Nius
Number of Posts : 203
Age : 31
Location : Somewhere
Job/Interests : Stuff
Quote : "What a mouse gotta do... A mouse gotta do...."
Registration Date : 2010-02-03
 |  Subject: N.I.U.S Rank up thread  Thu Aug 11, 2011 8:42 am | |
| Character Name: Nebulous Interactive Universal System Username: Nius Link to Character Bio: NiusCurrent Rank: 2 Current Exp: 24/45 Roleplays to be Evaluated AfterschoolA morbid trap
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Arawn
Number of Posts : 3440
Age : 42
Location : Here, but there
Job/Interests : Anything, but not everything
Quote : You were close, but I was right
Registration Date : 2010-06-23
| | Subject: Re: N.I.U.S Rank up thread Thu Aug 11, 2011 1:08 pm | |
| Since I am in one thread, I've recruited Bish to review "Afterschool". So it's my duty to evaluate "A morbid trap". Lucky me I've already read this thread once, so very little to review just a quick refresher. First and foremost is was refreshing to see a shinigami on the run. Most times it's the hollow trying it's best to stay alive. That aside it's a pretty nice cat and mouse chase/fight. The posts are short, but the overall length is a good 2 pages (almost 3) I will admit sometimes when you post I forget how large your hollow actually is, but it all works out.
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Bishamon Saitou
Number of Posts : 482
Age : 29
Location : Anywhere and everywhere
Job/Interests : stuff, and other stuff...
Quote : Ah swords...natures knives.
Registration Date : 2011-06-03
| | Subject: Re: N.I.U.S Rank up thread Thu Aug 11, 2011 1:31 pm | |
| Afterschool: 9/10
"Fucking slinky..." hahaha! Okay now for the thread, it all looks good, nice fight, nice posts, the odd spelling mistake, but nothing of concern, the quality of your posts are great, as per usual, so good work, keep it up, I wouldn’t make a habit of fighting schoolgirls though.
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Nius
Number of Posts : 203
Age : 31
Location : Somewhere
Job/Interests : Stuff
Quote : "What a mouse gotta do... A mouse gotta do...."
Registration Date : 2010-02-03
| | Subject: Re: N.I.U.S Rank up thread Wed Mar 21, 2012 7:51 pm | |
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DarkMaster
Number of Posts : 863
Age : 39
Location : In a daze.
Job/Interests : That's Officer DarkMaster to you, buddy.
Quote : I'm afraid of the dark.
Registration Date : 2010-07-18
| | Subject: Re: N.I.U.S Rank up thread Thu Mar 22, 2012 3:21 pm | |
| Remnants of vengeance - 7/10 - Very enjoyable, I personally think you could of finished him off though. Oh wells, maybe next time.  | |
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