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Exodus
Number of Posts : 5 Age : 31 Location : Heaven Job/Interests : Smoking Quote : "Do you really believe you can defeat me with power alone? How foolish. ...no perhaps our basic understanding of the word “power” is much different. Shall I teach you the meaning of what "true power" really is. Then maybe you might understand that the difference between us is like heaven and earth. " Registration Date : 2013-04-14
| Subject: Bo Zephaniah Sun Apr 14, 2013 6:40 pm | |
| Super Human TemplateName: Bo Zephaniah Age: 19 but he looks as if he is 24 Gender: Male Race: Black Birthplace: Sanagu City Occupation: Philosopher Height: 6 feet, 2 inches Weight: 175lbs. Appearance:- Spoiler:
Bo has long wool like hair that reaches down to his lower back when wet, normally shoulder length. He wears a brown leather jacket with a muscle tee that has a bull on the front of it, tattoos runs from all over his upper body. Bo prefers to wear a brown slight baggy pair of pants which in his opinion gives him more room to perform various moments while in situations that requires him to move a lot. His brown sash covers the right side of his body with a skull chain on his left which is for a fashion statement to be honest; his shoes are a high top, white more comfortable fit custom made for him. Personality: Bo is cold and collected in most things he does, normally appearing calm and even carefree. Even when overwhelmed and injured in battle, he is able to maintain his composed nature. Taking advantage of this unemotional nature, he is very cautious in battle, never acting without purpose or a plan. He is sociopathic and amoral in nature, completely uncaring about the physical torment that those directly and indirectly affected by his Ability go through, even enjoying it as he mocks their pain. He also appears sadistic, purposely pushing the victims' trauma until they suffer mental breakdowns. Special Characteristics: As child growing up Bo never missed anything, when people were pick pocketed, dropped something, or finding something, he prided himself on that fact. How he trained his eyes for years to be drastically more advanced than other beings, not in the case of distance rather he is unable to miss the slightest changes that take place in his field of vision. This does not make him capable of reacting to everything he sees but he is capable of predicting anything as long as he can see it. Stats: 60 Spirit Power: 10 Speed: 30 Technique: 10 Fighting Skill: 10 Special Power General Power: Light Manipulation Techniques/Abilities: Ability 1: Blinding Light: Bo has gain enough control over his light manipulation to be able to create an orb in front of him made of pure light. This light is so strong, even with their eyes closed it will Blind all enemies within a 20 meter radius for 3 posts. Ability 2: Light Twitch: Bo has developed a way to twitch a muscle at the speed of light, making it possible to do small movements at the speed of light. Ex. Twitch out of the way of an incoming attack, or Twitch a hand or leg while attacking to add some more speed and power to an attack. This ability does come with drawbacks of recoil damage to Bo's body causing him to be able to use this ability every three post and a total of 4 times topic, any more uses will cause instant death. Ability 3: Light Enzan: With Bo's ability of light manipulation he is able to conjure up a razor-sharp disk of light energy that can slice through nearly anything. It is however an embarrassment for its infamous main weaknesses: which it that it is generally slow to create which takes 2 post, Bo's can also control where the disk going only if he keeping eye contact with it. Once eye contact is lost the disk keeps straight in its path, the cool down for this ability is a 2 post cool down. History: Bo was born into a nice wealthy family who had their heart set on having a girl so that they could marry into the wealthiest family in the town, then came Bo. The mother loved him so much that she gave her most prized possession to him on his 3rd birthday, she told them to never take them off and he would be safe from harm. He was enrolled into a private school at the age of 7 which focused more on the physical rather than the mental which he preferred at the time anyway, he graduated a few years later at the top of his class due to his fixation of being the best at whatever he did. Not too long after his parents would get divorced due to his father killing his mother, Bo was distraught after that fatal blow to his heart, he still holds on to that burden of her not being there. His father however skipped town to avoid being arrested but that was the least of his problem, Bo caught word of where he was hiding out and went to go take revenge. Before getting there he tried to build his resolve to kill his own father but he could muster up none, once he got there he broke down in an emotional rage he was at war with himself. After killing his father Bo would take up finding himself and his purpose in this world now that his parents were gone so he took an interest in philosophy, he studied for 3 years when he finally got his degree. He now roams the world looking for the meaning of his existence, cold and scared of life itself. Role Playing Sample: - Spoiler:
There he was standing there, sweat dripping off of his down from his neck onto his chiseled body. iBere had just finished 3 miles full speed, he caught his breath but recovered quickly due to his regeneration. Even though it was early and warriors are just now waking up, he felt himself being late he wasn't intense in his training so he punished himself. He did ultimate stretching for an hour and 500 sit ups and boulder punches, this reason for this is iBere always had to train under extreme conditions to push his muscles to another extreme. iBere was now able to increase his muscle mass,decrease his muscle mass making him more lucid, After a few hours of that he had mastered his body in ways no being could understand. (He repeated this drills constantly until noon.)
