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With the Rebel Faction defeated, a new age of peace arises within the Soul Society... but for how long? A Blood War could be just around the corner.
 
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Shinji Hirako

Shinji Hirako


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Number of Posts : 134
Age : 30
Location : With your Mother
Quote : DONT GAIN THE WORLD AND LOSE YOUR SOUL WISDOM IS BETTER THAN SILVER&GOLD
Registration Date : 2010-06-02

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PostSubject: Rank Up   Rank Up I_icon_minitimeSat Jun 12, 2010 9:44 pm

Character Name: Shinji Asakura
Username: Shinji Hirako
Current Rank/Requested: (1/2)
Solo Character Development Thread Links:
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https://thebleachworld.darkbb.com/kidou-training-f31/kido-training-solo-t1467.htm


RolePlaying With Others Thread Links:
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https://thebleachworld.darkbb.com/squad-10-f19/new-recruits-are-like-rough-diamonds-shinji-t1384.htm
https://thebleachworld.darkbb.com/the-sparring-grounds-f32/shinji-training-with-leden-t1417.htm
https://thebleachworld.darkbb.com/karakura-town-f21/the-corner-shop-shinji-and-others-ask-os-if-you-want-to-join-t1466.htm#10817
https://thebleachworld.darkbb.com/squad-headquarters-f14/shinigami-men-s-association-open-to-all-male-shini-t1404.htm
https://thebleachworld.darkbb.com/karakura-town-f21/sneak-away-to-the-real-worlddenno-t1400.htm

Friendly Combat Training Thread Links:
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https://thebleachworld.darkbb.com/the-sparring-grounds-f32/trainingri-o-nocht-t1367.htm
https://thebleachworld.darkbb.com/the-sparring-grounds-f32/lookin-for-a-challenge-shinji-please-t1381.htm

Enemy Fighting Thread Links:
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Mission Thread Links:
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https://thebleachworld.darkbb.com/general-role-play-f29/the-blocked-gates-pre-determined-participants-only-t1463.htm#10833


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Darkness

Darkness


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Number of Posts : 587
Age : 28
Location : The Gateway to the West
Job/Interests : Student/Aerospace Engineer
Quote : *Artemis has been kicked by Darkness
Registration Date : 2010-03-24

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PostSubject: Re: Rank Up   Rank Up I_icon_minitimeSat Jun 12, 2010 10:08 pm

Solo Character Development Thread Links:
1 -> Denied, I wont take this one into account as it was a total rip off of a canon encounter
2 -> Denied as there was no purpose to this thread...

RolePlaying With Others Thread Links:
1 -> Approved
2 -> Approved
3 -> Approved

Friendly Combat Training Thread Links:
1 -> Approved
2 -> Approved

Enemy Fighting Thread Links:
1 -> Denied, If you took on a Menos, you would be obliterated

I would say i will not approve this app, until you submit an other solo thread at least 200 words long at least...
then i would MABYE approve this rank up app and in order for you to win my vote in the future i expect better post quality...
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Shinji Hirako

Shinji Hirako


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Number of Posts : 134
Age : 30
Location : With your Mother
Quote : DONT GAIN THE WORLD AND LOSE YOUR SOUL WISDOM IS BETTER THAN SILVER&GOLD
Registration Date : 2010-06-02

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PostSubject: Re: Rank Up   Rank Up I_icon_minitimeWed Jun 16, 2010 1:32 pm

changed it
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Kuro

Kuro


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Number of Posts : 1117
Age : 35
Location : where indeed :/........
Job/Interests : Plant worker/writing
Quote : Ah ah ah, can't touch me
Registration Date : 2009-06-20

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PostSubject: Re: Rank Up   Rank Up I_icon_minitimeThu Jun 17, 2010 9:51 am

The mission thread doesn't really count for much yet. That'll be more helpful in your next app. And you put a link to the same "roleplaying with others" thread twice. Watch out for mistakes like that.

Even with eliminating those two, you have added enough links to meet Darkness's request, so I'll say approved. But I agree with Darkness. From this point on, it's going to get harder. We'll need to see better quality in the future for further rank ups.

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Darkness

Darkness


Male
Number of Posts : 587
Age : 28
Location : The Gateway to the West
Job/Interests : Student/Aerospace Engineer
Quote : *Artemis has been kicked by Darkness
Registration Date : 2010-03-24

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PostSubject: Re: Rank Up   Rank Up I_icon_minitimeThu Jun 17, 2010 6:42 pm

Ehh... Next time, dont bug me about it and i will ninja mod it... like i always do

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Kaiyo
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Kaiyo


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Number of Posts : 2748
Age : 31
Location : The Verse
Quote : Pain is weakness leaving the body
Registration Date : 2009-05-18

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PostSubject: Re: Rank Up   Rank Up I_icon_minitimeFri Jun 18, 2010 5:21 pm

Erm i'll add an admin approval if you start running your posts through word or something, because the spelling and Grammar really needs some work.

So on that condition (I will be checking Razz )

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