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Angelo Assesinar
Number of Posts : 35
Age : 27
Location : The Death Star
Quote : There are fates worse then death.
Registration Date : 2013-02-17
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Arawn
Number of Posts : 3440
Age : 43
Location : Here, but there
Job/Interests : Anything, but not everything
Quote : You were close, but I was right
Registration Date : 2010-06-23
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| The soul only half corrupt: [5/10]
A rather meaty solo if I may say so myself. A chance to showcase your skills and and what not. Still not a bad intro to your character as well as a possible NPC. I am curious to how a human wound up in Hueco Mundo, let alone survived so long without food or not becoming food. Doubt that tree would provide much protection/food being withered. Some easy to fix spelling errors, might want to review before posting. | |
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Angelo Assesinar
Number of Posts : 35
Age : 27
Location : The Death Star
Quote : There are fates worse then death.
Registration Date : 2013-02-17
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Angelo Assesinar
Number of Posts : 35
Age : 27
Location : The Death Star
Quote : There are fates worse then death.
Registration Date : 2013-02-17
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Arawn
Number of Posts : 3440
Age : 43
Location : Here, but there
Job/Interests : Anything, but not everything
Quote : You were close, but I was right
Registration Date : 2010-06-23
| | Subject: Re: Seis rank up Mon Feb 25, 2013 12:15 am | |
| A difficult subordinate: [4/10]
Short and somewhat sweet. I must say Seis is a rather easy going hollow. At first I thought one with standards, but the next Anthony convinced you rather easily into killing shinigami. If you're willing to kill them why not Anthony as well? Indeed you got tricked, but if you're playing possum you are off to a good start. When he least suspects it, be sure make his death slow and painful. If not he's abit too trusting and kind than the usual "I'm going to eat your soul" hollows.
A new mask and an old name: [5/10]
Wall-o-text. Bit of spacing won't hurt. The whole name reveal wasn't as shocking as the fact the girl was eating hollows. I mean I seriously I envisioned her blood covered meat devouring their flesh like some kind of feral beast. I mean really twisted and evil bit. I'm guessing you're hinting that the mother was a hollow perhaps arrancar. Would explain why she's there in Hueco Mundo. But that means she's not human. Figured you'd sense that as both parents weren't human in the conventional sense. | |
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Angelo Assesinar
Number of Posts : 35
Age : 27
Location : The Death Star
Quote : There are fates worse then death.
Registration Date : 2013-02-17
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Amaya
Number of Posts : 154
Age : 32
Job/Interests : Toturing innocent souls
Quote : Butterflies!
Registration Date : 2010-07-13
| | Subject: Re: Seis rank up Tue Feb 26, 2013 7:37 pm | |
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Territory [6/10]
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Angelo Assesinar
Number of Posts : 35
Age : 27
Location : The Death Star
Quote : There are fates worse then death.
Registration Date : 2013-02-17
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Arawn
Number of Posts : 3440
Age : 43
Location : Here, but there
Job/Interests : Anything, but not everything
Quote : You were close, but I was right
Registration Date : 2010-06-23
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pretty much sums it up. Confusing stuff. I'm guessing the time stopping lady in white was/is an arrancar. I'm also guessing the mystery lady made said hollow or something like that. That very same hollow you killed with the car (pretty weak since a human could defeat it) but made you into the same hollow. Or it took over your body? Good length, but wall-o-text. 
