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Koga Ikeda

Koga Ikeda


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Registration Date : 2011-06-01

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PostSubject: Koga Ikeda    Koga Ikeda  I_icon_minitimeWed Jun 01, 2011 7:01 pm

Hollow


Name: Koga Ikeda

Age: 389

Gender: Male

Height: 8’5” (as Hollow), 6’0” (as Arrancar)

Weight: 500 lbs. (200 lbs. when Arrancar)

Appearance:


Hollow appearance


Koga resembles a very muscular satyr in appearance, with muscular,
furry legs that end in large cloven hooves. Besides that, he also possesses a
pair of leathery bat-like wings that protrude from his back and when fully
expanded have a wingspan of about 30 ft. Though his legs are quite hairy, Koga’s
upper body is bare, except for a long mane of hair that goes down his back. At
several points on his body, there appear to be areas where bone is protruding
out from the flesh – at his collarbones, his shoulder blades, and his kneecaps.
Also, he has a pair of bony blades that protect his forearms; they are flat and
are not particularly good for stabbing forward, though his fingers end in claws
that are lethally sharp. His Hollow mask is thin and looks like the head of a
starving man – that is, it looks as if skin is stretched over the bone, with a
curiously under-emphasized jaw. From his large forehead a pair of horns come
out and twist in upon themselves – the kind of horns used for ramming, not
goring. Lastly, it should be noted that Koga’s skin is a deep violet color.



Personality: Koga is bipolar – he wavers between the general arrogance and
embodiment of sin that most Hollows and Arrancars do, but also lapses into deep
depression and self-pity fairly often. When he is being most Hollow-like, Koga
is firmly convinced that everything he does is justified by a higher power. He
goes on rampages that spare no one from his bloodlust. Curiously, when he is
depressed, Koga takes on a more sane personality, and blames this same unnamed
higher power for his “curse” as he calls it. When depressed, Koga won’t attack
helpless Pluses, and only will target his fellow Hollows which he justifies as
a twisted form of redemption.



History:


Koga remembers none of his life as a human, but as a
Hollow he has spent most of his time getting to know information about the new
world he lives in, as well as honing his newfound power. Other than that, his
past has not been particularly eventful.

Spirit power: 20

Speed: 15

Intelligence: 5

Fighting skill: 20

Custom Hollow Abilities:
Ability 1 Forma Fantasmal “Phantom Form”: Koga can make
all or part of his body become incorporeal so that physical attacks pass
harmlessly through him. When incorporeal, Koga does not suffer from physical
needs; that is, he does not need oxygen, nor food. In addition, if he hides
within something while incorporeal, whatever object he is hiding in, provided
it is big enough to cover him completely, completely obscures his reiatsu
signature. Obviously while hiding in a block of concrete or whatever, Koga
cannot see/hear or otherwise sense what is going on outside the object.
Generally this ability requires concentration, but he can use it on occasion to
avoid damage in combat. Once per three posts, Koga can use this technique to
avoid damage from a physical attack – however, not a reiatsu-based attack such
as kido or Cero. At rank 3, Koga will be able to use this once every other
post.


Ability 2 “Capa del Infierno” (Cloak of Hellfire): Koga can wreath himself in
what he calls hellfire. It differs from regular fire in that it does not appear
to need oxygen to burn, nor any discernible fuel source. That and it is violet
with flecks of other color in it depending on Koga’s mood. However, it only
seems to be able to burn when in close proximity to Koga (within 5 ft.) making
Koga a tough opponent to fight up close, but making them decidedly less
dangerous (not at all) when farther away. Obviously, the flames are not
physical things in that they don’t block physical strikes. They do however have
the capacity to burn through (i.e. weaken) reiatsu based attacks by a small
degree ( as if the attack was done at -5 Spirit Power) At rank 3, the range at
which the hellfire will continue to burn when separated from Koga will double
to 10 ft. At rank 5, that range doubles again to 20 ft., and the technique’s
ability to weaken reiatsu-based attacks will double to -10 Spirit Power.

Ability 3 “Ala del Pecado” (Wings of Sin): Koga’s wings glow with deep purple
reiatsu (almost black) as he flaps them violently and with speed that seems
impossible. In doing so, he adds his reiatsu to the air in order to create
purple tinged blades of wind to fly toward his intended target(s). At rank 4,
he will be able to instead of using these wings purely offensively, also use
them as an effective shield against attacks.

Ability 4 [at rank 3] “Aura de la Muerte” (Aura of Death): Koga’s very presence
becomes something to be feared. Anyone within 100 yards of Koga suffers a -10
to Spirit Power and a -5 to Fighting Skill. At rank 6, the stat decrease suffered increases to -15 SP and -10 FS. Finally, at rank 8, the stat decrease suffered increases to -15 SP and -15 FS. This aspect of the power is aesthetic, but when Koga touches weak organic matter such as grass, it instantly dies.

Will add Ability 5 at rank 6

RP Sample: This is Ryouta – so I’m not sure I need one.


Last edited by Koga Ikeda on Fri Jun 03, 2011 6:10 pm; edited 4 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: Koga Ikeda    Koga Ikeda  I_icon_minitimeWed Jun 01, 2011 10:56 pm

I love the character, but have some misgivings about the powers. The evolution of the power isn't a problem just the overall effect/cost/price ratio. I do believe someone else tried to have similar phase powers and it was just abandoned.