As it reached noon iBere rested for 3 hours to let its body reproduce the muscles that had been torn during training only they would be much stronger due to his training.
His eyes opened as he had been reborn again he felt a little ache in his stomach but that soon faded away after he at his meal he prepared for his trip here. He would be staying two weeks(3,000 words), that's how long he gave himself to master his body to its full potential. With special permission and his name that carried weight he was able to get three training partners , a team of SC bodyguards and food for this journey. The group of SC sealed of the training grounds just in case, the seal stretch for 30 miles around and would take multiple SS rank damage to breakthrough, it is weakest at noon for some reason.
He was done with his meal with in a few minutes, he wasn't in a rush plus eating faster would mean he would get hungry faster. Eating slowly gave him time to think a sort of mental therapy for him, it calmed his raged scorn of this would and made it brighter.
Once he was done he hoped straight on his fingers and started to do his set of 350 finger push-ups and puncturing drills. iBere sadly couldn't handle the immense pain of the push ups and drills so every now and then he would stop and run off the pain full sprint. His body go into the habit of going full speed all the time that's was his way of think when it comes to speed. After opening and reading the book he picked up and his speed lived by this quote, "Your first movement at the very beginning should be full speed. From there, you should be relaxed, and accelerate from there." So it was said ,iBere had done it practically the whole time he was there.
He had thoughts of giving up from the pain but he kept on going no matter what it was his will and determination to keep him from quitting and almost dying. He was strong but mentally he had to get stronger but then it happened, iBere had slipped off an hundred foot cliff and if did not hang on he would fall to his death as this was the place for dragons. This was not real a illusion specialist had caught him in an B rank illusion to put his mind to the test and make it stronger.
iBere woke up to the world around him that looks so real, and to proclaim that it is only an illusion may seem sheer nonsense. How can it be? Yet, it is possible to accept this idea. I believe you agree with me, if I say that this technique is some sort of an extraordinary machine. It is made up of a combination of materials, but it functions as a unit. In this illusion the SC taught iBere about life.
Can you say confidently that you are the body? Are you the blood that is shed and wiped away when you go to the battlefield? Are you your fingers nails, nose, legs or thighs?
..........I.......I think I am! The SC knew he wasn't sure at all about he question he asked.
iBere the body changes through the years, do you really feel that you are this changing form?
Many thoughts pass through the mind every day. Can you say that you are any one of these thoughts? They are like a movie that plays in front of your eyes. Do you remember what you thought one hour ago? Yesterday? How can these thoughts be the real you if they always come and go? You think them, but you are not them.
The same thing goes for your feelings. What do you think is more correct to say, "I am angry", "I am sad", "I am happy" or "I am letting feelings of anger, sadness or happiness to occupy my consciousness for a while"? As with thoughts, feelings and emotions pass through you, they come and they go. You cannot be your feelings, which constantly change.
iBere heart and mind was racing at the mans words, the were hitting home and his deep thought showed it. Even though this was an illusion iBere knew the words were real it took him and our but he finally came up with a theory and wanted to tell the SC.
I believe we all perceive things differently, though your words are very effective I will cherish them until I die, but we are our own being I am my own man I am me so that's who I try to be everyday sir.
Oh? Then who are you? After listening to what I just said, do you really still believe that your the body, feeling and thoughts, or something beyond them? To know who you really are, you have to take your awareness beyond the mind. The answer comes when you are able to transcend your mind. Spiritual traditions and experience say that you are an inseparable part of the eternal, impersonal consciousness that created the world and infused life into everything, including this conglomeration of body, feelings and thoughts that you call "me".
