Ezrachek RankUp

Subject: Re: Ezrachek RankUp Fri Jul 13, 2012 4:06 pm

Much thanks

Subject: Re: Ezrachek RankUp Thu Aug 09, 2012 2:10 am

More threads

Only a dream

Subject: Re: Ezrachek RankUp Fri Aug 10, 2012 9:38 pm

Only a Dream 5/10. Rather short thread, action was good, but still ended up being short.

Subject: Re: Ezrachek RankUp Tue Aug 21, 2012 10:05 pm

Pulling Guard Duty (Solo)

Subject: Re: Ezrachek RankUp Tue Aug 21, 2012 10:08 pm

4/10 Pulling Guard duty

Subject: Re: Ezrachek RankUp Wed Aug 22, 2012 3:12 pm

Points to be added: +5 to Technique

Subject: Re: Ezrachek RankUp Sun Sep 02, 2012 3:33 am

Thread to be evaluated: No Hesitations

Shikai Obtained!

Subject: Re: Ezrachek RankUp Mon Sep 03, 2012 11:14 am

7/10 - No Hesitations

8/10 - Shikai Obtained!

At rank 2 a PC can only post 2 threads, one of which has to be a RPWO. Both of these are solo. One will be for last week, the other for this week. An interesting shikai thread ~ The Arawn

Subject: Re: Ezrachek RankUp Mon Sep 03, 2012 2:36 pm

Much thanks

Subject: Re: Ezrachek RankUp Wed Sep 05, 2012 11:27 pm

Thread to be Evaluated: Rebellion (Solo)

Subject: Re: Ezrachek RankUp Mon Sep 17, 2012 12:52 pm

Rebellion [5/10]

Another late review *cracks whip on Mods* None the less on with the show.

Quote :: The cool breeze rolled in through the window that was open in Ezrachek’s window.

For a moment I thought I misread this, but yes first sentence was mangled. Bad start, but seems a rather quick recovery. Things heat up and the story takes off. As much as I liked the picture it brings an odd point. You first depict Rawlen's power a molten metal, then it's flames like the picture. I wonder if the picture came second after you'd started the thread. In the end I figured it was lava like and the fire was non existent. Congratz on finishing him without releasing. Lucky he didn't crush ya.

Subject: Re: Ezrachek RankUp Mon Sep 17, 2012 3:54 pm

Lmao yeah, and just for clarification, the picture was the actual release... His blade bursts into flames as it heats up and eventually turns to a melted state, thanks for the eval! Much appreciated Smile

Subject: Re: Ezrachek RankUp Wed Sep 19, 2012 11:05 pm

Thread to be evaluated (Finally): Sanctuary [CB]

Induction to Squad 2

Subject: Re: Ezrachek RankUp Mon Oct 08, 2012 12:03 am

Sanctuary 7/10 good post length and content if a bit uninspired and drawn out, it may be 3 pages but nothing really happens. All the interesting stuff that really happens was introduced by Mr. Arawn. BTW if he's stretching it out he's waiting for you to do something productive :p

Induction to Squad 2 3/10 not much really happening there, its short and sweet, sort of a multi-introduction thread.

Subject: Re: Ezrachek RankUp Sun Oct 21, 2012 8:57 pm

Thread(s) to be evaluated: Target Complications

Subject: Re: Ezrachek RankUp Sun Oct 21, 2012 11:31 pm

Target Complications [3/10]

Of all things this thread had it was the paradox that stood out the most. This being a spin off from the quincy thread mad it more glaringly obvious. Shiori was sent to kill Ezra, and Ezra was sent to find Shiori. The only reason she found him, was because he was looking for her. The questions you had for each other mirrored my own; "Why Ezra, why Shiori?" Either case things shall unravel in time I hope, but not in the thread. Also unsure of the "swirling blood aura" as well (Arawn recalls the white lotus petals). None the less in the terms of posting you started strong. An eye to detail in sitting at the bar, and the sitting in the tree. Nice setting of a stage, but not so much later.

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