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Junko
Number of Posts : 521
Age : 28
Registration Date : 2010-10-30
 |  Subject: Re: Tatsuya Okibi Rank Up Thread  Wed May 09, 2012 6:17 pm | |
| Whoop Di do... Nothing really happened here... Interaction between you and sumiko.
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DarkMaster
Number of Posts : 863
Age : 39
Location : In a daze.
Job/Interests : That's Officer DarkMaster to you, buddy.
Quote : I'm afraid of the dark.
Registration Date : 2010-07-18
| | Subject: Re: Tatsuya Okibi Rank Up Thread Mon Jun 04, 2012 7:01 pm | |
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Arawn
Number of Posts : 3440
Age : 43
Location : Here, but there
Job/Interests : Anything, but not everything
Quote : You were close, but I was right
Registration Date : 2010-06-23
| | Subject: Re: Tatsuya Okibi Rank Up Thread Mon Jun 04, 2012 10:04 pm | |
| Located: [8/10]
It's with a heavy heart I bestow this score upon this thread. I suggest anyone looking at this besides DM at least attempt to read it rather than just observe my judgement on it. Yes has a 4k wordcount, but it's worth it. If anything I'd like to give this a 8.5, but fractions would only bring confusion. Length is monstrous and contents just as filling. Alas it didn't break the 9 wall nor did it blast through to the 10 points stratosphere. It's a solid post, some skips in sentences, but beyond that pretty clean. Can't see how you beat the crap out of all those peeps and then claim they're okay/alive. | |
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DarkMaster
Number of Posts : 863
Age : 39
Location : In a daze.
Job/Interests : That's Officer DarkMaster to you, buddy.
Quote : I'm afraid of the dark.
Registration Date : 2010-07-18
| | Subject: Re: Tatsuya Okibi Rank Up Thread Tue Jun 19, 2012 1:01 pm | |
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Arawn
Number of Posts : 3440
Age : 43
Location : Here, but there
Job/Interests : Anything, but not everything
Quote : You were close, but I was right
Registration Date : 2010-06-23
| | Subject: Re: Tatsuya Okibi Rank Up Thread Wed Jun 20, 2012 11:27 am | |
| A place to call home: [2/10]
Long, but short. I know it's an odd thing to say, but it is what it is. For the most part plenty of post, and yet all rather slim. Conversation does that I guess. Just sending the boy away. Nothing really happened beyond that. Seems more developmental for Ten and her NPC than Tatsuya. | |
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DarkMaster
Number of Posts : 863
Age : 39
Location : In a daze.
Job/Interests : That's Officer DarkMaster to you, buddy.
Quote : I'm afraid of the dark.
Registration Date : 2010-07-18
| | Subject: Re: Tatsuya Okibi Rank Up Thread Sun Jul 15, 2012 1:34 pm | |
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Junko
Number of Posts : 521
Age : 28
Registration Date : 2010-10-30
| | Subject: Re: Tatsuya Okibi Rank Up Thread Sun Jul 15, 2012 3:37 pm | |
| Swampy Encounter: 4/10 - Writing was good, probably shoulda just killed him though.
Thinking: 5/10 - I really don't like the thread... It gets abit short in the end, but it is has a large number of posts. | |
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DarkMaster
Number of Posts : 863
Age : 39
Location : In a daze.
Job/Interests : That's Officer DarkMaster to you, buddy.
Quote : I'm afraid of the dark.
Registration Date : 2010-07-18
| | Subject: Re: Tatsuya Okibi Rank Up Thread Tue Jul 17, 2012 8:39 pm | |
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Follow the Morrigan
Number of Posts : 110
Age : 33
Location : Somewhere cold
Job/Interests : Job: I have (technically) five jobs, and one paycheck. / Interests: Cardfight, Daughter, RPGs
Quote : No, she doesn't have a dirty diaper. She just farted.
Registration Date : 2011-11-26
| | Subject: Re: Tatsuya Okibi Rank Up Thread Tue Jul 17, 2012 9:57 pm | |
| 10/10, and a muscle belt for your gigai. It's the best story I've read so far. | |
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DarkMaster
Number of Posts : 863
Age : 39
Location : In a daze.
Job/Interests : That's Officer DarkMaster to you, buddy.
Quote : I'm afraid of the dark.
Registration Date : 2010-07-18
| | Subject: Re: Tatsuya Okibi Rank Up Thread Thu Aug 16, 2012 6:07 pm | |
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Hibiki Jishin
Number of Posts : 71
Age : 29
Registration Date : 2012-01-18
| | Subject: Re: Tatsuya Okibi Rank Up Thread Fri Aug 17, 2012 5:06 pm | |
| Valhalla: Warrior's Paradise Part 2 [9/10] Loved it, just as much as the first. Extremely descriptive and rich in detail. Love the realism in it. Some parts of the fight get a little hard to follow, when doing more than one thing at a time, or when an action changes quickly to another, but all in all, damn good job keeping a general flow and making it easy enough to get a general idea. When's the next one?  | |
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DarkMaster
Number of Posts : 863
Age : 39
Location : In a daze.
Job/Interests : That's Officer DarkMaster to you, buddy.
Quote : I'm afraid of the dark.
Registration Date : 2010-07-18
| | Subject: Re: Tatsuya Okibi Rank Up Thread Sat Aug 18, 2012 7:23 pm | |
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Junko
Number of Posts : 521
Age : 28
Registration Date : 2010-10-30
| | Subject: Re: Tatsuya Okibi Rank Up Thread Sat Aug 18, 2012 7:59 pm | |
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DarkMaster
Number of Posts : 863
Age : 39
Location : In a daze.
