Hibiki Jishin
Number of Posts : 71 Age : 29 Registration Date : 2012-01-18
| Subject: Hibiki Jishin Rank Up Thread Sun Apr 22, 2012 9:45 pm | |
| Character Name: Hibiki Jishin Username: Hibiki Jishin Link to Character Bio: Hibiki JishinCurrent Rank: 1 Current Exp: 1/30 Roleplays to be Evaluated (The RP's you wish reviewed by the staff) A New Chapter (Solo) | |
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Junko
Number of Posts : 521 Age : 28 Registration Date : 2010-10-30
| Subject: Re: Hibiki Jishin Rank Up Thread Sun Apr 29, 2012 1:07 pm | |
| Impressive Solo, it has depth, story progression, and an interesting style at that...
A New Chapter 7/10 pts | |
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Hibiki Jishin
Number of Posts : 71 Age : 29 Registration Date : 2012-01-18
| Subject: Re: Hibiki Jishin Rank Up Thread Tue Jul 10, 2012 5:46 pm | |
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Shakaku
Number of Posts : 179 Age : 30 Job/Interests : Psychiatry Quote : It tastes like Jesus shit on a plate. Registration Date : 2011-12-19
| Subject: Re: Hibiki Jishin Rank Up Thread Wed Jul 11, 2012 1:31 pm | |
| The Proper Schooling
Very nice! Good flow and no dull moments (if there were any, you made sure to turn it around quickly). Only a few errors, mainly a missing word here and there but overall a very good piece.
7/10 Pts | |
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Hibiki Jishin
Number of Posts : 71 Age : 29 Registration Date : 2012-01-18
| Subject: Re: Hibiki Jishin Rank Up Thread Mon Jan 28, 2013 2:02 pm | |
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Arawn
Number of Posts : 3440 Age : 43 Location : Here, but there Job/Interests : Anything, but not everything Quote : You were close, but I was right Registration Date : 2010-06-23
| Subject: Re: Hibiki Jishin Rank Up Thread Mon Jan 28, 2013 11:59 pm | |
| Falling in the well: [7/10]
I'll admit I only read it 3 times as opposed to the usual 4 I'll give most. But it is quite long. I took my time that way I fully absorbed it. That being said there was alot to absorb. The meat of the post was establishing what/where you were. A nicely crafted back story no doubt linked to your father. I do recall his transformation involving crystal as well. More so curious to who/what left the notes, food, and book. Did I miss that? Congratz on the rank up pick thy squad and stats. | |
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Hibiki Jishin
Number of Posts : 71 Age : 29 Registration Date : 2012-01-18
| Subject: Re: Hibiki Jishin Rank Up Thread Tue Feb 05, 2013 3:58 pm | |
| +5 Spirit Power
No squad, just yet. | |
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