ArcanaOfBoredom
Number of Posts : 53
Age : 29
Location : the shadows
Job/Interests : ninja
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Registration Date : 2012-01-28
 |  Subject: Yuko Makashimi Rank up  Mon Feb 06, 2012 4:10 pm | |
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Arawn
Number of Posts : 3440
Age : 43
Location : Here, but there
Job/Interests : Anything, but not everything
Quote : You were close, but I was right
Registration Date : 2010-06-23
| | Subject: Re: Yuko Makashimi Rank up Mon Feb 06, 2012 5:21 pm | |
| The above post will remained untouched and edited by the mods/admins. When you submit more threads (2 per week) you'll just make a reply to this thread. Pretty easy for you. From rank 0 > 1 you receive 5 points total.
Candle lit reading: [3/10]
As I said with Shakaku it's a good talking thread. You posts have character, but lack in length. Try to beef them up when you can. Be more descriptive when you have time.Posting quickly is fine, but taking your time doesn't hurt. Don't just be satisfied with the basics. I like the direction you're taking the character, expand on it later I hope.
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ArcanaOfBoredom
Number of Posts : 53
Age : 29
Location : the shadows
Job/Interests : ninja
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Registration Date : 2012-01-28
| | Subject: Re: Yuko Makashimi Rank up Mon Feb 06, 2012 5:37 pm | |
| Okay, :'( thanks and ill try my beast to get better ! | |
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ArcanaOfBoredom
Number of Posts : 53
Age : 29
Location : the shadows
Job/Interests : ninja
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Registration Date : 2012-01-28
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Takatsumaru
Number of Posts : 403
Age : 33
Location : Canada, Quebec
Job/Interests : Roleplaying
Quote : I'm that kinda guy, that does this kinda stuff.
Registration Date : 2010-07-05
| | Subject: Re: Yuko Makashimi Rank up Sat Feb 18, 2012 2:16 pm | |
| I read both of your threads this week (And mayhaps last weeks) And I saw alot of improvement. I like improvement in writters and I like how your texts almost doubled in size and in description, I will allow you 1 point for your improuvement in length and 3 points for the overall thread.
A total of 4 points is admitted by Taka.
I would have allowed more points, but I spotted alot a spelling errors, I know this is a problem for you, but there are some online dictionnaries, or you can even use google Chrome which corrects your texts or tells you what is wrong with it. | |
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ArcanaOfBoredom
Number of Posts : 53
Age : 29
Location : the shadows
Job/Interests : ninja
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Registration Date : 2012-01-28
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