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PostSubject: Crushed by an insect   Crushed by an insect I_icon_minitimeSun Jun 07, 2009 10:46 am

It was a blustery day leaves swirling round Jin's vision as he strolled through the barracks of the 13 gotei squads, he was in a cheerfull mood,well rested, no assignments to complete and no classes this was a good day. Jin had preety much finished his training as a recruit and was preparing for his final test before graduating as a member of the Gotei 13 it seemed an intense prospect actually becoming one of the shinigami to represent Seretei in the war against hollow. A position of honour wasnt usually something that bothered Jin but as of late he'd actually become quite immersed in his progress actively training to become a stronger shinigami and this was where it all lead. After speaking to Luitenant Kaiyo who'd inspired him to try to attune with his blade he'd researched the matter a little more at seretei's library finding out that he would need to meditate with his blade achieving a trance like state that would transfer his consciousness from this world to thiers.

He was excited every Zan-pak-tou was different and he wanted to find out what his was like, apparently when he went to the Zan-pak-tou's dimention he would get to meet his blade in spritual form seeing the avatar that represented it, sounded preety cool.

He finally made his way out of the concrete garden that housed the squad building's striding toward his usual spot on the grassy knoll of the training field. He had left his shoes in his room thinking that the feel of nature under his feet may help him attune with his surrounding (just another quick fix he hoped would make this training less work) as he walked throught the field each blade of grass tickling the underside's of his feet with they're damp outer shell of dew. The birds chirped in the distance a harmouneous chrous that lifted Jin's spirits as he sat crossing his legs placing his katana on his lap. He closed his eye's opening his palms and placing on on the blades tip and the other at the edge of its hilt. As his eyes closed he let his reiatsu flow through his body coursing through every cell, his katana acting as a conduit from his left hand to his right. Slowly he could feel the reiatsu current building in speed,faster and faster it flowed channeling through him like some kind of spritual highway his spirit pressure building. The strain it was putting on his boddy grew and grew the speed of the current never stopping its ascent, the pressure built still more how could he be expeted to contain this it was ripping him apart from the inside fibre by fibre but he refused to release it.
.............Darkness.......nothing but black..........no more chirping...........the dew was gone........cometo think of it alll his senses were dead....WAS HE!!!???

An orange glow began to filter through his sealed eyelids the warm shade setting of his internal alarmclock. Consciousness slowly began to diffuse back through his being, gradually regaining his senses and awareness, at the same time noticng whatever he was laying on was kinda wet and sticky and speaking of discomfort he must have lost consciousness near flora of some kind because the it felt like there were something down his back causing an itching sensation. He slowly raised his head looking down to see what it was he'd lain in only to realise that there was no grass where he lay instead the floor was covered in moss, and what he thought was sticky dew actually turned out to be.....no thats not it.......it had to be something else....IT WAS A SACK OF FREAKING SPIDER HATCHLINGS thats what was itching him these things were crawling all other him. He frantically began swiping at his back, hair, mid section and any other part of his anatomy he could reach trying to exterminate the eight legged freaks covering him. Finally when he thought he got them all off him (and the hatching sack had recieved a sufficient stomping) he began to make his way through what could only be described as an amazonian style rain forest. but where you'd expect to see tigers, monkeys, panthers or even an exotic bird or too there were just bugs bugs bugs and more freaking bugs. They were everywhere centipedes scuttling around tree trunks, Ants enveloping nearly all of the moss covered canvase that made up the base of this jungle, praying mantis sat poised on leaves just waiting for a tasty morsel to come within range,the best part was these vermin didnt even obey the laws of nature he'd just spent several minutes trying to sneak his was past a gargantuan mosquito on prick from that monster and he was a gonner, but at least on the bright side you had to take a second look at any flat surface and you couldnt tell how much of it was made up of camoflaged moth's(bright side being used in the lossest sense of the term but since that aspect wasnt trying to kill him it seem like a pro, one that was severely outweighed by the mountain of con's).....and the fly's o good god the fly's evey inhale was a battle for supremacy between the hovering winged pests and the oxygen Jin desperately needed in the onsetting panic attack.

