Tenshineko
Number of Posts : 337
Age : 33
Location : Bleach rp
Job/Interests : Hobbie:Reading, Watching Bleach
Quote : Life is waunderful. Never give up on your dreams.
Registration Date : 2011-05-12
 |  Subject: Rank number 1 for Ren  Fri Jun 10, 2011 10:07 am | |
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Kaiyo
Soul Society Faction Leader
Number of Posts : 2748
Age : 31
Location : The Verse
Quote : Pain is weakness leaving the body
Registration Date : 2009-05-18
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DarkMaster
Number of Posts : 863
Age : 39
Location : In a daze.
Job/Interests : That's Officer DarkMaster to you, buddy.
Quote : I'm afraid of the dark.
Registration Date : 2010-07-18
| | Subject: Re: Rank number 1 for Ren Sat Jun 18, 2011 11:36 pm | |
| I agree with Kaiyo on the post length issue. Seeing as we don't have too many active hollows, I say just give me a solo and consider it approved | |
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Arawn
Number of Posts : 3440
Age : 43
Location : Here, but there
Job/Interests : Anything, but not everything
Quote : You were close, but I was right
Registration Date : 2010-06-23
| | Subject: Re: Rank number 1 for Ren Sun Jun 19, 2011 12:42 am | |
| *wipes tears from his eyes* (Only makes sense if you were in the cbox)
First and foremost your post length needs much improvement. Quite afew of your post are composed of one or two sentences. At least 250 words would be reasonable size post. It doesn't have to be 250, just add more to posts such as being descriptive. Do work on that.
With the size issue the two solo are not acceptable.(I'm guessing the second is incomplete as it doesn't end in any way.
The RWPO are of considerable length, but again the short posting.
As a rank 0 application the requirements are lower than most ranks. I will agree with the previous 2; add a solo. | |
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Arawn
Number of Posts : 3440
Age : 43
Location : Here, but there
Job/Interests : Anything, but not everything
Quote : You were close, but I was right
Registration Date : 2010-06-23
| | Subject: Re: Rank number 1 for Ren Thu Jun 30, 2011 1:58 am | |
| Approved now that it's updated. Don't forget to distribute points to your stats. | |
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Solo's generally need to be a bit longer than as well- so i'm gunna say add in a solo and either a FCT or EFT ^_^ 
