Kaiyo
Soul Society Faction Leader
Number of Posts : 2748
Age : 30
Location : The Verse
Quote : Pain is weakness leaving the body
Registration Date : 2009-05-18
 |  Subject: Kaiyo rank up thread  Mon Jun 25, 2012 12:11 pm | |
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Arawn
Number of Posts : 3440
Age : 42
Location : Here, but there
Job/Interests : Anything, but not everything
Quote : You were close, but I was right
Registration Date : 2010-06-23
| | Subject: Re: Kaiyo rank up thread Sun Jul 01, 2012 10:57 pm | |
| Only 2 threads per week Ms Kaiyo. Which of the 4 would you like to be scored? The others can be used for the next week. | |
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Kaiyo
Soul Society Faction Leader
Number of Posts : 2748
Age : 30
Location : The Verse
Quote : Pain is weakness leaving the body
Registration Date : 2009-05-18
| | Subject: Re: Kaiyo rank up thread Mon Jul 02, 2012 9:27 am | |
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Arawn
Number of Posts : 3440
Age : 42
Location : Here, but there
Job/Interests : Anything, but not everything
Quote : You were close, but I was right
Registration Date : 2010-06-23
| | Subject: Re: Kaiyo rank up thread Mon Jul 02, 2012 12:52 pm | |
| My esteemed colleague just pointed out that since we were late in the grading all 4 are to be evaluated. Sorry about that. :p
*blames DM*
Taking things seriously: [8/10]
I already said this in chat, but everyone should read it. Long posts are not to be fear, but embraced. It's a nice read, so you'll be rewarded for your efforts. Ms Kaiyo's reward is the score I've give. Now those that do read it and love it may wonder why I didn't give the 9 or 10. It's good very good a little dramatic wind up, but good none the less. Some minor issues like direction, but I think it was more my fault for reading too fast even after I tried to slow myself down. Still works well even with those minor things. Good job.
Running for relief: [0/10]
Unfortunately this thread does not meet the basic requirements for evaluation/scoring.
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Arawn
Number of Posts : 3440
Age : 42
Location : Here, but there
Job/Interests : Anything, but not everything
Quote : You were close, but I was right
Registration Date : 2010-06-23
| | Subject: Re: Kaiyo rank up thread Thu Dec 27, 2012 12:44 pm | |
| Falling from cloud nine: [5/10]
I was quite vexed by this thread. To put it simply I wanted more. Usually it's a good thing when I'm left wanting, but this time it was different. Normally it's like having a snack to hold you over. In this case the snack made me hungrier than what I was a moment ago. I like how it's the aftermath of the attack rather than the actual event. That might be part of it. None the less it's easy enough to follow. | |
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Kaiyo
Soul Society Faction Leader
Number of Posts : 2748
Age : 30
Location : The Verse
Quote : Pain is weakness leaving the body
Registration Date : 2009-05-18
| | Subject: Re: Kaiyo rank up thread Thu Dec 27, 2012 3:59 pm | |
| Cool  erm, i'll move all the links across from the one i made after this when i get to a computer- can't highlight stuff or anythin atm so bit tricky to do till i get back to a computer  thanks tho! | |
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Kaiyo
Soul Society Faction Leader
Number of Posts : 2748
Age : 30
Location : The Verse
Quote : Pain is weakness leaving the body
Registration Date : 2009-05-18
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DarkMaster
Number of Posts : 863
Age : 39
Location : In a daze.
Job/Interests : That's Officer DarkMaster to you, buddy.
Quote : I'm afraid of the dark.
Registration Date : 2010-07-18
| | Subject: Re: Kaiyo rank up thread Thu Jan 03, 2013 7:42 pm | |
| The death of Kaiyo Saiyouko - 8/10
Approved for Rank 1
*stamps Kaiyo's forehead* | |
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my bad 