It was alright he told himself, this would all be okay just remember why your here. Thinking about it (since whilst traipsing through this monotonous terrain with no idea of his direction thinking was preety much all he could do) as a Death God who was it he actually had to pray to to get outta this hell hole, maybe if he prayed to the captain commander he'd come and rescue him hmmmm or maybe even kaiyo....oooo maybe another ability he got as a death god later would be to hear the prayers of the living that'd be kinda cool. Sigh distraction once again only this time it was slightly welcome a calming release from the endless torture of his trek through this puzzleing labyrinth of vegetation.

He finally saw some light a beckoning beacon among the inposing shadown of the over grown plantlif of this surreal expanse. Jin really had to ask himself what the hell kind of Zan-pak-tou had he brought into the spirit world for it too inhabit a place like this, a little worrying in his mind. As he forced his way out into shining bliss through the encroaching vines and spore releasing plants he could only think of one thing maybe now he had his shikai mayb..........hold on a minute spore releasing plant's that couldnt be *thump* Jin collapsed falling over paralysed landing straight on his face or rather straight on his nose a thick cherry liquid began to gush from what used to be Jin's nasal cavaties but were now no more than pool's for the contents of ruptured blood vessles.

As the blood pooled under his face which was now balanced on what was formely known as his nose he felt a strong wind fanning on his skin the cool currents felt as if they were carrying away the pain in their free flowing draughts. The agony of his nose (which would have been more apparent if paralysis hadnt kept him from howling his feelings) slowly wafted away along with his aprehensions at being in this place.And he could move the feeling was returning to him he tried too stagger up his his dull limbs unable to respond to his commands resulting in him once again falling to the ground but he wouldnt give up again and again he forced himself to his feet only to find himself back in his original position, untill finally he managed to regain some mesure of control steadying himself on his feet.

It was then that he saw the source of the winds that had allowed him movement, in the middle of the clearing a butterfly hovered but the thing was gigantic easily twice if not 3 times Jins height with an unimaginable wingspan. It was puple in colour formed of some kind of crystilline mineral just hovering facing Jin's direction. "Ahhh what the hell is it now" he wondered nose broken, muscles fatigued and a back that looked like the face of a greasy teen after enduring the attack from the fangs of those arachnids Jin just couldnt be bothered anymore this place clogged his lungs with a thick mist that carried the aroma of bug shit and his clothes were spattered with blood and now he was in the middle of a face off with a batterfly that looked like it could snap him in two with a beat of its wings. Shikai or no shikai Jin just wanted too leave.

NPC Suisho Kochou (litterally meaning Crystal butterfly) : Yagami Jin i am Suisho Kochou, i am the face of you blade

shock gripped jin's features locking them in they're expression, mouth gaping he'd actually done it he completed his quest, found the avatar to his blade.....ahhh balls he had no idea where to go from here what did he just ask the beast to be his bitch and fight for him on command, nothing in the realm of death gods was ever that simple he was in for some more pain.

"for a butterfly you got a preety manly voice" Jin commented only to feel the heat of the glare he recieved in return
he couldnt see the glare this thing didnt seem to be able to make any expressions but he could definately feel it upon his skin, and for that matter how was this beast made entirely of crystal even talking to him, the thing had no mouth.


NPC Suisho Kochou: You need to learn some respect Your talking to the bug king and your nothing more than a pupa

as if to illustrate his point with a flap of his wings he was suddenly parrallel to Jin casually slicing Jin's cheek open with the sharp edge of his crystal wing's before somehow once more appearing before him.


"Gaahhh" Jin exclaimed clutching at his cheek what the hell was this thing it was fast and they were fighting it the beast's territory Jin was at a disadvantage.

"Fine lets do this i need to rest im gonna beat you down and your gonna respond when i call to you from then on"


NPC Suisho Kochou: Agreed but lose and know that i will not give you a second chance you wil be a shinigami without shikai or bankai for eternity

"whatever like i have time to be coming back to a place like this anyway this is it im gonna beat you here and its over"

With the trash talk out the way Jin began by using shunpo to appear right infront of the beast attacking it head on with his katana, the strike let out a ringing chime as it connected but it appeared to be to no avail, Suisho just lay himself out flat and began to spin with increasing velocity grinding against Jin's blade like a whetstone, without warning Suisho made a sudden movement that sent Jin reeling to his back.

"damnit" he was quickly back on his feet with an acrobatic back flip a the puple spinning blade ground into the soil he lain strewn across seconds erlier.

