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Name: Nathan Wallace
Alias: 47 or Claus


Age: 21

Birthplace: Kajinko No meni, A small settlement north of Karakura town.

Looks:
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Personality:
Nathan may seem like a nice, kind and caring male, well mannered because
of how he was raised, a very particular kind of Etiquette but because
he is a hit-man whose existence is well known yet no one has met him, he
is without sympathy or Emotion and shows sometimes that he is a firm
believer in the concept of there being life after death. Around
colleagues, Strangers, and even people he respects, he doesn't really
show how he is feeling or any sign of what he is thinking and even
people who have known him for long periods of time feel he is an
unpredictable type of man. Nathan does speak with many people but he
loves competing with other spiritually aware Humans or "Bounts" though
he does use Conversation as a last resort or When it is truly necessary.
Nathan has the weirdest way of finding himself in troublesome
situations. Nathan isn't exactly the calmest person in the world either,
especially with Dame-ouji provoking him every time he seems to act too
"soft" in a crowd. But without Dame's constant undermining words Nathan
easily gets aggravated, when pushed a little he tries to make the pusher
uncomfortable in any way possible, he resorts to violence only when he
has to except when he is ordered or payed to kill someone. He doesn't
mind a debate or people having their own opinions, he just hates when
people act like an ass towards him without reason and tells them off
without fear of getting his hands dirty. Which also means that he is
brutally honest. At this point in his life if he is given a good reason
to protect something. . . He doesn't. He lost all hope and reason for
saving anything precious to or not to him after his fathers death.
Nathan has a habbit of doing things the hard way and he is always in it
for the long run, he picks out one weakness in his opponent in any way
possible (it doesn't matter if it is either a sport, a fight, a game
etc.) and he picks at it until his opponent is rendered useless before
him and continues to do so in a cold demeanor. Nathan is extremely
stubborn, so stubborn to the point where it will cause her to not back
down from a challenge No matter how demeaning it is, even if it means to
lose the game/challenge/fight it would be his death. The concept of
death being something that puts your mind to sleep permanently makes
Nathan sometimes eager to experience it, or at least that was the case
before he learned about shinigami which is the reason he holds a very
deep hatred for their existence. .

Nathan shows that he is quite
an optimistic person which is one of the many strengths of his
personality. Another strength is his control over what he does Besides
being easily angered by anything and cunning in battle situations not
dropping focus from his initial targets. Nathan can easily be influenced
by anyone else interested and willing to speak about the Human anatomy.
The fact that the hardest part in killing a human is actually killing a
human (Because Human's are structurally built to last) filled Nathans
head up long ago with questions about what created
Humans/Shinigami/Hollows etc.. Another strength in his personality is
being his own type of Genius. Once in a while, Nathan see's someone who
does something so well in a way he cannot possibly fathom, and the fact
that him being one of those type's of people is what makes him
interested in living a bit longer to see how far his mind can go. His
ability to read people (Persona wise) is astounding though he himself
fails to realize how astounding it is, he think's that anyone can easily
read a person just by watching their movements for a few seconds. He
also has this picture perfect memory, he can never forget a face, place
or object he crossed before.

Gender: Manly man.

Occupation: He is a unlicensed Surgeon.

Special Characteristics: He is an excellent marksman.

Race: Japanese.

Doll Name: dame-ouji (Useless Prince)

Doll Description:
His medium is a tattoo on Nathans back.

- When Manifested, He shoots from Nathans' Body as opposed from his shadow
which he is sealed in. The process of him manifesting, requires him to
cover Nathans' entire body as Pitch black Reiatsu. Then he shoots off of
his body and becomes a Large black Blob, with white glowing eyes in the
middle of the upper half of the Blob. This Blob is a gathering of
Reiatsu that instead of having the properties of Reiatsu, is more like a
sticky slimy substance.

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The doll is silent and doesn't say anything,
but he does tend to act on his own during Moments Nathan hesitates.

Doll Element: Reiatsu.

None of these powers can be used Back to back/With another one. Only one can be used per 6 posts except for the first one which is a passive ability.

First Power:
Name: Energy channel
Description: This passive ability enables Nathan to channel his Reiatsu through any weapon or item. This makes ti so that a simple sword can actually effect a shinigami. Objects and weapons effected by this remain effected even after contact is dropped from Nathan unless he so wills it.

Second Power:
Name: Unstable evolution 1
Description: The doll itself can shoot Tendrils and objects that stretch from its body up to 500 meters. Once the sticky black ooze attaches to someone who touches it, it can start spreading on the hosts body to cover them up completely. Each post the spreading doubles until 6 posts later, the host is covered with this sticky black ooze and has their Reiatsu drained from them while they are constricted.

Third Power:
Name: Chaos Control
Desciption: The Doll hardens and compacts all of its reiatsu and strength into a small Wazashi/short katana. This blade is unbreakable and able to cut through Other weapons not enforced with even the slightest bit of reiatsu like butter. This katana does nothing more than that.