Please explain!! I need to know sir!
Well this homogenous, indivisible, impersonal Consciousness manifests in and through everything. It is the life principle of the manifestation that you consider to be yourself. The manifestation, which is the combination of body, thoughts and feelings, is nothing without this life principle. This Life Principle - Consciousness, is the only real thing, and every manifestation is created by it, and therefore is dependent on it.
Can you become aware of this Consciousness? When you develop some inner detachment and inner peace, you will be able to turn your attention within you, instead of to the external world, and then you will become aware of the Consciousness that is beyond the mind.
This illusion's purpose to help you find yourself, to attain greater mind power or enlightenment. When you are done this training you will be far more powerful.
First, silence of the mind is the prerequisite for becoming aware of this Consciousness. Only when the mind is silenced and there are no thoughts, you realize who you really are - the vast, eternal Consciousness.
This is also what has been called enlightenment. This is what yogis, saints and seekers on the spiritual path seek. Through constant meditation the mind is made quiet. Then, from deep inside will rise great silence, peace, bliss and consciousness. Then you will know who you really are. This is enlightenment.
The way to spiritual awakening is open for everyone. Only attachment and erroneous thoughts and concepts hide it. It can come suddenly, and it can come gradually. The funny thing is that you do not have to search for it, and you do not need to reach anywhere. All you have to do is dive within with a quiet mind, become aware of this inner, eternal underlying consciousness and stay there.
If you see a battle with inner detachment, you can still enjoy it, yet you are not agitated by what happens in it. You know it is just a battle, the projection of light and color in the arena. After gaining inner peace and silence, and becoming aware of your real I, you see the tealm and live in it, but yet, at the same time you understand that it is not real. This helps you stay calm and detached in all kinds of situations.
When you are spiritually awakened, nothing can affect your mind and moods. You may still need to work and interact with other people and the realm around you, yet you will do so while remaining uninvolved in consciousness, as if outside of the world.
The mind and its thoughts create your world - the illusion you are living in. Thoughts and imagination are creative, and therefore mold and affect your world. As your thoughts are, so is your world.
When you awaken to your real Consciousness, you will be able to master your mind and thoughts, and therefore if needed, be able to change your illusion - your world, through the creative power of your mind. By focusing your mind on the thoughts you choose, you can affect your "reality" accordingly.
You might say that after spiritual awakening you will be beyond the world's illusion, and material things will not matter any more. This is true, but yet, the illusion has to be lived. You have to eat, pay bills and take care of the body. It is true, you will approach these matters in a completely different way, but you will still need to take care of them. Even an enlightened master has to eat, drink and sleep.
Going beyond the mind, beyond the illusion of the world, puts a great power and responsibility in your hands, for then you have the power to affect the world. Your awakened consciousness is an immense power that can stimulate the spiritual awakening in others. As all Consciousness is one, calming down your mind, going beyond it, and becoming conscious of your real being, to some extent, affects the whole realm.
The SC released the illusion on iBere as there was no more need for it, he instructed him to sit in a position of ultimate comfort for him. As they both sat the he placed his hands on iBere's head and started to hmm, after this training he would fully unlock his mind and reach his mind's fullest potential. This was the SC's main purpose of being here to help advance his mental training, it was really a favor to iBere's father for saving this mans life. They sat there for hours while the SC instilled all the powers to make him reach enlightenment one by one they did test and iBere seemed to past them with the help if the mans words.
First was meditation, the constant mind meditation had a profound influence on iBere's performance of the mind and his consciousness. iBere found out that his mind was restless and loved constant movement but now through this meditational training he removed the restlessness of his mind, making it a better a more useful to him. With earnestness, persistence and his strong motivation iBere was able to pass the first stage of enlightenment with ease.
The SC stopped and gave him a full day to sleep,he would need his mind to be sharp as ever to pass the next stage.
Sleep it off we have a big day ahead of us tomorrow, good job iBere. The SC vanished back to his post.
iBere awoken fully rested and ready for unlocking his mind to a new level with the help of the SC genius. They weather today was lovely the sun had set whoa this was a beautiful site to behold, he soon got lost in this bliss he was able to enjoy due to his mind training. The SC called for iBere to continue there training. "iBere today we will go on a mind adventure so you can get a better feel for breaking and creating an illusion world." iBere and the man sat down as he put his hand on his head it started created the world, "if you can survive this then your training is halfway done."