Jin jumped landing on the insect's wings as it arose from it's offensive on the helpless soil, stabbing his blade down repeatedly trying to at least make a crack in the crystal behemoth. But before he knew what was happening the buttefly had dispersed into several smaller butterfly now all circling Jin swooping in ever now and again to make quick lacerations across his skin never relinquishing they're attack for a second, aiming for one good slice on a vein or artery that would end the fight for Jin.

But he wouldnt back down swinging his katana in a haze of painful fury at his attacks having so little effect on his foe, he was at a loss as too how too defeat his enemy so many targets from so many directions he was one man, he could never defeat them all.

as the sharp crystal edges tore through his flesh an idea finally came to him, he began too run , tearing through the woods with the aid of shunpo, every one of his purple pursuer's slicing through tree's and branches slowly gaining on him.

as he ran he released as much reiatsu as he could sucking it out from every crack and crevice in his soul this would be one final strike he had to go all in, the energy gathered in his chest an ever growing ball of hope constantly added to by the dregs of spiritual energy he was managing to claw together, he could feel he was reacheing his limit every few steps he tripped and stubled his reiatsu no longer strong enough to maintain his shunpo he could feel he was ready it had to be now, the crystal menaces had caught up slicing at his back, every insect in the jungle seemed in on this persuit fly's clouding his vision giant ladybug's in his path desperately trying to misplace his footing.

Jin swung round facing the mass of fluttering purple wings

"Hdou number 5:Disarm" he yelled as an invisible pulse was sent forth crashing into the crystal butterfly's and emitting a splintering sound as the butterflys began to crack shaterring into shards and falling to the floor.

"HELL YEAH learn who your fighting Jin Yagami top shinigami"

the reason for Jins success had been all down to the way he'd moulded the reiatsu before releasing the spell, whilst charging the kidou he vibrated his reiatsu meaning the spell had the same effect, he wasnt exactly sure what but he remembered being taught in class that vibration's did something bad to crystal he just couldn't remember what. It was time's like this he wished he pay'ed more attention to the tutors. But that didnt matter now he'd won and that was all that counted


NPC Suisho Kochou: Well done Jin Yagami you've proven yourself a worthy comrade call my name and my power will be brought forth. Goodbye yagami.

with that the world before him dissolved leaving him with nothing but darkness a seamless transition back to the real world (well real for shinigami anyway)


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PostSubject: Re: Crushed by an insect   Crushed by an insect I_icon_minitimeSun Jun 07, 2009 3:13 pm

well i've checked the spelling and grammar so it should be preety much sorted
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PostSubject: Re: Crushed by an insect   Crushed by an insect I_icon_minitimeSun Jun 07, 2009 7:12 pm

Shikai Template

Call out phrase: Agitarsi, Suisho Kochou (Flutter, Crystal Butterfly)

Description of released form:
Suisho kochou is a control/kidou type
when released the blade glows for a couple of seconds before the whole sword (blade guard and hilt) disperse into five identicle indigo coloured butterflys that have the appearance of being made of a crystal material. the five butterfly hover over Jin circling his head he can guide they're movement with reiatsu embued hand movements. Each butterfly is about 3/4 of a ft in length with a wing span of 1 1/2 ft theyre edges are razor sharp allowing them to be used for cutting e.g a fly by slicing but this is rarely ever used as it is too open and in comparison to something like flash step too slow. Although it is useful for killing many weak enemies quickly with a low reiatsu cost. When Suisho kochou is released Jin relies mainly on his strong kidou skills for offense and defense to make up for his lack of a katana he also uses his impressive level of shunpo for evasion (OOC:although not all that special now these will be the two main area's i work on along with spirit pressure and will be where Jin excells)



Abilities: Abilities require a description. 4 lines minimum.

Ability 1: Resonation, this is Suisho kochou's primary ability.The five butterflies each give of a note at an extremely high yet specific pitch, in cases where the enemy is much weaker than Jin (large difference in spiritual pressure's) this alone can cause unconsciousness but it also causes some of the bonds between the sprit particles to split allowing the butterfly's to shatter into shard's the movement of which Jin then controls(once again through Reiatsu imbued hand movements) he uses these shards to stab and shred at the enemy with the possibility of lacerating them hundreds of times within seconds. The resonance frequency required to split the bonds in the butterflies changes each time the Zan-pak-tou is release avoiding the possibility of an enemy learning it and using it to they're advantage.


