Hissori walked into the Dojo hoping to find someone in there. The room was quite warm not the best conditions for Hissori seeings he liked it better when it was alot cooler. He awaited in the Dojo for several minutes and then heard the doors open. It seemed to be another starting Shinigami by the name of Zekkou. Hissori walked up towards him.
" Hello there, Im Hissori of squad 11."

" Hello, Im Zekkou of squad 13. Im new to the squad. Umm would you like to have a spar to train our swords?"

Hissori nodded as he grabbed the hilt of his Zanpakutou and lept backwards about 25 meters away from Zekkou. As they both unsheated there Zanpakutous, Hissori had something to say before it all started.

" Umm. I thing. No heavy blows ect. I just need to learn some more tactics so if you want to hit something aim for my blade."

Zekkou nodded as he rushed towards Hissori. Hissori got into a comfortable battle stance as he blocked Zekkou's normal sized katana easily feeling the force of it making Hissori excited.

Aww man i love the sound of a sword when it crashes with another one it just makes me want to stay here all day and train.

Hissori started swinging his Zanpakutou in random places trying to frustrate Zekkou but he seemed to know what Hissori was doig and just lept back and struck towards him. There swords met together as Zekkou raised his left foot kicking Hissori in the side of the head sending him to the floor. Hissor began to get up rubbing his head and smiled towards Zekkou.

" Good shot mate. I didnt really see that coming i got a alot to learn i guess."

Hissori didnt hesitate anymore and went straight back into the action exchanging several blade strikes into Zekkou's Zanpakutou taking charge of the fighting. The force Hissori was usingwas stronger then Zekkou pushing him towards the wall where Hissori used his Zanpakutou to raise Zekkou's so Hissori could kick him in the sterum but once Zekkou's Zanpakutou was raised he used his speed and agility to move out of the way as Hissori kicked the wall. Hissori jumped around as he saw a flying kick into Hissori's stomach causing him to crash into the wall.

Hissori jumped up after feeling a little bit of pain. He grabbed his Zanpakutou that was laying next to him. Zekkou stood there smiling at him and taunted Hissori to come get him. Hissori used his speed to get to the right of Zekkou quickly and rushed in for an attack. Zekkou, being a left hander had to reach his sword all the way around. And Hissori's force was heavier then Zekkou which caused Zekkou's Zanpakutou to force itself back lightly cutting Zekkou. Zekkou looked down at the light wound and looked back at Hissori who had already planned his next attack. Hissori kicked Zekkou with great force in the stomach which caused him to fling back into the wall dropping his Zanpakutou. Hissori lept towards him holding his hand out to lift him up.

" Round 2 after a 5 minute rest period?"

Zekkou grabbed Hissori's hand as Hissori lifted him up. Zekkou brushed himself off and grabbed his Zanpakutou and sheated it. Hissori done the same thing awaiting for Zekkou's reply.

"Yeah sure. We are around the same strength so ide call that a draw. Just let me go get a drink."

Zekkou then walked out of the dojo towards the canteen as Hissori waited for him to come back for round two.

Approved +1.5 to fighting skill, just watch your spelling and grammar mate.

The doors of the dojo opened up. Hissori sprung up to see who was entering. It was Zekkou but this time he seemed different he was more determined this time to beat Hissori. There was no conversation for several seconds. Zekkou unsheathed his Zanpakutou and quickly attacked towards Hissori. Hissori blocked the attack with ease but Zekkou didn’t hold it back pushing Hissori's Zanpakutou into his own stomach, exactly what happened to Zekkou before. But Hissori didn’t look down at his injuries he had been used to losing blood when training so he just started striking towards Zekkou's left arm. Several strikes where shared between them both from all different directions. Zekkou noticed that Hissori was fully focused on the sword and not everything thing else that could be attack. So Zekkou pushed his sword together with Hissori and raised his sword up as Zekkou leg swept Hissori causing him to fall backwards and then kicked him in the stomach making him smash into the ground.

"Ouch...That really hurt."

Hissori quickly got up cracking his neck and back. Hissori then started spinning his Zanpakutou in a clockwise rotation and then began to move it around his body. Hissori then leapt towards Zekkou who was confused about this technique. He didn’t know what position to block in so he decided to flee. Hissori was chasing him for several seconds before he had caught up and slashed lightly on Zekkou's back 3 times. Zekkou reacted straight away swinging his Zanpakutou back and cutting across Hissori's torso. Hissori didn’t bother to look down at his wound he grabbed onto his Zanpakutou cutting his hand and used as much power as he possibly could to unhand it from Zekkou. Hissori then threw the Zanpakutou the other side of the dojo. Zekkou was now in the corner with no Zanpakutou and wounds all over his body. Hissori looked at him and said.

