Isaac Kennedy
Number of Posts : 65
Age : 32
Quote : “When lost in utter darkness, there is nothing left but forward.”
Registration Date : 2011-06-06
 |  Subject: Vectors Rank Up  Wed Aug 17, 2011 12:00 am | |
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Arawn
Number of Posts : 3440
Age : 43
Location : Here, but there
Job/Interests : Anything, but not everything
Quote : You were close, but I was right
Registration Date : 2010-06-23
| | Subject: Re: Vectors Rank Up Wed Aug 17, 2011 12:39 pm | |
| You forgot to finish filling in the application, thought this was a WIP. Read threads and then checked profile to see rank and what not.
Field Experience: You posting fluctuated from short to medium. I noticed something minor. You don't use capital letters when your character speaks. Not just once, almost all the time. It's kinda odd. That aside it's a short thread. You get in, you get out. 3/10
Contracted murder: Much longer, and the same minor caps with speech. Also another thing I notice. Your character talks about getting paid way too often. Yes, he's an assassin, but constantly telling everyone is hardly assassin behavior. 3/10 | |
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