose i need to work on getting better quality by next week. Thank you anyways

Thread to be evaluated: https://thebleachworld.darkbb.com/t3579-night-stars-and-red-snow-open

6/10 points

I already gave reasons in c-box earlier. Keep up the good posting.

Thread to be Evaluated: Ezrachek's Nightmare

Haha ok, not much i can say in response other than the she parts were typos... Thought I revised it, just takes a fresh set of eyes to see everything though ya know?

Thread to be evaluated: White Lotus

Thread to be Evaluated: Meeting the Captain

Mission Request

Meeting the captain: [3/10]

Nothing bad, and nothing good. For the most part just an eager person joining the 2nd squad. Although I wouldn't brag about being beaten by me, I'm a nobody. With the colored text you dialogue looked long. I say to break up speeches and chatting when you can.

Mission request: [0/10]

Two posts and simple ones at that. You asked for a mission you got one. Shame could have drawn it out more.

Thread(s) To be Evaluated:

Going on Patrol



Transmission

True on the quote... Thanx for the eval

Might i request someone evaluate transmission?

Transmission 5/10

much thanks Junko

Been a while since I have been on this thread haha

Thread to be evaluated:Omnikutsido (Kuro)

Omnikutsido 6/10 Pts

Good storyline. A few grammar errors but nothing too much. Try adding more detail into you're posts to further be able to visualize what's going on. Very nice.