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PostSubject: N.I.U.S Rank up thread   Thu Aug 11, 2011 8:42 am

Character Name: Nebulous Interactive Universal System

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Link to Character Bio: Nius

Current Rank: 2

Current Exp: 24/45

Roleplays to be Evaluated

Afterschool

A morbid trap


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PostSubject: Re: N.I.U.S Rank up thread   Thu Aug 11, 2011 1:08 pm

Since I am in one thread, I've recruited Bish to review "Afterschool". So it's my duty to evaluate "A morbid trap". Lucky me I've already read this thread once, so very little to review just a quick refresher. First and foremost is was refreshing to see a shinigami on the run. Most times it's the hollow trying it's best to stay alive. That aside it's a pretty nice cat and mouse chase/fight. The posts are short, but the overall length is a good 2 pages (almost 3) I will admit sometimes when you post I forget how large your hollow actually is, but it all works out.

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PostSubject: Re: N.I.U.S Rank up thread   Thu Aug 11, 2011 1:31 pm

Afterschool: 9/10

"Fucking slinky..." hahaha! Okay now for the thread, it all looks good, nice fight, nice posts, the odd spelling mistake, but nothing of concern, the quality of your posts are great, as per usual, so good work, keep it up, I wouldn’t make a habit of fighting schoolgirls though.
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PostSubject: Re: N.I.U.S Rank up thread   Thu Mar 22, 2012 3:21 pm

Remnants of vengeance - 7/10 - Very enjoyable, I personally think you could of finished him off though. Oh wells, maybe next time. Twisted Evil

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