Maxulus
Number of Posts : 13
Age : 30
Registration Date : 2011-08-24
 |  Subject: Curio Meru's Rank Up Thread  Thu Aug 25, 2011 8:58 am | |
| Character Name: Curio Meru Username: Maxulus Link to Character Bio: Curio MeruCurrent Rank: 0 Current Exp: 8 Roleplays to be Evaluated: - Walking in the night... (Evaluated) - School Daze!Requested Stat Point Increases: (List as +# Stat Name. Ex: +5 Spirit Power.)
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Bishamon Saitou
Number of Posts : 482
Age : 29
Location : Anywhere and everywhere
Job/Interests : stuff, and other stuff...
Quote : Ah swords...natures knives.
Registration Date : 2011-06-03
| | Subject: Re: Curio Meru's Rank Up Thread Fri Aug 26, 2011 9:25 am | |
| Walking in the night: 3/10
It was alright, but everything seemed a bit forced. A hollow coming out of nowhere when you were strolling around the academy is a bit unlikely. Also you used quite a lot of repetition of a few words, which made it difficult to read at parts, but your spelling and grammar was pretty good, so just work on that, and you'll be fine, good work.
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Maxulus
Number of Posts : 13
Age : 30
Registration Date : 2011-08-24
| | Subject: Re: Curio Meru's Rank Up Thread Thu Sep 01, 2011 6:36 pm | |
| added a thread that needs to be evaluated in the first post! I have put (evaluated) next to the threads that are already evaluated. Thanks. | |
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Bishamon Saitou
Number of Posts : 482
Age : 29
Location : Anywhere and everywhere
Job/Interests : stuff, and other stuff...
Quote : Ah swords...natures knives.
Registration Date : 2011-06-03
| | Subject: Re: Curio Meru's Rank Up Thread Mon Sep 05, 2011 9:36 am | |
| School Daze: 5/10
A good solid thread. The length of your posts were good, the content was good, soooo keep it up.
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