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frost
Number of Posts : 232
Age : 33
Location : i am here, right here! cant you see me?! im the one looking throught the glass of the little house
Quote : if life it mans made heaven the i never want to go to what we belive hell would be.
Registration Date : 2010-06-01
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Arawn
Number of Posts : 3440
Age : 43
Location : Here, but there
Job/Interests : Anything, but not everything
Quote : You were close, but I was right
Registration Date : 2010-06-23
| | Subject: Re: Frost's Rank Up thread Wed Jun 01, 2011 5:17 pm | |
| I'd say slap a WIP in the title to avoid premature judgments. As it stands finish the WIP threads. Needs more solo & FCT/EFT. Arawn out. | |
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Arawn
Number of Posts : 3440
Age : 43
Location : Here, but there
Job/Interests : Anything, but not everything
Quote : You were close, but I was right
Registration Date : 2010-06-23
| | Subject: Re: Frost's Rank Up thread Mon Aug 29, 2011 3:14 am | |
| Training under the moonlight: [3/10]
It's short and simple. Kuro pushing herself and some thoughts that drive her. Nothing flashy, but descriptive enough you feel like you're jogging if not seeing it in your head. | |
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Bishamon Saitou
Number of Posts : 482
Age : 29
Location : Anywhere and everywhere
Job/Interests : stuff, and other stuff...
Quote : Ah swords...natures knives.
Registration Date : 2011-06-03
| | Subject: Re: Frost's Rank Up thread Sat Sep 03, 2011 7:50 pm | |
| Normal highschool for a normal Superhuman: 4/10
The thread on a whole was quite entertaining; not sure if it was actually finished or not...Anyway, your post lengths were decent, so no real problems, there was the odd grammar and spelling mistakes, but again, not much of a problem so could be better, but it was still good, none the less. Good work.
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frost
Number of Posts : 232
Age : 33
Location : i am here, right here! cant you see me?! im the one looking throught the glass of the little house
Quote : if life it mans made heaven the i never want to go to what we belive hell would be.
Registration Date : 2010-06-01
| | Subject: Re: Frost's Rank Up thread Thu Sep 15, 2011 3:03 pm | |
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Bishamon Saitou
Number of Posts : 482
Age : 29
Location : Anywhere and everywhere
Job/Interests : stuff, and other stuff...
Quote : Ah swords...natures knives.
Registration Date : 2011-06-03
| | Subject: Re: Frost's Rank Up thread Thu Sep 15, 2011 3:45 pm | |
| Wrong place, wrong time: 5/10
Very good thread, entertaining, and quite funny. The overall thread length could have been a tad longer, but still a decent length. No complaint about your post lengths. So yeah, a good solid thread, good work.
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Bishamon Saitou
Number of Posts : 482
Age : 29
Location : Anywhere and everywhere
Job/Interests : stuff, and other stuff...
Quote : Ah swords...natures knives.
Registration Date : 2011-06-03
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frost
Number of Posts : 232
Age : 33
Location : i am here, right here! cant you see me?! im the one looking throught the glass of the little house
Quote : if life it mans made heaven the i never want to go to what we belive hell would be.
Registration Date : 2010-06-01
| | Subject: Re: Frost's Rank Up thread Wed Jan 18, 2012 5:33 pm | |
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Arawn
Number of Posts : 3440
Age : 43
Location : Here, but there
Job/Interests : Anything, but not everything
Quote : You were close, but I was right
Registration Date : 2010-06-23
| | Subject: Re: Frost's Rank Up thread Wed Jan 18, 2012 6:14 pm | |
| Let's see who's better: [3/10]
Rather short and somewhat flat. A 2.5, but I rounded to the 3. Might have been longer if Cruff didn't drift into the sunset. Although he did come back only to vanish once again. Odd fellow.
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| | Subject: Re: Frost's Rank Up thread | |
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I did spot a few things, like the lack of full stops in your posts. Also be careful when your closing your speech, I saw it a few times; you didn't leave a gap between the end of your quotation mark, and the next word, which made it hard to know what was speech and what wasn't. But apart from that it was pretty good.
