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 Valcier draaktonichi (Hollow/Zanpakuto)

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Statara

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PostSubject: Valcier draaktonichi (Hollow/Zanpakuto)   Valcier draaktonichi (Hollow/Zanpakuto) I_icon_minitimeThu Oct 29, 2009 6:34 pm

Hollow/Zanpakuto
Name as Hollow: Valcier draaktonichi
Age in life: 8
Age in death: 8
Age as Hollow: 20
Length as Hollow: 8ft
Weight as Hollow: Determined by ability
Height (when standing): 8ft 10"

Name as Zanpakuto: ???
(Statara does not currently know the name of her zanpakuto)
Length of Blade: 3ft
Weight as zanpakuto: 8kg

Biography:

In a complicated event while eating a soul reaper and accidentally a human Valcier was merged with the spirit of that shinigamis zanpakuto, Resulting in an unstable and strange blade with perculiar abilities.
As a zanpakuto, already Valcier has merged and dominated the soul previously inhabitating the blade.
As a hollow Valcier has in incredible lust for power and dominance over other creatures, including its weilder. As a zanpakuto, valcier is controlled by Statara.

When in hollow form, (technecally an adjuchas) Valcier is an incredibly intelligent force capable of generating a cero from anywhere around him where there are spirit particles, as a hollow in the real world he relentlessly and mercilessly destroyed the limbs of his foes using there own spirit energy before devouring the helpless remains.
Unfortunately Valcier lost all physical form during his destruction as a result he cannot exist outside of the zanpakuto or the mind of its user.
Valcier seeks dominance of Statara so that he can once again have a presence in the universe.

Other than the power and dynamic summoning of cero's, Valcier has the ability to alter his weight in away way he see's fit, lightening his body to the consistency of gas so that he can become lighter than air, or solidifying and hardening his body to such an extent he is unmovable and unvulnerable.

Appearance:

Out of battle when a hollow Valcier was a long silver snake with thick black scales that grow duller as its weight lightens until a whispery white.
When in adjuchas form Valciers Limbs come out of its body, bloody glowing eyes widening apart on dark grey stalks, standing on his hind legs it begins to resemble human form, a clear sign of its nearing the vastro lorde stage of a hollows life. On the end of his long boney arms are a set of dainting black claws, seemingly drenched white blood.

Points assignment:
As a zanpakuto and accompanyment of Statara, Valcier draaktonichis abilities are the same as Stataras, but intelligence stat points are swapped with speed stat points.
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PostSubject: Re: Valcier draaktonichi (Hollow/Zanpakuto)   Valcier draaktonichi (Hollow/Zanpakuto) I_icon_minitimeThu Oct 29, 2009 8:01 pm

hmm...i dunno what the other mods/admins think...but i'm not too clear on your Zanpakuto/Hollow thing. could you explain in more detail? also your plans for it? we don't want anyone to be overpowered.

of course, if i'm the only one that feels this way, then your character will be approved. but for now, you get the

*PATENT PENDING* stamp
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PostSubject: Re: Valcier draaktonichi (Hollow/Zanpakuto)   Valcier draaktonichi (Hollow/Zanpakuto) I_icon_minitimeThu Oct 29, 2009 8:20 pm

the futurure plans? I LIKe to keep surprises but i understand where your coming from, its technically not overpowering because it only actually exists within the zanpakuto and statara, its kind of like the visard, but for the zanpakuto rather than the character, and its status point attributes are the same as stataras, but speed is exchanged with intelligence.
Basically this character is a hollow.
but within stataras zanpakuto,
It needs work i know, but its getting there,
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PostSubject: Re: Valcier draaktonichi (Hollow/Zanpakuto)   Valcier draaktonichi (Hollow/Zanpakuto) I_icon_minitimeThu Oct 29, 2009 8:36 pm

right, well, i'd still rather at least one other mod/admin looks at your application- also, you're still missing your stat point attributes, so put 'em in Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Valcier draaktonichi (Hollow/Zanpakuto)   Valcier draaktonichi (Hollow/Zanpakuto) I_icon_minitimeThu Oct 29, 2009 10:15 pm

That sounds very familiar... I had a character once named Kesha, he was possessed by a hollow... The soul society trapped it within an empty sword and allowed him to use it as a zanpakuto... don't ask why... I was loose with rules, but it was cool... (On dif site of course...)
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PostSubject: Re: Valcier draaktonichi (Hollow/Zanpakuto)   Valcier draaktonichi (Hollow/Zanpakuto) I_icon_minitimeFri Oct 30, 2009 7:31 am

ummm, we've never had a hollow Zanpaktou before so i'm not really sure how judge it but i doubt you'll make it overpowered and it looks all pretty much fine, erm only issue i have is where the Zanpaktou - 'solidifying and hardening his body to such an extent he is unmovable and unvulnerable. ' is that completely unvulnerable or is there like a limit for damage it can take? and does that mean even Statara can't move it?
lol sorry if thats just my misunderstanding because other than that i'd say approved Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Valcier draaktonichi (Hollow/Zanpakuto)   Valcier draaktonichi (Hollow/Zanpakuto) I_icon_minitimeFri Oct 30, 2009 8:41 pm

