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Elfen

Elfen


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Number of Posts : 3
Age : 30
Registration Date : 2010-05-17

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PostSubject: Elfen Corpur (Shinigami)   Elfen Corpur (Shinigami) I_icon_minitimeMon May 17, 2010 5:56 pm

Basic Information

Name: Elfen Corpur

Age: 16, true age, 133

Height: 5feet 9 inches

Weight: 119 pounds

Personality: A on-going active male (Homosxual) Whos social tries to get along, shows no emotions, bundles what he feels up and conceals them. A nature loving person who loves cute things. People all ways out casted him from everything. The only people who really accepted him where like people himself. Quite, wild, and rumbuxieous. He loves the adventerous side in people and a unorthadox lust for the thrill of danger and blood. The morninings keep him quite from the world, but as the day continues his act changes to more insane like features and a mind that only a superb killing machine would only have.

Apperance: A firm 5'9'' elfish structure with innocent saphire blue eyes that change with the weather into shades of blue and green. With brown-blonde hair licking his head. A face that was swept and kissed by the heavanly wind its self, so pure and untouched. His hair bleached from the sun deepened his eyes deepth and sincerity to forgive. A person who doesnt look good in bright colors allways wearing black, being an outcast of other `normal people`

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Spirit power:13

Speed: 17

Intelligence: 17

Fighting skill: 13

History: AS the human life went, he was ditched by his two parents and was sent to a foster care. The dad, abused, sexual abused me when i was 5 years of age every week when everyone else went for there stroll adn him staying with the god damned dad. When the mom founded out, seh was as worst as the dad, but only cared for the money involved with me. After 4 more years of abuse, the CPS found out adn took me awat to a better family. The family was middle-high class, tried to spoil me. In the grade school people teased him and bullied him for a while, till anger fumed out and nearly killed on of the young students by strangling the boy with a rope. Cut markes coverd the boy and had to go to the hospital. After that inncident he went to a mental hospital. There he began to sense and see strange orthadox things. He tried to tell the nurses but only druged him up longer.

After a year of it and kept his mouth shut he went back to school and did better than average. Guess the insanity opened my eyes further. He made a couple of close friends, but in dismay.. they vanished.

In high school on his junior year. A inncindent happened to his step family. They guessed it was some terroist bomb attack, but he knew what it really was, a huge besat with a barbed white tail, a white mask similar to a theater sinewith a black tear bellow one eye socket. A human spirit like being came and slayed teh monster but before he appeared, the monster attacked him and left his in disinergrating state. He tehn relized he was dead and was a spirit. The spirit in a black komono pressed the end of teh sheath to my head and mysteriously, ended up in a cramped old timed town.

As the life in the city that was still unknown to him, he picked up some abilities of stealth, every night he went in and stole anything he could to survive. He never got caught except once.. by a captin. As I captured a subject taunting and flashing his new athority of entering the Seireitei and becoming a shinigami. He was weak. The biy captured him with easy and began to torture him slowly(not gonna give deatails, if did, to long) trying to squeeze information on how he got out of the hell whole of the town. Then as one of the captins came strolling bye, she quickly knew what was going on and caught me and questioned what i was doing, i made up some lame exuse and the captin introduced her self as 2nd squad captin.

Later on after the run in, she took me in and trained me for 20 years, ways of stealth and vigorous torture, she then alowed me to enter teh Acadamy to achive in becoming a soul reaper.

Roleplay Sample:

Renji walked down the hallway with me, his so called beast friend by his side, a calm expression on his face, He crossed his hands over his chest and laughed "What do you think? Want to go out for dinner tonight?"

"Well I would love to but.. Captin Hitsugaya has me doing some weird stuff." A sigh in dissapointment rang out, as he slowly moved his body to the shaded tree, rubbing his temples.

"Work? He's too busy hanging with his new girlfriend to do his own work huh?" Renji laughed, sitting beside his friend before nudging him. "What does he have you doing?"

"Well he wants me to go talk to Kurotsuchi-sama.. well I can't say or I'll get in trouble. And to truth be told, I'm kind of afraid of him." I looked down poking my two index fingers together. "And what about him having a girlfriend, i didn't hear nothign about that?"

Renji laughed lightly before placing his arm over my shoulder. "No worries! I'll be right by you when you talk to Kurotsuchi!" Renji's voice was joyful as he looked as his friend "And yeah, he's with Amai. The girl from squad 12."