Ability 2: Gained after "200" amount of ZE.


Ability 3: Gained after "300" amount of ZE.
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PostSubject: Re: Crushed by an insect   Crushed by an insect I_icon_minitimeMon Jun 08, 2009 2:21 pm

Just give it one last fine comb for spellings probably just some typos that you missed other than that it's good to go.
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PostSubject: Re: Crushed by an insect   Crushed by an insect I_icon_minitimeMon Jun 08, 2009 2:23 pm

ahh damn my unobservancy (not completely sure if thats a word) but thanks
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PostSubject: Re: Crushed by an insect   Crushed by an insect I_icon_minitimeMon Jun 08, 2009 3:11 pm

Oh just a tip, try to use microsfot word when you type.
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PostSubject: Re: Crushed by an insect   Crushed by an insect I_icon_minitimeMon Jun 08, 2009 3:16 pm

i'm actually a little ashamed i didnt think of that lol it's so obvious as well, thanks man that how ill be writing my longer post's from here on lol
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PostSubject: Re: Crushed by an insect   Crushed by an insect I_icon_minitimeMon Jun 08, 2009 3:43 pm

Ok well you know what the spelling isn't to bad in it atm so i'm goning to approve it. And yeah using word is really helpful.
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PostSubject: Re: Crushed by an insect   Crushed by an insect I_icon_minitimeMon Jun 08, 2009 3:45 pm

Thank you very much Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Crushed by an insect   Crushed by an insect I_icon_minitimeFri Jun 12, 2009 12:03 pm

OOC: sorry this took so long to post lol i got distracted

Jin was once again on the vibrant green turfs of the training field, sat cross legged Zan-pak-tou lain across his lap, It was time for him to refine his connection with Suisho Kochou and acquire a little more of his power. Jin had heard that as your connection to your Zan-pak-tou grows you can unlock more of it abilities increasing the weapons versatility which was exactly what he was planning to do. As he sat in silence eye’s closed focusing on the very essence of his blade, he let his mind become devoid of thought only silence filling his senses and emptiness consuming him. He could feel the essence of the world he lived in dissolving in his surrounding as he was transported to meet the spirit of his blade.

The familiar smell of wet moss and humid vegetation filled his nostrils, he had returned he knew it immediately. The warmth of the Amazonian jungle wrapped around his body cloaking him. Finally he finished indulging in the lush beauty of his surrounding’s opening his eye’s and clambering to his feet, lain over by the trees on the other side of the all too reminiscent clearing lay the sparkling crystal body of Suisho Kochou once again proving just how much of Jin’s personality had passed down as hereditary.

“Oi Suisho-san I can’t be staying here all day at least wake up and greet me”

The giant crystal insect arose in one fluid motion seemingly un-phased by his call as though it had been in the process of getting up anyway.

NPC Suisho: “Yagami it has been a while since we’ve spoken in person what reason have you to disturb my slumber, you of all people should know how agitating it is to be disturbed from rest”

“Calm down Suisho-san you have my apologies I promise this will be the last time for a while, I was wondering if we could explore you power a little more”

NPC Suisho: “If a new ability is what it will take to resume my rest than that is what we shall do. I’ve watched you grow and I believe you are ready to handle this, so prepare yourself.

With that the crystal creature split into its ten miniature forms swirling around Jin like a purple vortex before releasing some kind of noxious neon green gas. The spirit had wasted no time getting straight into battle not even allowing Jin so much as a warning he must have been pretty pissed at Jin for waking him.

The gas burnt at Jins flesh eating away his skin until sore bloody patches of muscles became visible, his eyes clamped shut for fear of injuring his vision he couldn’t see what the hell was going on, the gas continued to corrode away at him gnawing through the skin of his leg until a tendon began to bulge out into a visible position. Acting on instinct Jin flash stepped upwards crashing back to the ground mere moments later as his leg gave way under his body’s weight falling less than a meter from the plume of acidic gas the butterflies had released. As the grains of dirt ground they’re way into his open sore’s he ripped his eyelids from the sealed state to look at the avatar before him, blood oozed from the devoured patches of muscle.

