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Zamoreus
Number of Posts : 139
Age : 31
Registration Date : 2011-05-17
 |  Subject: Zamoreus Nebulous Rank Up Thread  Mon Aug 08, 2011 12:23 pm | |
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Arawn
Number of Posts : 3440
Age : 42
Location : Here, but there
Job/Interests : Anything, but not everything
Quote : You were close, but I was right
Registration Date : 2010-06-23
| | Subject: Re: Zamoreus Nebulous Rank Up Thread Wed Aug 10, 2011 3:30 pm | |
| No complaints about length on either thread but since they are so similar I figured I'd fuse the comment. As it stands they're decent works and nice flow to them and yet I like the second one just a little more than the first. That aside I'd suggest a mixture of threads to submit next time. Either with different people, or just types. With two similar threads it kinda kills the feel of them. They are related posts, almost sequelish.
6/10 - First thread
7/10 - second.
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Zamoreus
Number of Posts : 139
Age : 31
Registration Date : 2011-05-17
| | Subject: Re: Zamoreus Nebulous Rank Up Thread Wed Aug 17, 2011 8:09 pm | |
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DarkMaster
Number of Posts : 863
Age : 39
Location : In a daze.
Job/Interests : That's Officer DarkMaster to you, buddy.
Quote : I'm afraid of the dark.
Registration Date : 2010-07-18
| | Subject: Re: Zamoreus Nebulous Rank Up Thread Tue Aug 23, 2011 12:34 pm | |
| 3/10 - First thread - It was a decent thread, but feeling as if it was a training thread, I think you could have been a little more descriptive with the fighting portions of it.
4/10 - Second thread - Overall a good thread. Post length was good and story had good pacing. No real complaints.
Total exp. - 7
Congratulations...You moved up in rank. *Stamps forehead*
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Zamoreus
Number of Posts : 139
Age : 31
Registration Date : 2011-05-17
| | Subject: Re: Zamoreus Nebulous Rank Up Thread Sat Sep 03, 2011 6:37 pm | |
| Character Name: Zamoreus Nebulous Username: Zamoreus Link to Character Bio: ZamoreusCurrent Rank: 1 Current Exp: 11/30 Roleplays to be Evaluated Poor vs RichProlonged visitRequested Stat Point Increase: +2 Spirit Power +3 Fighting Skill | |
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Bishamon Saitou
Number of Posts : 482
Age : 29
Location : Anywhere and everywhere
Job/Interests : stuff, and other stuff...
Quote : Ah swords...natures knives.
Registration Date : 2011-06-03
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Zamoreus
Number of Posts : 139
Age : 31
Registration Date : 2011-05-17
| | Subject: Re: Zamoreus Nebulous Rank Up Thread Wed Mar 21, 2012 7:48 pm | |
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DarkMaster
Number of Posts : 863
Age : 39
Location : In a daze.
Job/Interests : That's Officer DarkMaster to you, buddy.
Quote : I'm afraid of the dark.
Registration Date : 2010-07-18
| | Subject: Re: Zamoreus Nebulous Rank Up Thread Thu Mar 22, 2012 3:11 pm | |
| Ala Rubra - 5/10 - No complaints overall, decent thread leading to a suspenseful second thread. | |
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Your post lengths were good, and the thread length on a whole was pretty long. And its always nice to see you bullying other. So good work.
