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Ayame Ryouta
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PostSubject: The Captain   The Captain I_icon_minitimeWed Nov 25, 2009 7:32 pm

Name: Was Never given a name but is Referred to as The Captain. He literally takes “The” as his first name and “Captain” as his surname.

Age: He is Eighty Eight years old but looks to be only in his late twenties

Birthplace: Wales , but raised in Germany

Looks:

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A strong looking man with masculine features. His face has a strong jaw line and large bold nose with an almost canine look to it. His eyes with cold have a loyal compassionate gaze to them if one were to get a close look. His plush yet rugged lips hold a stoic line at all times and are framed by ever-growing stubble. His Skin is dark , tanned as if he has worked in the sun and his tan forgot to fade. He wears a full uniform which is similar to a M42 Greatcoat with its neck guard constantly turned up, and an M43 officer's cap. The garment is army green. Underneath he has dingy green army vest and camouflage combats. The Captain possesses two modified Mauser C96s with incredibly long barrels, and a extra long combat knife . Has bright blue eyes and bright blonde hair.




Personality: Being Mute greatly effects his personality. He cannot directly interact with people through the aid of a voice and therefore is adept in sign language and has incredibly neat , fast-written calligraphic handwriting and normally carries a notebook and biro pen. He has a conflicting personality , due to his human power he gets filled with lust incredibly easy but is also a gentleman and frigid person which can cause him must discontent ( not being able to explain a random erection can cause trouble in the middle of a club at times more so when your as endowed as the Captain.) He enjoys eating meat and hunting . He dislikes unnecessary Violence and hates waking up with morning wood.

He is somewhat uneducated so despite being very intelligent and analytical he has little common sense not knowing how open certain things without completely destroying the packaging , difficulty with Norms and values such as wearing black to funerals and knocking before entering a room , though is better than he was. He lack of speech has made learning how to act normally more difficult.

When angry he is like a wild animal and has no compassion or distinction from friend or foe.

Gender: Male

Occupation: Blacksmith : owns a gun and weapon shop for both normal and gifted humans.

Special Characteristics: was trained by the Nazi Germans in hand to hand combat , swordplay, marksmanship , Survival skills. He was going to be there ultimate weapon but was too kind-hearted. Human power = Werewolf.
Similar to the twelfth division he can create inventions , though mainly war weapons
Race: Super-human

Special Power- Lycanthropy

General Power:

The Captain is a natural werewolf, able to transform at will and fight in either human or werewolf form.
The Captain possesses immense superhuman ability, even while in human form. This includes superhuman senses, strength (strong enough to bend steel bars or shatter limbs with a single kick), speed, reflexes, agility, dexterity, coordination, balance, endurance , night vision, stealth, and instincts. ( I guess this would add a + 5 in all his stats for every twenty five posts I have). His iron-like flesh can be compared to iron skin being able to withstand Shikai level melee weapons which can easily slice solid steel, even as they are tightened around his bare neck. The Captain is easily able to fall great distances without sustaining any damage,. The Captain has some regenerative ability, and can quickly regenerate his mutilated his body if mutilated from inside out though this forces him to return to his human form quicker. In addition to his natural abilities, the Captain possesses two modified Mauser C96s with incredibly long barrels, and a combat knife that he has not used yet. Is allergic to silver on a extremely deadly level is needs urgent medical attention to survive if silver is swallowed.

Techniques/Abilities:

Were steps ~ Can acts as a shunpo skill though makes no sound , and while walking or running at normal human speeds can not be detected by conventional reiatsu sensory methods ( using kido spells aimed to do so would work ). This move works like shunpo is always available. The stealth part is normally always active though can switched off to increase were steps speed , in which it makes a howling sound . This is the high speed movement Equivalent.

Charm ~ dogs are mans best friend. This attack charms people into loving and defending The Captain and requires eye contact it lasts for three turns and the user can not be forced to harm themselves in any way or put themselves in danger though once under the spell will not harm The captain or his allies and fight for them with ALL they got ( Shikai , Bankai , shunko , level ninety kido , Resurrections etc ) This is handy for the captain to knock out a low level foe or to witness the foes abilities at their best before they snap out of it. Can only be used once per foe per battle unless the thread goes on for more than a day IC as it can effect one person for three turns everyday IC time. This the equivalent to kido and Cero and tubes.

