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Amaya

Amaya


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Number of Posts : 154
Age : 32
Job/Interests : Toturing innocent souls
Quote : Butterflies!
Registration Date : 2010-07-13

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PostSubject: Amaya rank up   Amaya rank up I_icon_minitimeFri Mar 02, 2012 5:10 am

yea I wanted to wait until I had another thread ready, but seems I will finish 2 soon, so ill get this out there

Character Name: Amaya Lee

Username: Amaya

Link to Character Bio: https://thebleachworld.darkbb.com/t3607-amaya-lee-superhuman

Current Rank: 0

Current Exp: 15/20

Roleplays to be Evaluated: https://thebleachworld.darkbb.com/t3615-new-to-the-town-solo

Requested Stat Point Increases: +5 fighting skill


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Arawn

Arawn


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Number of Posts : 3440
Age : 43
Location : Here, but there
Job/Interests : Anything, but not everything
Quote : You were close, but I was right
Registration Date : 2010-06-23

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PostSubject: Re: Amaya rank up   Amaya rank up I_icon_minitimeFri Mar 02, 2012 2:05 pm

New to town: [3/10]

Short, sweet, and missing some meat. It's a nice beginning for a character moving into the troubled city. Seems she's aiming for Rourke industries, good luck with that. First half was well and good the second slightly less. Lack of details made it seem like a rushed end to the thread.
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Amaya

Amaya


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Number of Posts : 154
Age : 32
Job/Interests : Toturing innocent souls
Quote : Butterflies!
Registration Date : 2010-07-13

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Junko

Junko


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Number of Posts : 521
Age : 28
Registration Date : 2010-10-30

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PostSubject: Re: Amaya rank up   Amaya rank up I_icon_minitimeTue Mar 06, 2012 5:21 pm

Me gusta... Decent Plot, Omnious bad guy

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Amaya

Amaya


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Number of Posts : 154
Age : 32
Job/Interests : Toturing innocent souls
Quote : Butterflies!
Registration Date : 2010-07-13

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PostSubject: Re: Amaya rank up   Amaya rank up I_icon_minitimeWed Feb 20, 2013 5:10 pm

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Shin Kinsen

Shin Kinsen


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Number of Posts : 207
Age : 35
Registration Date : 2012-07-29

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PostSubject: Re: Amaya rank up   Amaya rank up I_icon_minitimeWed Feb 27, 2013 4:11 pm

I can only grade it for its current state, which is incomplete, or at least thats how it looks to me.

once again a CB thread is interesting, unique situation predictable responses. You tried for a few posts to get an advantage over Arawn's narration, but then kind of gave up. kinda curious as to how DM would end up involved if it had continued. Seemed like it died right when it was getting interesting.

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