Tartarax Planch - Hollow (fixed)

Name: Tartarax Planch

Age: Human age he was 20, Newly formed hollow

Gender: Male

Height: 6'7

Weight: 340 pounds

Appearance: He looks like a turtle that has a black shell, white underbelly where his hole is located, he stands on 2 his lower feet look like elephant feet, his upper arms are short but his hands are 4 claws his mask is white and looks like a turtles face, he has a shell on his back which is covered in spikes

Personality: Hes very cocky, and thinks he will be the best and stongest hollow ever, he hates everyone who tries to stand in his way

History: When tartarax was human he died by the hand of a jeleous soul reaper who was envious of his life tartarax lived, after tartarax figured out he was killed for no reason his anger grew so mighty he turned into a hollow. after the transformation he lost most of his memory the only thing that remained was his greedy nature and hate for soul reapers

Each character gets 60 points to assign to either:

Spirit power: 35

Speed: 5

Intelligence: 10

Fighting skill: 15

((These stats reflect your training and focus area of your character though in no way determine if you are better than another character in a stat. Only your roleplaying can determine that... Remember that these can not increase or decrease, they will not change...))

Custom Hollow Abilities:
((These should be completely original techniques or powers of your hollow. Please note Cero's will be mentioned in the initial information forum with the stat system explained.))

Ability 1: very high defense from his shell which he can go inside of, just like a box turtle, he has no mobility in this state but can not be damaged.shoots spikes from his shell that are projectiles that replenish every time he fires one.

Ability 2: exploding spikes: tartaraxs spikes that he fires from his back explode on contact or can be set off by a a snap of his fingers for strategically placed attacks.

Ability 3: Spike neurotoxin: Tartaraxs spikes release a nerve gas that only he is unaffected by, the gas weakens his opponent(s) by making them go in a paralytic state that allows him to go in for the kill.

Ability 4:

Rp sample: A hole rips in the sky above the young soul reaper, but before he could react to the disturbance in spiritual pressure a oddly green colored cero shoots from the hole. After the dust cleared the young soul reaper saw an arrancar standing there but before the soul reaper could attack he felt the sharp pain of a sword in his abdomen.

Fixed, is it better than it was im new to this and my friend told me i should start this