Call the family : rapidly splits into exact doppelgangers of himself that are all naked and are forced to turn into wolves after three turns . All the doppelganger share the same sight of vision similar to how a security camera network functions , they can communicate telepathically and perform deviating, devastating , deadly combos . A doppelganger takes a turn to create and the real captain is tired for the next turn. However the doppelganger can also make a doppelganger. For now The Captain can create three doppelgangers while the first doppelganger can create a single doppelganger. This will increase as my post count goes up , I will Pm a mod when I think its fair for extra doppelgangers to be added. If a doppelganger is destroyed it will turn into silver dust .







Stats: (you begin with 20 to distribute around)

Spirit Power: 3

Speed: 8

Fighting skill:6

Intel: 3

Total: 20

( twenty is really stupid you should make it thirty when you have so many stats and shouldn’t Spirit power = total of the stats to give the total some purpose. You replace Spirit power with hand to hand and fighting skill with Swordplay . And is Intel kido?? Not trying to be rude but I was like what the hell these stats seem weird as all the other stats are governed by reiatsu so to have high in one stat but low reiatsu makes little sense just saying ^.^)

History:
His parents died when he was born. His father from the shock of seeing a wolflike child rip out of his wife’s womb and his mother from him ripping out of her womb. He was found by the Nazi and thought to be a boy from hell when really he was a gifted human ( his mother was a clairvoyant too bad she didn’t see him coming and have an abortion). He was educated academically but never received proper education on how to act in society. He was trained in combat but escaped. For years her lived with wolves but was found by a kind man and who helped him become a “ normal human. Though The Captain left when the man insisted he be given a different Name as The Captain actually believes it is his birth given name. He now resides in karakura town.
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Ayame Ryouta

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PostSubject: Re: The Captain   The Captain I_icon_minitimeWed Nov 25, 2009 9:31 pm

hmm...well, idk about the other mods, but i have a concern with the "charm" ability. if your character becomes very powerful, it's more believable, but are you saying that at your current level, the captain can 'charm' someone of lieutenant-class ability? that seems a bit far fetched.

also, were-steps, since its the equivalent of sonido, shunpo, hirenkyaku, et al, will only become available when your speed=20. at least i'm pretty sure those are the rules. i'm gonna let some other people in positions of authority look at this before i approve. sorry Smile

it is a very well done application though
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PostSubject: Re: The Captain   The Captain I_icon_minitimeWed Nov 25, 2009 10:32 pm

Well thought out. It's difficult to design super humans since they are all so different.

I have a small problem with the starting strength of your character's abilities. The tough flesh for example is about equivalent to Arrancar skin (That being a form only available to hollows on this site at 120 stat points). It would be more fair (and leave better room for character/power development) to let his abilities evolve and grow in strength as you reach certain levels of stat points.

Like Ryouta said, the speed ability will be on hold until your speed is at 20 or above. The charm ability should only work on characters with lower spirit power than yours. And the plus 5 to all stats for every so many posts is a big negative. Sorry but we don't grow stronger through post count on this site.

That's all I have to say about the application. Sorry for nitpicking, but I try to help it so that it's a fair rp experience for everyone.

As for your stat concerns, please don't complain about the starting amount. You only had to divide them between 4 different categories. Shinigami, hollows, and qunicies have to divide between 5. Spirit Power is basically the level of raw spititual power your character has. Yes with it higher, certain things like physical stamina can gain a certain boost IC, but it is not the basis for all skills. The total's purpose is to gauge when our abilities can improve (like obtaining shikai, bankai, etc.) Humans don't use Kido, so the Kido Mastery stat is not in their list. Intel level decides what level of tactical planning your character is capable of in battle. Hope that cleared things up.