“what the hell was that shit, you trying too kill me the next time I wake you up calm the hell down before acting”

NPC Suisho: that was a taste of my power and now you have experienced it you may go forth and weild it, now leave my sanctuary you whiney urchin I have other matter with which too attend

“YOU OVER AGGRESSIVE LAZY BASTARD” Jin yelled as the surrounding scenery dissolved and he was expelled back to the real world, as much as he respected the beauty, grace and power of the Zan-pak-tou he’d been chosen too wield sometimes he felt like it was just too damn superior getting all up himself and talking down to Jin like he was nothing but a pawn, he was gonna have to remind that bastard one day they were partners……..when he could be bothered.
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PostSubject: Re: Crushed by an insect   Crushed by an insect I_icon_minitimeFri Jun 12, 2009 12:19 pm

Shikai Template

Call out phrase: Agitarsi, Suisho Kochou (Flutter, Crystal Butterfly)

Description of released form:
Suisho kochou is a control/kidou type
when released the blade glows for a couple of seconds before the whole sword (blade guard and hilt) disperse into five identicle indigo coloured butterflys that have the appearance of being made of a crystal material. the five butterfly hover over Jin circling his head he can guide they're movement with reiatsu embued hand movements. Each butterfly is about 3/4 of a ft in length with a wing span of 1 1/2 ft theyre edges are razor sharp allowing them to be used for cutting e.g a fly by slicing but this is rarely ever used as it is too open and in comparison to something like flash step too slow. Although it is useful for killing many weak enemies quickly with a low reiatsu cost. When Suisho kochou is released Jin relies mainly on his strong kidou skills for offense and defense to make up for his lack of a katana he also uses his impressive level of shunpo for evasion (OOC:although not all that special now these will be the two main area's i work on along with spirit pressure and will be where Jin excells)



Abilities: Abilities require a description. 4 lines minimum.

Ability 1: Resonation, this is Suisho kochou's primary ability.The five butterflies each give of a note at an extremely high yet specific pitch, in cases where the enemy is much weaker than Jin (large difference in spiritual pressure's) this alone can cause unconsciousness but it also causes some of the bonds between the sprit particles to split allowing the butterfly's to shatter into shard's the movement of which Jin then controls(once again through Reiatsu imbued hand movements) he uses these shards to stab and shred at the enemy with the possibility of lacerating them hundreds of times within seconds. The resonance frequency required to split the bonds in the butterflies changes each time the Zan-pak-tou is release avoiding the possibility of an enemy learning it and using it to they're advantage.


Ability 2: Corrode, the butteflies each release a cloud of neon green corrosive gas which impairs the enemy's vision as its thick and opaque possibly blinding them if if the eye suffers prolonged exposure whilst also burning at the victims flesh. Each butterfly individually releases a relitively small amount off gas but when two or three release it together the size becomes much more imposing. usually used as an ambushing technique, it does moderate damage to strong enemies incresing the longer they stay enveloped in the cloud but is usually used as a set up for another strike due to the impaired vision it causes. although very effiecient at getting rid of large populations of weakling's the reiatsu cost of the move make's it and unsuitable choice for a task like that.


Ability 3: Gained after "300" amount of ZE.
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PostSubject: Re: Crushed by an insect   Crushed by an insect I_icon_minitimeFri Jun 12, 2009 2:16 pm

Approved mate.
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PostSubject: Re: Crushed by an insect   Crushed by an insect I_icon_minitimeTue Jun 29, 2010 2:55 pm

Dark winds blew into the dirt ridden ruins of outer rukongai, it seemed it had been long since any touch of civility had been aloud to foster here. Nothing around but shattered corpses of abode’s that were once habitable, shards of glass lay strewn across the streets sheeted in dirt, like an endless sea of jagged teeth peering upward from the very ground itself ready too tear into the flesh of any of those unlucky enough too fall upon it’s unwelcoming expanse. The cracked, charred and just down right decrepit doorways and ally ways played host too dancing shadow’s shielding the view of that which lay within their depths, no doubt the so called home of some vagabond left too roam these street’s by the fickle hand of fate no longer able too integrate into mainstream society those who were truly unfit too be classed as civil were sent here in the district of rukongai furthest from the center where they would be lucky too survive the first day let alone meet back with the life they had known before.

