Kurai Katsu's Rank Up

Subject: Kurai Katsu's Rank Up Mon Sep 03, 2012 3:17 pm

Character Name: Kurai Katsu

Username: Kurai Katsu

Link to Character Bio: https://thebleachworld.darkbb.com/t4121-shinigami-app

Current Rank: 0

Current Exp: 0/20

Roleplays to be Evaluated:

https://thebleachworld.darkbb.com/t4124-first-time-on-earthsolo#30517

https://thebleachworld.darkbb.com/t4125-fun-time-on-earthsolo#30519

Requested Stat Point Increases: +5 Speed

Subject: Re: Kurai Katsu's Rank Up Mon Sep 03, 2012 4:27 pm

As stated in the rank up rules, you can only submit 1 solo per week at ranks 0-4. I'll grade the first thread and not the second.

First time on earth: [0/10]

It's not just that the thread is short, it's the lack of details. In essence it's the bare bones of the story without elaboration or specifics. A to B to C with little to no gaps between them. The devil is in the details, so this thread comes off as angelic. Another point; the CC (Captain Commander - Head Captain if you prefer) isn't needed to appoint people on patrol. He commands all squads, so he delegates things to the captains themselves. At that point the captain would select people for tasks. As mentioned before you're a student and thus wouldn't be called forth for such a duty.

Subject: Re: Kurai Katsu's Rank Up Mon Sep 03, 2012 4:28 pm

yeah i know lol o.o this is my first time playing a forum rpg

o.O i wonder if ill ever get ranked up

Subject: Re: Kurai Katsu's Rank Up Mon Sep 03, 2012 4:41 pm

You can an will rank up, just take your time. Expand on your stories try to give more details. The more you put into it, the more others as well as yourself will enjoy it. Threads with others give you a chance to play improve and play off your partner's post.

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