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 Mejor Diablo - Bount - WIP

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PostSubject: Mejor Diablo - Bount - WIP   Mejor Diablo - Bount - WIP I_icon_minitimeMon Jul 25, 2011 9:40 pm

Bount



Name: Mejor Diablo


Age: 233. Appears to be 26.


Birthplace: Atlanta Georgia, USA.


Looks: Mejor is a slender, fairly muscular male Bount. He has fairly short, messy black hair, white skin, and green eyes. He is quite short, and appears to be 5'6 & 1/2. His facial expression rarely changes, and he is almost always frowning.

He wears a white jacket, with a black sash, and his collar is rather high. Also his sleeves hang below his hands, but when he's fighting, his sleeve is rolled up to his elbows. He has white pants and shoes, making everything seem white.


Personality: Mejor is a very cold, callous, dispassionate figure, and is rather aloof, brooding, and indifferent, willing to harm both his comrades and enemies should they ever get in his way. His cold demeanor allows him to stay completely calm and in control in most situations, and he is not easily surprised or caught off-guard. Mejor is also highly perceptive, cunning, and analytical.


Gender: Male


Occupation: N/A


Special Characteristics: N/A


Race: White



Doll Name: Vampiro. It's release phrase is, "Show your fangs, Vampiro".


Doll Description: Vampiro, is a giant bat. It is male, and also speaks as most dolls do. It's body is almost the size of a human, and it's wings are nearly twice the size of his body. When sealed, it is kept as a neckless on Mejor. The neckless is made of gold, and holds a badge that has Vampiro within it.



Doll Powers: Shadow.


Steel Wings- It's wings are strong as steel. It can't break, but if the attack is strong enough, it'll leave a cut on it's wings. However, the wings does not effect it's speed any way whatsoever.

Laser Beam- It shoots a laser out of its mouth. It is black with red trims.

Invisibility- It turns invisble on command if there is a shadow or darkness. It turns completley invisible, but there is a very dark burst of shadows where it turns invisible.



Stats:


Spirit Power: 7

Speed: 23

Fighting skill: 15

Intelligence: 15



History: He was born shortly after the Revolutionary War. His dad died during the war, and his mom died giving birth. So he lived in an orphanage for his first five or six years. After that, he wandered around the streets hopless. He wasn't excepted by others, because he was a Bount.

He devoured souls nearly everyday. About once a year, he would eat human souls. He would eat them everyday because they increased his powers, but it's against the Bount's rules.

Several decades after he stopped aging, he was discovered by the other Bounts. He left with them, and lived in the Bount mansion. He was finally excepted. He hoped him and the others would overthrow the Soul Society, because they are the ones who ruined their lives.


Role Playing Sample: It was a dark night, and the moon was out. Taking a stroll to devour some souls, he was stopped by a pathetic Shinigami, who probably was a Recruit or a lower rank. "Stop right there", the Shinigami said. The Shinigami drew his sword. "Your such a fool. You think a mere, pathetic Shinigami can take on a Bount? Now show your fangs, Vampiro", Mejor said. A dark shadow appeared, circling around Mejor. Then suddenly, the shadow came together and formed a giant bat.

"My name is Mejor Diablo. Remember it.", Mejor said. The Shinigami charged. Vampiro disappeared into the darkness, and suddenly there was a cut on the Shinigami. The Shinigami wasn't a complete fool, and attacked the closest spot Vampiro could've moved. Vampiro blocked his blade with his wing, and he was now visible. He moved his wing knocking his blade out of his hand. Vampiro, echoing an evil laugh, flew past the Shinigami and blood gashed out of the fool.

"What you should've done is flee, and return with back up. Instead, you decided to die", Mejor said. Vampiro returned. Now, Mejor devoured his soul. "Shingami are such a delicious appetite. I am so lucky I ran into a fool like him", Mejor said. He returned to the mansion, stuffed with a fantastic meal.


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PostSubject: Re: Mejor Diablo - Bount - WIP   Mejor Diablo - Bount - WIP I_icon_minitimeTue Jul 26, 2011 6:35 pm

Okay, the only real issues with your character are around the abilities/powers.

1. We like for all abilities to come with name. Though your character does not have to shout out the technique IC. It'll help others understand what you intend to do so they can reply accordingly.

2. You are a Bount, therefore you and your doll have no access to hollow techniques or traits (e.g. Cero and Hierro).

3. Your powers, though to the point, need to be more descriptive. For instance, your steel wings, Is there a post limit to how long they can remain hard like steel? Do they also slow down the doll when activated? Same thing with the invisibility. How long can it sustain being invisible? And is it completely invisible, or does it just bend light and can be relatively seen with movement?

- We try to keep characters as balanced as possible

Those are really the things that I see the most right now. As of this moment. Approval is pending until revisions are seen.
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