Job/Interests : That's Officer DarkMaster to you, buddy.
Quote : I'm afraid of the dark.
Registration Date : 2010-07-18
| | Subject: Re: Tatsuya Okibi Rank Up Thread Tue Aug 21, 2012 9:37 pm | |
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Junko
Number of Posts : 521
Age : 28
Registration Date : 2010-10-30
| | Subject: Re: Tatsuya Okibi Rank Up Thread Tue Aug 21, 2012 9:41 pm | |
| Valhalla: Warrior's Paradise - Part 3 10.0/10
Only because I don't want you to have to write another thread to rank up...
Which of course you did.
RANKED UP | |
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DarkMaster
Number of Posts : 863
Age : 39
Location : In a daze.
Job/Interests : That's Officer DarkMaster to you, buddy.
Quote : I'm afraid of the dark.
Registration Date : 2010-07-18
| | Subject: Re: Tatsuya Okibi Rank Up Thread Mon Sep 03, 2012 11:29 pm | |
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Arawn
Number of Posts : 3440
Age : 43
Location : Here, but there
Job/Interests : Anything, but not everything
Quote : You were close, but I was right
Registration Date : 2010-06-23
| | Subject: Re: Tatsuya Okibi Rank Up Thread Wed Sep 05, 2012 5:35 pm | |
| The redemption of a samurai: [6/10]
Once again I braved the multi-person thread. Among those present you were the more powerful character, yet had some troublesome parts. Being the strongest means nothing with an undefined foe. With that in mind you addition of opponents was overlooked by the rest. So you were left to contend with them alone and then promptly leave. Shame things didn't get organized better. | |
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DarkMaster
Number of Posts : 863
Age : 39
Location : In a daze.
Job/Interests : That's Officer DarkMaster to you, buddy.
Quote : I'm afraid of the dark.
Registration Date : 2010-07-18
| | Subject: Re: Tatsuya Okibi Rank Up Thread Sun Sep 09, 2012 2:22 pm | |
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Arawn
Number of Posts : 3440
Age : 43
Location : Here, but there
Job/Interests : Anything, but not everything
Quote : You were close, but I was right
Registration Date : 2010-06-23
| | Subject: Re: Tatsuya Okibi Rank Up Thread Sun Sep 09, 2012 10:25 pm | |
| The encounter: [2/10]
Something was going to happen and yet nothing did. You role in the tale was more like a roadblock. They were going to do something. But upon your arrival things just died. Their typing did as well. That was the intention, but it seems like you too expected abit more. Everything went flat.
The induction to squad 2: [4/10]
Short and to the point. The title says it all. A meeting of new members, so not much was to be expected of it. A decent build up, and you got your new look established. True ninja now. | |
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DarkMaster
Number of Posts : 863
Age : 39
Location : In a daze.
Job/Interests : That's Officer DarkMaster to you, buddy.
Quote : I'm afraid of the dark.
Registration Date : 2010-07-18
| | Subject: Re: Tatsuya Okibi Rank Up Thread Sat Oct 06, 2012 1:13 pm | |
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Arawn
Number of Posts : 3440
Age : 43
Location : Here, but there
Job/Interests : Anything, but not everything
Quote : You were close, but I was right
Registration Date : 2010-06-23
| | Subject: Re: Tatsuya Okibi Rank Up Thread Mon Oct 08, 2012 12:55 am | |
| Recruit searching: [5/10]
Technically this it was a 4.5, but rounded up. (stupid decimals) Training becomes a meet and greet, and a gentle session it is. Reminded me of one of those old kung-fu flicks where they fought on poles like that. Any case looks like you made a good impression. Squad 2 converts another student. Where did all those 11th squad ruffians go? | |
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DarkMaster
Number of Posts : 863
Age : 39
Location : In a daze.
Job/Interests : That's Officer DarkMaster to you, buddy.
Quote : I'm afraid of the dark.
Registration Date : 2010-07-18
| | Subject: Re: Tatsuya Okibi Rank Up Thread Thu Jan 10, 2013 6:39 pm | |
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Arawn
Number of Posts : 3440
Age : 43
Location : Here, but there
Job/Interests : Anything, but not everything
Quote : You were close, but I was right
Registration Date : 2010-06-23
| | Subject: Re: Tatsuya Okibi Rank Up Thread Sat Jan 12, 2013 12:10 am | |
| Running Blind: [5/10] - An interesting intro, but a little stern talking and things ended quickly. Doubt the rough nature of those 12th squad people, but I'm biased. :p | |
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Arawn
Number of Posts : 3440
Age : 43
Location : Here, but there
Job/Interests : Anything, but not everything
Quote : You were close, but I was right
Registration Date : 2010-06-23
| | Subject: Re: Tatsuya Okibi Rank Up Thread Mon Jan 14, 2013 12:58 am | |
| The Retrieval: [9/10]
Okay don't kill me, please. The thread as a whole, naye the series of threads as a whole brings kicks through as a 10 (probably higher). But in the thread and your part 9 is the number I give. The fights high action and thrills, but in the end Raiden must fall and his plot into ruin. He was a overly proud man filled with hatred and power. Yet neither was enough to win the day. | |
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DarkMaster
Number of Posts : 863
Age : 39
Location : In a daze.
Job/Interests : That's Officer DarkMaster to you, buddy.
Quote : I'm afraid of the dark.
Registration Date : 2010-07-18
| | Subject: Re: Tatsuya Okibi Rank Up Thread Sat Jan 19, 2013 4:13 pm | |
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