Rizt Djem
Number of Posts : 25
Age : 34
Registration Date : 2011-08-08
 |  Subject: Rizt Djem rank up app.  Wed Aug 17, 2011 6:53 pm | |
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Bishamon Saitou
Number of Posts : 482
Age : 29
Location : Anywhere and everywhere
Job/Interests : stuff, and other stuff...
Quote : Ah swords...natures knives.
Registration Date : 2011-06-03
| | Subject: Re: Rizt Djem rank up app. Wed Aug 24, 2011 1:07 pm | |
| Satisfy My Hunger: 4/10
A good fight really, not much wrong with it, maybe could of described your attacks in a bit more detail, as some I had to read over a couple of times, to figure out what you were doing exactly.
The Hollow's Gathering: 3/10
It was okay, but the posts from both were quite short, and the thread overall was quite short, the read wasn't too bad, but just try and increase the post length, if you can't think of much too write, just throw in a few character thoughts, and maybe mention the weather, or the scenery now and again.
Overall Exp: 7 | |
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