"Oh yeah, well she's kind of scary when she gets to work, and the time it is right now.. well she's busy and all." A quick stutter conjured through the voice of the young shinigami. "Well ok!" A proud smirk crept on his face as he got up and pointed his finger at the 12 division location. "Lets go!"

"That's the spirit!" Renji jumped up and grabbed me by my wrist and ran off toward the barracks of the 12 division, his pace quick but graceful as they sped off and through the seiritei toward the barracks.

As his movement swept me across the field I tumbled on my feet tripping flat on my face as a discombombulated look spreaded on my face as I looked around and saw a pink kid who was laying on the ground sat up. "Oh hey Yachiru-san!"

"Elfen-kun! I was looking for you Come paly with me, please, please." The entergetic girl bounced up and down making my head hurt more. And with a last, "Pleeeaaassseee!! from her I sighed and looked down at her innocently. "Maybe later ok." A small chuckle ran from my mouth.

"Aww, everyone all ways busy." She pouted and sadly walked away, probally going to annoy some one else.

"Come on Yachiru. He has to work. He'll play later. I promise ya. Okay?" Renji said to the child-like vice captain, hoping she would not attack him as he smirked to himself

As the young girl was still walking away, she glanced back at the older male and with watery eyes she sniffled and gloomed away. "I feel bad for her when she does that." I said sincerly. "I mean she's just a child still. She got stripped from her child hood, that's sad to me." I got up and began to walk to the barracks.

Renji walked over to Yachiru and dropped a bag of candy infront of her before jogging to catch back up with me. "No worries. She'll be fine. Let's get to the barracks quick."

Yachiru's eye's widen heavily as she dove in the bag of sweets and yelled back to teh older male. "Thanks juu Reddy!" Her mouth full of sweets she couldn't talk. "Phew we're here." As I gazzed upon the barracks with shivers crawling down my spine.

Renji placed his hands on my shoulder, laughing lightly and nodding a bit. "I'm here man. No worries right?" Renji gave me a thumbs up as he smiled lightly at me.

A small laugh escaped as I opened the doors as Kurotsuchi-sama yelled out, "Hurry up and get in, don't let any sunlight in." A horrible retort rang in a shrill hiss at the two. As we walked in he blabed about his experiment. "This cant function right in sunlight." And on and on.

REnji nudged me and laughed. He looked st Kurotsuchi walked in behind me, shaking his head lightly as he looked at the experiment. He flinched at the look of it, realizing it was one of his weird creations.


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Kaiyo
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Number of Posts : 2748
Age : 30
Location : The Verse
Quote : Pain is weakness leaving the body
Registration Date : 2009-05-18

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PostSubject: Re: Elfen Corpur (Shinigami)   Elfen Corpur (Shinigami) I_icon_minitimeMon May 17, 2010 5:59 pm

Hey there ^_^
Please can you edit your app so it follows our template-->
Shinigami Template
thanks Smile
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Elfen

Elfen


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Number of Posts : 3
Age : 30
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PostSubject: Re: Elfen Corpur (Shinigami)   Elfen Corpur (Shinigami) I_icon_minitimeMon May 17, 2010 6:07 pm

Ok i did :/
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Kaiyo
Soul Society Faction Leader
Kaiyo


Female
Number of Posts : 2748
Age : 30
Location : The Verse
Quote : Pain is weakness leaving the body
Registration Date : 2009-05-18

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PostSubject: Re: Elfen Corpur (Shinigami)   Elfen Corpur (Shinigami) I_icon_minitimeMon May 17, 2010 6:09 pm

:S sorry for the hassle here, but once you sort this final part it'll all be accepted: all shinigami start as rank one, which means you need to edit your history so that your just entering the shinigami academy please Smile
As a side note, you've kind of written in third and 1st person, we do write in 3rd person here, but your encouraged to write characters thoughts in 1st person obviously Smile
Apologies for the list of edits >.<
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PostSubject: Re: Elfen Corpur (Shinigami)   Elfen Corpur (Shinigami) I_icon_minitimeMon May 17, 2010 6:13 pm

Yeah, for the rp sample i kinda got confused, and my etyes where cramping so i kinda forgot to do 3rd person, but in post i can take my time adn actually do it right, oh and why dont you make a chat so other ppl can talk freely on it and all
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Kaiyo


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Number of Posts : 2748
Age : 30
Location : The Verse
Quote : Pain is weakness leaving the body
Registration Date : 2009-05-18

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PostSubject: Re: Elfen Corpur (Shinigami)   Elfen Corpur (Shinigami) I_icon_minitimeMon May 17, 2010 6:16 pm

lol okay then; thanks!

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