no really people, i ask fpr these questions, i need to know what needs altering and such


marlamin, effectively thats it, its a hollow sealed within a zanpakuto

Kaiyo, you understand practically right, but i think i meant tge actual hollow in its hollow form has that ability, rather than the zanpakuto

ayame, ive said its stat points will remain the same and grow with stataras.
The reason for this is that this character, is only capable of fightingstatara, as hollow ichigo is only capable of fighting normal ichigo within his head. Same principles but through the zanpakuto, rather than in ichigos head.
if he had stat points separate, hed never grow, because like hollow ichigo, (the white ichigo) he only appears occasionally. It might be best that he doesnt have stat points, after all, he only fights my chracter internally though.
statatas zanpakuto's abilities are undecided until shes elligible for them, but they are different from this hollow because the zanpakuto is a merge of two souls.
I have, decided my zanpakutos released ability though, but statara cant release anyway.


Also, queation, if somehow, far later in the story, valcier is freed from the zanpakuto, does he gave to start with the stat points of a starter character? Among the depths of full powered characters? If i was a year into this, and the hollow is freed, theres no point in fighting statara because the points difference will make him weaker in every aspect and he wont have any abilities.


Sorry, im full of questions and have a habit of coming up with some way to be awkward
but i mean when a character comes into the real bleach story late, thy dont start without powers or abilities. Please could someone think of a solution.
Tough i feel i havent written this very well so i might have confused you all :s
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PostSubject: Re: Valcier draaktonichi (Hollow/Zanpakuto)   Valcier draaktonichi (Hollow/Zanpakuto) I_icon_minitimeFri Oct 30, 2009 8:50 pm

Well seeing as you confirmed it the big NO NO is the invulnerability. I dont care of god joined the forum no one is Invulnerable without some major stat difference between the two char (see Kenpachi VS Ichigo fight) .

HOWEVER! That aside you be good to go as far as i'm concerned. In essence this Hollow with be a Non-Player Character (NPC)?
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PostSubject: Re: Valcier draaktonichi (Hollow/Zanpakuto)   Valcier draaktonichi (Hollow/Zanpakuto) I_icon_minitimeFri Oct 30, 2009 8:53 pm

as for your question erm i don't think so, if you'd had the Zapaktou and he'd gained the same stat points as you then he'd be allowed to start with those points.
Working under the assumption here that you'd later want to rp as that hollow as well O.o But if you were planning on doing that you'd have to make a proper hollow character app obviously but he'd be starting with Statara's stat points.

i think what i just said made sense but i have my doubts Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Valcier draaktonichi (Hollow/Zanpakuto)   Valcier draaktonichi (Hollow/Zanpakuto) I_icon_minitimeFri Oct 30, 2009 9:01 pm

What she means is, dont abuse this. Kaiyo wants you to know that this Hollow can keep the same stats as yer Shinigami char HOWEVER i feel that when they split it should nbe a percentage (based on the storyline involved which i would like run by the staff when the time comes) for when the split happens.
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PostSubject: Re: Valcier draaktonichi (Hollow/Zanpakuto)   Valcier draaktonichi (Hollow/Zanpakuto) I_icon_minitimeFri Oct 30, 2009 9:46 pm

that all sounds true and fair, and kaiyo that is correct. Smile and yeah, npc. Thats what i was lookong for

and i deliberately made flaws on his power here, his strengh and defencive capabilities change with his weight, stronger and harder as he gets heavier and slower, and weaker and lighter with faster.
Effectively there are two stentghs, be almost idestructable,, but unable to move and be open to attacks and kidou spells that may be strong enough to cause harm.
The other side of the spectrum is a as cinsistency, in which a swprd will pass through him like air, however he cant attack, but he can move very quickly.
As for the secret toefeating him, this would be down to timing. Get him during hos transition from one to the other,
Thinkong bout this principle, there are many dofferent shades of grey, hitting him at the right time between changes will cause massive damage.
Of course a faster character will be able to attack during these changes much easilier.

ive effectively revealed the twist of the battle here, but it needs explaining.
ofcourse i didnt think this mattered too much, because until ive made him a normal hollow after the split, he can only fight statara, and the zanpakutos original bieng.
i think i put it all understandably, but yeah. Further questions?
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PostSubject: Re: Valcier draaktonichi (Hollow/Zanpakuto)   Valcier draaktonichi (Hollow/Zanpakuto) I_icon_minitimeFri Nov 06, 2009 4:54 pm

can someone confirm/reject officially please?
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PostSubject: Re: Valcier draaktonichi (Hollow/Zanpakuto)   Valcier draaktonichi (Hollow/Zanpakuto) I_icon_minitimeFri Nov 06, 2009 4:58 pm

erm okay maybe a bit more discussion for when the split happens but so we don't hold things up for now
APPROVED
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