Yes it was here in the sparsely populated entrails of a village that Jin was today training, even though it was a complete “shit hole” as a former comrade of his would have put it the weather itself still bathed it in glowing warmth although too someone as lazy as himself that extra heat was truly no bonus when taking part in the intensities of training. There was a reason he had picked such a abnormal location and that was due too the possibility of collateral damage in today’s endeavour, the population of hollow was ever increasing in strength and number and it was up too Jin as a vice captain of the Gotei 13 too keep it’s noise quelled, this obviously not being a quest that was solo in nature but it was still one in which he held a rather large role. So too increase the efficiency with which he executed his duties and in doing so executed vast number’s of hollow he would today be aiming too realise the second form of the sword he wielded, Suisho kouchuu it was a beautiful Zan-pak-tou that was moulded easily in Jin’s image it’s qualities of insect like complexity the perfect metaphor for the 6th division vice-captains unorthodox intellect, a complex network of thought’s that all threaded together too produce his quick wit and razor sharp combat intuition. Whilst the diamond had composition of it’s released form was the emblazoned imagery of his unyielding will given physical form, his two most astute qualities sealed up inside the very katana that sat at his hip.

He would evolve their relationship, taking his bond with Suisho kochuu to the next level and it was that passionate motivation that had him sitting on the dusty streets of this once thriving urban hub of criminal activity, now void of even that form of attention. His eyes closed the man allowed the warm sunlight rays rain down upon his robed form, warming him and allowing him too slip more seamlessly into the transition from consciousness into that secret dimension of which only he knew the inner world of the shinigami where one was able too converse freely with the spirit of their blade.

Now awakening from the phasing between realities he opened his eye’s bringing himself too a standing position in the densely forested area, now familiar with the location as he had already visited it several times.

“Oi, butterfly bastard get out here” Jin yelled in no mood for hide and seek and still rather sore about the little shit spraying corrosive acid in his face on their last meeting. At his call a heavy gust collided with his back sending him sprawling forward, apparently the indignant crystal insect did not much enjoy being given orders. No change there then.

Rolling back too his feet he turned too face the mineral based creature flapping now in front of him, keeping levitated with fluid stroke’s.

“We both know why you’re here” it resonated taking that smug and superior tone Jin recognised “and the deal still stand’s the same as it did previously, if you wish too control my power you must first endure it”

“Tch, like I’d be forced into submission by a damned insect. Don’t think so highly of yourself your simply my tool” Jin replied, his tone drawn out and lazy he seemed to be incapable of ever showing motivation for things even though beneath the surface his ambition toward this goal was a burning unquenchable flame there was literally nothing that could stop him achieving it.

As Rayne finished his comment a shattering could be heard like glass on concrete ringing out in echo over the forested area, due to their location the pitched noise that usually went with it no longer necessary, the one huge mass of crystal that had before formed Suisho Kochuu had now split into 11 smaller forms each still far greater in size than any normal butterfly. Flash stepping backward Jin’s image dropped briefly out of the visible spectrum phasing back into existence some 10m away from the levitating creature’s a ball of white light amassing infront of his right index finger that was pointed towards the middle most entity,

“Hadou 4: White lightning” he muttered blasting the bold of pure energy towards his target with pinpoint precision striking it in the center in an attempt to pre-empt whatever attack the spirit of his Zan-pak-tou was planning. The bolt hit the floating object but the pure violet crystalline insect replica gave a fierce flap of it’s wing’s and suddenly the attack was slicing through the air back at Jin, in an instant searing through the flesh of it right shoulder and leaving an open hole in it’s trail the shinigami having been too shocked by the event’s too even react.

“GAARGH” he cried out in pain the sensation of the wound only now having burrowed through the shock and made it’s path too his cerebrum so he was fully able too experience the simultaneous burning, stinging sensation.

His right arm dropped limply too his side, the white lightning attack having pierced straight through his shoulder at the joint preventing the majority of the limb’s mobility.

“The hell was that” Jin stutter Pain messing with the flow of his words, as his left hand drew the katana at his hip in a flash keen not too make any more slip up’s now down too only one arm.

“You’ll find out soon enough boy” the awnser came out in that same resonating form this time produced collectively by all the butterflies who had now taken too swirling about Jin in a blurred circle.

