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Ken Shinku

Ken Shinku


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Number of Posts : 1
Age : 27
Registration Date : 2011-09-25

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PostSubject: Ken Shinku's hollow char   Ken Shinku's hollow char I_icon_minitimeSun Sep 25, 2011 2:08 pm

Hollow

Name: Ken Shinku

Age: Died on Earth at the age of 17, about 60 as hollow

Gender: Male

Height: 6.3 Feet
Weight: 84 kg

Appearance: Ken's eyes are hazelnut brown and they seem to be really deep. He has brown eyebrows and brown hair. His body is rather muscular. His feet muscles are the biggest of his body. He has three long claws on his right hand. He has wings on his back and there are a few hundred spikes on them.

Personality: Ken is a rather calm person. He does not really care about others. When in fights, he usually first thinks about his opponent's strategy and then strikes. He is rather ruthless and when he gets on a roll, he crushes his opponent with a cold heart. He hates speaking with other people and feels really uncomfortable when somebody approaches him.

History: Ken used to live with his parents like any normal school boy. He went to school like a normal kid and got a normal kid's grades. He was hated by everyone in school, because he was a little different. He liked being alone and in some occasions he spoke to himself. But what others did not know was that he was able to see souls. Ken spoke to them a lot and understood their feelings. He helped them and took care of them in some ways.
One day while walking from school to home, he saw something weird. It was a blur and it was running towards Ken. He was not sure what it was, but he ran just incase. The blur was getting closer and closer every second. Ken was really frightened and got faster aswell. Then suddenly the blur was infront of him and attacked Ken.
Ken was knocked down on the ground. Suddenly the blur got clearer and Ken saw something infront of him. It looked like a bird, but had a weird mask. Ken quickly got up and started running again. He was able to get away. Ken was really happy and started walking to home again. When suddenly a truck hit him and the truck crushed him.

Spirit Power:20

Speed:10

Technique:25

Fighting Skill:5

Custom Hollow Abilities: (You are gifted 3 starting powers, these should be completely original techniques or powers of your hollow. They should also be relatively low powered. Please be descriptive with each power.)

Poisonous Gas: Ken releases poisonous gas out of his mouth. It is colored red. When the gas is inhaled, the person who inhaled it, starts seeing weird things. It's effect wears off after ten seconds.

Paranormal Spikes: Ken shoots out all of his spikes from his wings. When hit by one of the spikes, the target is paralysed for ten seconds. The spikes do not do any damage. They move at really high speed and are pretty small.

Claws of Heaven: Ken swings his right arm which has claws towards the opponent. When a wound appears on the target's body, that is made by one of the claws, the opponent is slowed down for thirty seconds. When two wounds appear, the opponent is paralysed for thirty seconds.

Rp sample: Ken steps out of the garganata. He looks around and sees a couple of high apppartments and one little house. He stars walking towards his old house. While walking towards the house, he saw many trees that were droping their leaves. There were many colors around him. Finally he arrived at his old home. He noticed his mom walking outside. Ken feels anger in his heart. He rushes towards his mom and attempts to attack her.

He suddenly stops and looks at her. She seemed to be looking at him too. It's like she knows that Ken is right infront of her. "Ken is that you?" she asks with a really curious voice. Ken feels warmth in his heart. He wanted to reply to her, but he couldn't. He thought that it would be smarter to open the garganata and go back to Hueco Mundo..
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Will

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Number of Posts : 202
Age : 35
Registration Date : 2010-11-24

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PostSubject: Re: Ken Shinku's hollow char   Ken Shinku's hollow char I_icon_minitimeSun Sep 25, 2011 5:53 pm

Okay mate all hollows start at the base level which means you have very little or no human qualities, you also need a mask and its appearance. Plus you might want to rethink paralysis techs as they wouldnt totally paralyze a higher rank maybe slow them down but to say paralyze would be in my opinion Over-powered.

Plus it wouldnt hurt you to add a little on your history, you have been a hollow for 60 years give us a little of your history as a hollow.
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Number of Posts : 3440
Age : 43
Location : Here, but there
Job/Interests : Anything, but not everything
Quote : You were close, but I was right
Registration Date : 2010-06-23

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PostSubject: Re: Ken Shinku's hollow char   Ken Shinku's hollow char I_icon_minitimeMon Sep 26, 2011 12:05 am

Mr Felix does bring up some valid points. For the most part hollows are more animal like. Some do look humanoid to some extent, but not completely human. Try more descriptive in appearance overall. As it stands Shinigami do have binding skills so paralyzing isn't bad, but know such a skill is breakable. Time duration is tricky for the most part it's by post if possible. You've lived longer as a hollow than a human. But for the most part why did you become a hollow? Sounds like you got hit by a car after escaping a hollow. Otherwise just some your average teen angst. That's just me.
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