I'm ready!! Sir!!
If you die in this illusion you will be knocked unconscious for a month which will severely hold off your training.
I'm ready to handle these consequences sir.
Ok let's begin then.
The SC teacher and iBere were walking from one village to another, when they suddenly heard a roar behind them. Turning their gaze in the direction of the roar, they saw a big tiger following them. The first thing iBere wanted to do was to run away, but as he has been studying and practicing self-discipline, he was able to halt himself, waiting to see what his teacher was going to do.
"What shall we do Master?" Asked iBere.
The teacher looked at him and answered in a calm voice: "There are several options. We can fill our minds with paralyzing fear so that we cannot move, and let the tiger do with us whatever pleases it. We can faint. We can run away, but then it will run after us. We can fight with it, but physically it is stronger than us."
"We can pray to god to save us. We can choose to influence the tiger with the power of our mind, if our concentration is strong enough. We can send it love. We can also concentrate and meditate on our inner power, and on the fact that we are one with the entire universe, including the tiger, and in this way influence its soul."
"Which option do you choose?"
"You are the Master. You tell me what to do. We don't have much time." iBere responded.
The master turned his gaze fearlessly towards the tiger, emptied his mind from all thoughts, and entered a deep state of meditation. In his consciousness, he embraced everything in the universe, including the tiger. In this state the consciousness of the teacher became one with consciousness of the tiger.
Meanwhile iBere started to shiver with fear, as the tiger was already quite close, ready to make a leap at them. He was amazed at how his teacher could stay so calm and detached in the face of danger.
Meanwhile the teacher continued to meditate without fear. After a little while, the tiger gradually lowered its head and tail and went away.
iBere asked his teacher in astonishment, "What did you do?"
"Nothing. I just had faith,cleared all thoughts from my mind and united myself in spirit with the tiger. We became united in peace on the spiritual level. The tiger sensed the inner calmness, peace, and unity and felt no threat or need to express violence, and so walked away." " "When the mind is silent and calm, its peace is automatically transmitted to everything and everyone around, influencing them deeply, just have faith iBere that's all,concluded the teacher.
It was over and beam of blackness converge on iBere it blew the SC back a few feet, he didn't think this boy would unlock it but he didn't he was truly pure it seems. His transformation was awesome not physically but mentally he was far on a new level. He was enlightened something so impossible at his age he did with the help of this man and sure perseverance. After the next week of physically busting his ass to match his mind he completed to fully master his body TRAINING COMPLETY!
It was sad to say but it was done, training was now over and iBere had to get home to Pandora before a scout party comes looking for him which is never good. It was good timing too he had just ran a few laps with new found speed, he was so happy he had fully completed it. He said his final goodbyes to everyone especially his Master never did he even once calling someone that but he was worthy of praise from iBere. As soon as the beautiful sun set iBere took off at A-rank speed towards Econ city to report back.
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| | | Shikuro
Number of Posts : 586 Age : 32 Location : Where I want to be o.o Quote : In War, Victory. In Peace, Vigilance. In Death, Sacrifice Registration Date : 2010-05-29
| Subject: Re: Bo Zephaniah Sun Apr 14, 2013 7:11 pm | |
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Okay most of it seemes okay though their is some problems with the abilities.
First one needs a better description not sure how it works for you other than for defense does it have any offense to it..?
And one has to be changed 9 points is an extreem ammount its as of right now two ranks down in the low ranks, aceleration is possible but not on such a scale. and especially not without limits.
Third one seemes alright, the chains is brought from Bo correct? then moving underground? | |
| | | Arawn
Number of Posts : 3440 Age : 43 Location : Here, but there Job/Interests : Anything, but not everything Quote : You were close, but I was right Registration Date : 2010-06-23
| Subject: Re: Bo Zephaniah Mon Apr 15, 2013 12:32 am | |
| Special Characteristics is usually a spot for unique traits a person has; He has extensive medical training, knows 4 different languages, can juggle, etc. A bonus to speed not so much.