A shattering burst out again now from behind, but as he tried to turn his head the noise began too engulf him coming from all around he was no longer able too tell it’s direction of the intent of it just what the hell was going on here? And then it began. First with a nip at his thigh, a quick slice that left a thin slit of a would and a torn trail in his robe, then another at the shoulder and third in quick succession this time it was the forehead, his eye’s weren’t quick enough too catch the action any he could not predict it only endure it. The projectiles themselves too small and at too high a velocity too be tracked. The stream of endless pain got further intensified as the interval between attack shortened until within the span of about 60 seconds he could literally see nothing but a swirling mass of violet as the shards tore into his flesh from all angles, ripping and lacerating him constantly the blood that was now filling his throat making it impossible to cry out or in fact make any vocal noise too verbalise his pain, blood sprayed out in all directions as artery after atery was torn into exposure by the crystal fragment leaking the vital crimson that filled his body asunder out into the expansive undergrowth where it would fertilise the plant life.

His barely conscious mind vaguely registered that the attacks had ceased as his limp body dropped too it’s knees before falling face first into the ground, blood dribbling from his parted lips. The once black shinigami uniform now completely converted too a deep rouge not a square millimitere of his body that hadn’t been in someway violated he was completely riddled with torn flesh. One of the worse area’s’ of damage being his forearm where thick strands of severed muscle tissue dangled freely in the air the layers of skin and flesh that were supposed to keep it hidden having been carved away by the sea of crystal that had swarmed him. As he lay there unfeeling, his brain overloaded by pain and unable tooo handle the intensity of the sensation, he felt his grip on reality slipping away. He was fading too the darkness…….and the saddest part was he just didn’t care all he wanted was for it too end, for this tormenting endless agony too leave him. It had previously been the physical torture that caused him this sensation but now it was nothing more than the agony of failure. His goal was left unachieved he’d been unable too defend himself and it had ended with his own fatality how sad that this was the final chapter in his life, beaten by his own tool, how pathetic it was.

……………….And then it was gone no more, he could feel, he could move, and not only that but he wasn’t horizontal he was seated. The hell was this? It seemed he had not in fact failed the task he had endeavoured too complete but had instead hung on long enough for that insect too deem him worthy he was in fact the victor in this match and thusly had been returned too his home world.

“Tch” was all he could manage his aching muscle’s still remembering the torture they had been put through, it seemed pain within the mind became physical if you believed it too be real enough.



Training for Shikai ability 3 Refract and Bankai form.
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Jin


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PostSubject: Re: Crushed by an insect   Crushed by an insect I_icon_minitimeSat Jul 03, 2010 3:16 pm

Uhhh Bump?
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Kaoseu Enjel

Kaoseu Enjel


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Number of Posts : 587
Age : 29
Location : In the midst of disaster, dancing upon the scalding remains of this forever burning creation that has been deemed Hell. Care to join me? >:D
Job/Interests : Working on it/ Writing, Drawing, BMX
Quote : Fear is the strength which allows me to live...
Registration Date : 2010-05-15

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Approved
(though you could think about writing Jin actually acheiving the ability.... just a comment, or bit of "constructive criticism...")


For those of you that don't check his profile, and wanna see it here:



Ability 3: Refract,
This is the ability of his crystal butterflies to refract and alter any energy based attacks with which they come into contact, it requires the butterfly to be in the Path of the attack and once hit by it the butterfly will either disperse the energy of use a flap of it’s wings to redirect it back towards the source, this ability only works against attacks within reason and must be used with sensibility for example it could block VC kidou up to 60 and Captain kidou up to 30 but one also has too consider that the opponents spiritual pressure levels/rank will also affect the power of they’re energy attacks and thus this will alter what can and cannot be blocked. The butterflies can also use this ability against shikai attacks but then there is a much greater chance of them being overpowered by it, if a butterfly is overpowered by an attack it will shatter into the shard form and disperse the energy or if the attack was much greater in power it will shatter the butterfly and continue it’s path. Any butterflies shattered through this method cannot reform for 2 Post’s



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Number of Posts : 587
Age : 29
Location : In the midst of disaster, dancing upon the scalding remains of this forever burning creation that has been deemed Hell. Care to join me? >:D
Job/Interests : Working on it/ Writing, Drawing, BMX
Quote : Fear is the strength which allows me to live...
Registration Date : 2010-05-15

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FYI... I'm gonna re-lock the topic... k?
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