The first ability to nullify physical attacks overall is a potent ability, but the inability to defend against energy attacks balanced it out. The enhanced form removes that weakness complete and gives you avenue to attack some internally. A fairly lethal skill. Since you gave it cool down I can see this skill working, but nix the last part.

I was confused by your second skill, but it's just reiryoku based attacks not a person's spiritual power itself. No real issues there. The fourth skill is abit overpowered,but it's not til later so I'll hold off on judgement.
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PostSubject: Re: Koga Ikeda    Koga Ikeda  I_icon_minitimeWed Jun 01, 2011 11:07 pm

I removed the part about attacking organs internally, which is what you had a problem with, I believe?

As for the fourth one, it is supposed to be on par with a Shikai, correct? Sal's Shikai grants him +10 to SP/+15 to FS, which is more of an advantage than my technique offers passively, at least until he reaches Espada level, in which case it totally makes sense that the technique is more powerful.

As for its active effect as a tech, any suggestions you have now, or once I reach rank 4 would be happily listened to.
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PostSubject: Re: Koga Ikeda    Koga Ikeda  I_icon_minitimeFri Jun 03, 2011 12:46 am

Well Sal is a strange one actually. His stat increase is the ability his sword grants. Most shinigami opt for an ability rather than the boost. You technique lowers anyone within range's abilities by 10 with an additional 10 upon hit. Effectively you can reduce two of their stats by 3 Ranks.(+5 at 1, +5 at 2, and +10 at 3) You have 300 feet in which to affect someone so I think the aura by itself is fine.
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PostSubject: Re: Koga Ikeda    Koga Ikeda  I_icon_minitimeFri Jun 03, 2011 9:58 am

OK I've reduced it to just the aura, but increased the amount of SP decreased to 15. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Koga Ikeda    Koga Ikeda  I_icon_minitimeFri Jun 03, 2011 5:49 pm

Okay first off I have a problem with your first ability...while I see possible complaints from others in the future. I would ask for a longer cool down for an ability of that magnitude. I am also concerned with stats that directly lower others stats, I am sorry but that leads to trouble later down the road. I like the story behind the character sorta familiar but good.

I dont approve it. I am sorry mate but with those powers it is too easy to godmod
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Kaoseu Enjel

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Location : In the midst of disaster, dancing upon the scalding remains of this forever burning creation that has been deemed Hell. Care to join me? >:D
Job/Interests : Working on it/ Writing, Drawing, BMX
Quote : Fear is the strength which allows me to live...
Registration Date : 2010-05-15

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PostSubject: Re: Koga Ikeda    Koga Ikeda  I_icon_minitimeFri Jun 03, 2011 5:58 pm

Well, I think he sounds like a delightfully macabre fellow. The fourth ability seems more like it's Bankai equivalent, though, since it's that big of a drop in SP and FS, but I'd be willing to accept maybe -5/10 SP and -5 FS to start, increasing w/ rank, that way it's progressive, and can be part of the evolutionary process (just a thought). As for the first ability, not to disagree with you Arty, but in that state, he can do nothing in return, and it's only physical based attacks. With a Reiatsu enforced blade or kick, he can't slip through. I think it's fine, but that's just me. So, that's all my problems with it. Other than that, can't wait til this guy gets in action.
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PostSubject: Re: Koga Ikeda    Koga Ikeda  I_icon_minitimeFri Jun 03, 2011 6:03 pm

Considering that having a significantly higher intel grants the same ability (which isn't hard to do, since most people's intels are 5-10) every other post, I fail to see how this ability is unfair. I'd be willing to negotiate on the cooldown time - but I'm thinking perhaps lose the ability to use it to avoid reiatsu-based attacks, but keep the cooldown as is as a compromise? Yay or nay?

As for the complaint about the aura: as stated before, Sal's Zan does basically the same thing, giving himself a stat advantage over other people of his rank. I'm not seeing how this is any different than that tech. I suppose I could change it to a simple boost of stats, but honestly, I feel this fits in better with the character. Actually, I like Kao's idea of growth for the aura better than my original.

So it would be, starting at -10 SP/-5 FS to start, and at rank 6 (Arrancarhood) it would increase to -15 SP/-10 FS and finally at rank 8 (Espadahood) it would top out at -15 SP/-15 FS.

How's that sound?
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Number of Posts : 587
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Location : In the midst of disaster, dancing upon the scalding remains of this forever burning creation that has been deemed Hell. Care to join me? >:D
Job/Interests : Working on it/ Writing, Drawing, BMX
Quote : Fear is the strength which allows me to live...
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PostSubject: Re: Koga Ikeda    Koga Ikeda  I_icon_minitimeFri Jun 03, 2011 6:06 pm

The aura sounds great. And as for the first ability, if you would like to change it, feel free. Then no one could complain at all, though it was fine the other way around too.
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PostSubject: Re: Koga Ikeda    Koga Ikeda  I_icon_minitimeFri Jun 03, 2011 6:14 pm

k i made the edits.

(can't decide between this purple and the dark red. decisions decisions)
#rp'er problems
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Kaoseu Enjel

Kaoseu Enjel


Male
Number of Posts : 587
Age : 29
Location : In the midst of disaster, dancing upon the scalding remains of this forever burning creation that has been deemed Hell. Care to join me? >:D
Job/Interests : Working on it/ Writing, Drawing, BMX
Quote : Fear is the strength which allows me to live...
Registration Date : 2010-05-15

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PostSubject: Re: Koga Ikeda    Koga Ikeda  I_icon_minitimeFri Jun 03, 2011 6:22 pm

Welcome aboard, Hollow ^-^

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