Fourth Power:
Name: Unstable evolution Variant
Description: The doll starts vibrating and finally a invisible creates a field with a 200 foot radius that nullifies any lingering reiatsu effect. This means that no one within the field can use an
ability that requires any substance or matter outside of their source
of power. This field isn't visible nor is it detectable and it doesn't
effect other Bounts. . . So if you aren't a bount you are shit out
of luck.
Stats:

Spirit
Power: 10

Speed: 15

Fighting skill: 15

Intelligence: 20



History:
Nathan was born in a district not to far from Karakura town, living in
the area all his life thus far. Her mother a Shinigami and an American,
met Nathans father during a vacation to Japan. Nathans father was born
into a wealthy family that provided shelter and training grounds for
Those looking to brandish their own form of justice (Vigilantes).
Nathans mother and father both acted as Vigilantes for Karakura, His
mother of course needed a Gigai to act as a Vigilante. Their tales of
Heroism inspired even more people to become vigilantes till the point
where everyone wore masks or outfits to disguise themselves just for the
fuck of it. The vigilante shit at first was incredible to Nathans mom
and dad because they were putting away criminals and they were the
center of attention. But that all changed when The Majority of the Town
were Vigilantes. Soon the Mayor enforced the Law, the part where
Vigilantes were illegal, and threatened to put anyone caught being an
astounding citizen and trying to stop a crime without a badge in jail.
Alot of the wanna-be's gave up then. But Nathans parents didn't give a
shit about being locked up. She was a shinigami and he was a bount. (In
secret). They continued doing what they did until they were captured
during a raiding of their house courtesy of the S.W.A.T team. Nathan,
being 15 without knowing what his parents did all this time or knowing
exactly who they were, was put into a foster home. His entire life he
was homeschooled but he learned alot. Like how to live on his own,
something his parents prepared him for ever since he was a little boy.
He escaped the foster home and went back to the house him and his
parents previously lived in. Upon coming home he saw his father on the
ground, bleeding excessively. His back revealed meat and hsi spine,
absent any layers of skin. He was moaning and trying to crawl and Nathan
ran up to him preparing to ask what had happened but soon his fathers'
back turned black and it grew to fill the entire room and surround
Nathan. Nathan was now stuck in a pitch black space without any
knowledge of what was going on. Nathan wasn't the type to cry or ask for
help so he waited for something or someone to appear before him and
enlighten him on the situation. Instead a deep intimidating and mocking
Vocie shouted. "What an amusing man. I can see into your very heart like
I did your father. . . Do you want to die?" The Voice asked. Nathan
didn't respond and only put his hands in his pocket shifting his gaze
from spot to spot looking for the source of the voice. The voice spoke
again "HAHA! What a specimen you are. It seemed where your father has
failed. . . You will not." And finally the darkness surrounding Nathan
forced itself into his body through his mouth. in an instant Nathan was
back in his house, his father's corpse was gone, and he seemed to have
grown in size exponentially. He even felt a bit older, he didn't know
what happened and he didn't know how but he did know that it did happen.


Nathan became a Vigilante himself, after that traumatic
experience. He neer heard from his mother or his father after they were
killed (So he thinks) and he bonded a bit with the Doll inside him.

Role Playing
Sample:
The slithering of steel chains rubbing off against, letting off a faint sound that could be heard by those of sharp senses as a figure paces into the area from the large door. The Church specifically. In his hand was the source of this rasping of metal -- a rosary.

This man dressed up in a lab coat, a black sweater along with khaki pants and black shoes of no noticeable features. Different from the uniform he donned at a time much earlier than this. The style of clothing showing his status as a doctor, as he exerted off a subtle Reiatsu, that of a Quincy's. Carrying the adorned rosary in his hand's grasp as the other cupping two objects, flung the both of them to Hisoka.

One was cylindrical with a long line in the end of it, and the other was a plastic bag with a dark substance inside. The Doctor looked around at all the participants in the room. Apparently as a dealer to the Vaizard leader, whom he regards as a customer of his, he was naturally accustomed to new revelations. All the men gathered in this room displayed a rather interesting trait. They bore the stench of the Shinigami filling in his nostrils, yet they are clothed just as he was.

Fazing away the thought, he gave the slightest of nods to everyone, an acknowledgement of their presence and a declaration of his through an invitation sent out.

"Ossu." He greeted briefly, standing silently by the left-hand seats as he would lay on the most intact of seats, his ears peeled for what would be said, taking into account that the others in the room share the traits of each other, keeping interest especially with the new revelation concerning the apparent leader in the room he singled out.


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PostSubject: Re: F!@$ The shinigami!   F!@$ The shinigami! I_icon_minitimeMon May 10, 2010 12:17 pm

Nicely detailed, but I'm sure the other staff members would want a better rp sample. We'll also need to hear about their opinions on your doll's abilities. I think that third one especially sounds a bit too powerful.
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PostSubject: Re: F!@$ The shinigami!   F!@$ The shinigami! I_icon_minitimeMon May 10, 2010 12:33 pm

For a shikai leveled power, it does seem OP doesnt it. Well perhaps putting it down with the fourth instead and changing the third to something alot less powerful, would that recieve your approval?

As for my RP sample, When I did that I was lazy, so I can edit that right now.
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PostSubject: Re: F!@$ The shinigami!   F!@$ The shinigami! I_icon_minitimeMon May 10, 2010 12:38 pm

Sounds good to me. Very Happy you've designed an interesting bount here. Looks like our worries about antagonists are almost over now that we have more hollows and now a bount in the mix.
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Edited and thanks for the comment.
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PostSubject: Re: F!@$ The shinigami!   F!@$ The shinigami! I_icon_minitimeMon May 10, 2010 12:54 pm

*Grants Kuro the okay as long as everything is in order...*

I skimmed over the powers but that's all. The rest is up to you Mr. Mod...
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PostSubject: Re: F!@$ The shinigami!   F!@$ The shinigami! I_icon_minitimeTue May 11, 2010 5:02 pm

Nicely done. The powers now have my approval. Good job.

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