*breathes deeply* ok, I'm done rambling. Welcome to the site, but we'll hold approval off until we can agree on what should be decided about your character's skills. Anyone else have anything to say?
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PostSubject: Re: The Captain   The Captain I_icon_minitimeThu Nov 26, 2009 1:05 am

I agree with pretty much all of the above, but I'll put it in a neat and numbered list of what I want to see fixed...

1. Were Steps, fine but only after a speed of 20. The rest of us had to wait for flash stepping and you yourself said it's pretty much shunpo...

2. Charm, alter to make it anyone with a lower spirit power than you. That'll allow for a handleful of newer members... I believe I myself am in that equation... and when you train your ability, it'll eventually become more powerful...

3. Not to be picky but I believe you are required to have an RP sample in there somewhere... only a few paragraphs if you don't want to type that much... 3 sounds good...
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PostSubject: Re: The Captain   The Captain I_icon_minitimeThu Nov 26, 2009 6:57 am

Yeah its all fine , I would have liked to keep Were-steps as werewolves are creatures of speed but that's fine I don't mind waiting. Im off today so I will edit it at some point ( I just woke up sorry a bit tired still I'm off ill with asthma).


I did do an Rp sample :S. it cut it off somehow , my laptop acting up again most likely. So can I keep those techniques right??? just not use them until my stat's reach certain points??. Since I don't really plan on adding any more techniques besides these.

And kuro i wasn't complaining about the stats sorry if it seemed like i did , found it odd their were twenty points it seems like a bizarre number. Ok so give me about two hours to get ready etc and I will be back to edit my profile.
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PostSubject: Re: The Captain   The Captain I_icon_minitimeThu Nov 26, 2009 12:26 pm

danke, post a reply in here when you're done. It'll get your character approved faster if it lets us know that there's a new post in here...
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PostSubject: Re: The Captain   The Captain I_icon_minitimeMon Nov 30, 2009 8:59 pm

Not to rain on anyone's parade but when did we allow the porting of chars from other Anime/Manga? Because this dude right here is taken straight from Helsing 0_0
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PostSubject: Re: The Captain   The Captain I_icon_minitimeMon Nov 30, 2009 9:26 pm

When you say he is taken from hellsing what do you mean? The characters looks? I mean my character looks like hijikata and alot of people have similar names as well. The bio is slightly similar but at least it stays in bleach and he took time to edit it I mean alot of characters have bios similar to other anime characters but it stays in the bleach physics so its acceptable right?
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PostSubject: Re: The Captain   The Captain I_icon_minitimeMon Nov 30, 2009 9:48 pm

Really? Show me a werewolf in Bleach.

Quote :
The Captain possesses immense superhuman ability, even while in human form. This includes superhuman senses, strength (strong enough to bend steel bars or shatter limbs with a single kick), speed, reflexes, agility, dexterity, coordination, balance, and endurance. His iron-like flesh can withstand Walter's wires (which can easily slice solid steel), even as they are tightened around his bare neck. He seems to be able to fall great distances without sustaining any damage, as seen in chapter 58, Wizardry (2). The Captain has some regenerative ability, as he quickly regenerated his mutilated hand in The Dawn. He also has the ability to transform into white, fur-like mist similar to Alucard. In addition to his natural abilities, the Captain possesses two modified Mauser C96s with incredibly long barrels, and a combat knife that he has not used yet.
Taken from 'The Captains' wiki entry.

As far as i can see the personality and the abilities are the only thing not being copy pasted from Wiki.
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PostSubject: Re: The Captain   The Captain I_icon_minitimeMon Nov 30, 2009 9:53 pm

Well then since I have no power I shall keep silent on that matter.
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PostSubject: Re: The Captain   The Captain I_icon_minitimeTue Dec 01, 2009 10:52 pm

Well I personally don't have a problem with it, there were demons in Bleach. As Admin you have the final say and of course the ability to veto/undo this... So...

Unless made otherwise...

APPROVED!

EDIT: Oh and Maya Natsume is running around on the board so Wiki "Tenjou Tenge" then feel free to boot me in the face...
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