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Maxulus

Maxulus


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Number of Posts : 13
Age : 30
Registration Date : 2011-08-24

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PostSubject: Curio Meru's Rank Up Thread   Curio Meru's Rank Up Thread I_icon_minitimeThu Aug 25, 2011 8:58 am

Character Name: Curio Meru

Username: Maxulus

Link to Character Bio: Curio Meru

Current Rank: 0

Current Exp: 8

Roleplays to be Evaluated:
-Walking in the night... (Evaluated)
-School Daze!

Requested Stat Point Increases:
(List as +# Stat Name. Ex: +5 Spirit Power.)


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Bishamon Saitou

Bishamon Saitou


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Number of Posts : 482
Age : 29
Location : Anywhere and everywhere
Job/Interests : stuff, and other stuff...
Quote : Ah swords...natures knives.
Registration Date : 2011-06-03

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PostSubject: Re: Curio Meru's Rank Up Thread   Curio Meru's Rank Up Thread I_icon_minitimeFri Aug 26, 2011 9:25 am

Walking in the night: 3/10

It was alright, but everything seemed a bit forced. A hollow coming out of nowhere when you were strolling around the academy is a bit unlikely. Also you used quite a lot of repetition of a few words, which made it difficult to read at parts, but your spelling and grammar was pretty good, so just work on that, and you'll be fine, good work.
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Maxulus

Maxulus


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Number of Posts : 13
Age : 30
Registration Date : 2011-08-24

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PostSubject: Re: Curio Meru's Rank Up Thread   Curio Meru's Rank Up Thread I_icon_minitimeThu Sep 01, 2011 6:36 pm

added a thread that needs to be evaluated in the first post! I have put (evaluated) next to the threads that are already evaluated. Thanks.
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Bishamon Saitou

Bishamon Saitou


Male
Number of Posts : 482
Age : 29
Location : Anywhere and everywhere
Job/Interests : stuff, and other stuff...
Quote : Ah swords...natures knives.
Registration Date : 2011-06-03

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PostSubject: Re: Curio Meru's Rank Up Thread   Curio Meru's Rank Up Thread I_icon_minitimeMon Sep 05, 2011 9:36 am

School Daze: 5/10

A good solid thread. The length of your posts were good, the content was good, soooo keep it up.

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