For the abilities: Intangible to physical and spiritual is quite a tall order. Not to mention only limit to duration is attack used to counter. Almost unlimited phasing = invincibility. Even if it's only useful against those 1 rank above, anyone same or below your level is screwed. Definitely rejected.
Second skill is quite novel; the further you go the faster you get. Yet therein lies the problem; distance traveled. It's hard to gauge how far anyone is moving. Simply granting a bonus for that is abit unfair. Needs some kind of work/system. Still most bonus to stats at first rank is usually only +5 (without some kind of trade off limitation)
Third skill pretty much sounds like that kido spell Shinigami get. Actually reminds me of Hunter X Hunter. Seems simple enough | |
| | | Exodus
Number of Posts : 5 Age : 31 Location : Heaven Job/Interests : Smoking Quote : "Do you really believe you can defeat me with power alone? How foolish. ...no perhaps our basic understanding of the word “power” is much different. Shall I teach you the meaning of what "true power" really is. Then maybe you might understand that the difference between us is like heaven and earth. " Registration Date : 2013-04-14
| Subject: Re: Bo Zephaniah Wed Apr 17, 2013 9:20 am | |
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| | | Shikuro
Number of Posts : 586 Age : 32 Location : Where I want to be o.o Quote : In War, Victory. In Peace, Vigilance. In Death, Sacrifice Registration Date : 2010-05-29
| Subject: Re: Bo Zephaniah Wed Apr 17, 2013 10:47 am | |
| Alright I only see one only one problem your thrid ability is way to over powered, we got to asume that 50% of the battles are made within the light, that you ahve some slight empawerment of very small regen in light is one thing but a rapid regeneration is too much, you're making it ound like he can use his blind constantly without fatique.
All other things look good the speed of light thing is a a bit much but the backdraw balances it out.
Your eyes are interesting too. | |
| | | Exodus
Number of Posts : 5 Age : 31 Location : Heaven Job/Interests : Smoking Quote : "Do you really believe you can defeat me with power alone? How foolish. ...no perhaps our basic understanding of the word “power” is much different. Shall I teach you the meaning of what "true power" really is. Then maybe you might understand that the difference between us is like heaven and earth. " Registration Date : 2013-04-14
| Subject: Re: Bo Zephaniah Wed Apr 17, 2013 2:17 pm | |
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| | | Shikuro
Number of Posts : 586 Age : 32 Location : Where I want to be o.o Quote : In War, Victory. In Peace, Vigilance. In Death, Sacrifice Registration Date : 2010-05-29
| Subject: Re: Bo Zephaniah Wed Apr 17, 2013 2:41 pm | |
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Everything seemes in order, just remember though your disk is based on being sharp the power is always based on your characters Spiritual Power and Technique. Have fun, sorry it took so long. | |
| | | Arawn
Number of Posts : 3440 Age : 43 Location : Here, but there Job/Interests : Anything, but not everything Quote : You were close, but I was right Registration Date : 2010-06-23
| Subject: Re: Bo Zephaniah Wed Apr 17, 2013 6:59 pm | |
| Going to toss out a veto on this one. - Quote :
Ability 1: Blinding Light: Bo has gain enough control over his light manipulation to be able to create an orb in front of him made of pure light. This light is so strong, even with their eyes closed it will Blind all enemies within a 20 meter radius for 3 posts.
Ability 2: Light Twitch: Bo has developed a way to twitch a muscle at the speed of light, making it possible to do small movements at the speed of light. Ex. Twitch out of the way of an incoming attack, or Twitch a hand or leg while attacking to add some more speed and power to an attack. This ability does come with drawbacks of recoil damage to Bo's body causing him to be able to use this ability every three post and a total of 4 times topic, any more uses will cause instant death. Blinding everyone within 60ft for 3 turns is a bit much. Even with eyes closed? So even if they blink or flinch it doesn't matter? That's pretty hardcore. True shinigami get something similar, although they have a chant before each casting. (unless they get high enough skill to do chantless) But the duration isn't fixed. So usually people RP being blinded for a post or so and recover. Reduce the range and add cool down per blinding pulse to 4-6 or reduce range and reduce duration to 1. And the second is miniature flash step. Seems pointless to have two of the same technique. If you want to shackle yourself with something like that it's up to you, but no complaining about it later. | |
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