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Ecktis Encadian
Number of Posts : 10
Age : 26
Location : An abandoned government warehouse filled with supernatural artifacts. (No I am not watching Indiana Jones!)
Quote : "No better friend, no worse enemy."
Registration Date : 2012-09-16
 |  Subject: Ecktis Rank Up Thread  Mon Oct 01, 2012 6:00 pm | |
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Arawn
Number of Posts : 3440
Age : 42
Location : Here, but there
Job/Interests : Anything, but not everything
Quote : You were close, but I was right
Registration Date : 2010-06-23
| | Subject: Re: Ecktis Rank Up Thread Mon Oct 01, 2012 6:04 pm | |
| Deleted the extra thread you made...
The art of the blade: [4/10]
For anyone reading the post isn't formatted to the left. The choice of paragraphing shouldn't matter, but he unnatural break in the sentences does effect it somewhat. A quick and easy story, can't say much otherwise. The opponent it meant to be stronger and yet victory is assured. | |
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Ecktis Encadian
Number of Posts : 10
Age : 26
Location : An abandoned government warehouse filled with supernatural artifacts. (No I am not watching Indiana Jones!)
Quote : "No better friend, no worse enemy."
Registration Date : 2012-09-16
| | Subject: Re: Ecktis Rank Up Thread Fri Oct 12, 2012 4:00 pm | |
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Ezrachek Rayone
Number of Posts : 485
Age : 30
Location : Spotsylvania, Virginia
Job/Interests : Partner at Machinima
Quote : Show her that you're not that shy! (Fancy Footwork - Chromeo)
Registration Date : 2012-01-13
| | Subject: Re: Ecktis Rank Up Thread Sat Oct 13, 2012 2:48 am | |
| Common Relations - 4/10
(Originally i was going to grade this lower because the chase scene almost seems identical to what was seen in the Assassins Creed series. However i can't hold that against you due to the fact of separation of ideas. Also, I can't reward much experience as you technically had no part in taking this creature down. I must say, clever way of announcing the issue, even if predictable.)
No need to edit the top most post, just add the new threads via a reply. ~ The Arawn | |
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Ecktis Encadian
Number of Posts : 10
Age : 26
Location : An abandoned government warehouse filled with supernatural artifacts. (No I am not watching Indiana Jones!)
Quote : "No better friend, no worse enemy."
Registration Date : 2012-09-16
| | Subject: Re: Ecktis Rank Up Thread Mon Oct 15, 2012 10:12 pm | |
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Arawn
Number of Posts : 3440
Age : 42
Location : Here, but there
Job/Interests : Anything, but not everything
Quote : You were close, but I was right
Registration Date : 2010-06-23
| | Subject: Re: Ecktis Rank Up Thread Tue Oct 16, 2012 1:19 pm | |
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Ecktis Encadian
Number of Posts : 10
Age : 26
Location : An abandoned government warehouse filled with supernatural artifacts. (No I am not watching Indiana Jones!)
Quote : "No better friend, no worse enemy."
Registration Date : 2012-09-16
| | Subject: Re: Ecktis Rank Up Thread Tue Oct 16, 2012 4:20 pm | |
| Alright, I'll submit it as a training thread then.
And I'll take that rule into consideration in the future. | |
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