“Give up?"

Zekkou laughed as he looked up to the top of the dojo's ceiling.

"Nope but you will in a second."

Zekkou yet again used his speed to rush attack Hissori by spear tackling him into the ground causing him to drop his Zanpakutou which Zekkou picked up and continued to run to the other side of the dojo and picked up his own. He walked back towards Hissori with both Zanpakutous and Hissori still getting up. Hissori was now fairly fatigued and knew that this round was Zekkou's.

"Well I guess ill give you 10 minutes rest then we can have to deciding fighting."

As Zekkou placed Hissori's Zanpakutou next to him and walked outside again to go get refreshment. Hissori was exhausted he laid against the wall of the dojo and rested his eyes.

Approved +1.5 again. Have you by any chance seen that charlie bit my finger vid on youtube?

ooc: Nar i havent ill check it out later

IC:
This being the third and final round of Zekkou and Hissori's little fight Hissori needed to step it up a little. He was thinking of going for more blows to the legs to stop him in his tracks instead of speeding around him like he had being trying to do for the last few rounds. But this time Hissori wasn’t going to let him get away that fast. Hissori had some knowledge on this Zekkou, he knew he was more speed based then anything so his kido skills where properly a bit shaky. But Hissori wasn’t a master it in either but it was a risk he was going to take coming into this battle.

After about 10 minutes of waiting Zekkou had entered the dojo again looking even more ready to fight. Hissori was still lying against the wall. Zekkou unsheathed his Zanpakutou and used his speed yet again to attack at Hissori. Hissori then suddenly noticed the attack and moved out of the way but suffering a cut across his left arm. Zekkou didn’t hold back he quickly came back at Hissori slashing all over him taking no remorse this time. Zekkou was determined to win he was a very competitive character. All Hissori could do was dive backwards and block the incoming attacks. Hissori was going quite successfully. He began to pant several times as he was blocking. The fatigue from the last two rounds had effected him more then Zekkou. Hissori then tried to bring this into his game with the little stamina that he had left.

Hissori started creating the hits and make Zekkou block as Zekkou was about to use his speed to move out of the way of the coming attack Hissori changed his attack path and moved his Zanpakutou down and cut across Zekkou's calf and hamstring causing Zekkou to fall to the ground. Zekkou then got up putting pressure on it. The pain wasn’t immense but it was enough to make stop him from moving around as fast as he did. Hissori then sprung right in towards him swiping his sword in a unique and unpredictable pattern which confused Zekkou who began to get light cuts all around his torso. Hissori then roundhouse kicked Zekkou in the side of the face sending him towards the wall injuring his shoulder. Hissori leapt towards him and held his Zanpakutou to his neck.

“It’s over Zekkou. Two to one I win... Sorry it got a bit competitive but it had to happen. You can’t take anyone too lightly because it will just cause in your death."

Hissori then sheathed his Zanpakutou and flicked his arm to say goodbye to Zekkou and then left the dojo.

Ok +1 to fighting skill. Just a note try to add more detail such as soroundings and character thoughts more often to brake up the action.

Hissori woke up feeling great. The sun was finally out. It had been raining for ever in Hissori's eyes even though he didn’t complain the rain had helped him but it also had dreaded him with nearly losing his life. His mind was still on the dreadful attack from Kaiyo. Although not purposely on actually hitting Hissori straight through his right shoulder. Hissori had forgiven her but it made him feel weak. It had been weeks and he decided that its time for the bandage to come off and go to the dojo to train his Zanjutsu. As he was unwrapping the bandage he closed his eyes, he didn’t want to look at it the fear of it being a large crater in his shoulder. The entire bandage was off and Hissori opened his eyes. It was perfectly normal. A 5 cm diameter circle scar was all that remained. Hissori sighed in relief as he entered into his room to put on his Shinigami Suit.

Hissori entered the Dojo with his Zanpakutou behind his hip hanging off. He looked towards the other shinigami training all the Zanpakutous were placed to there side. Hissori felt a unique fighter wearing it like this it made him feel like an individual which is what he always wanted to feel like. A very large Shinigami approached from behind Hissori. He noticed the huge shadow behind him and laughed. He thought to himself.

Ah, I slow fat; its all about power shinigami wants to fight me? This should be fun.

Hissori turned around to the Shinigami he looked down on Hissori being about seven foot six was a tower over Hissori who was just over six foot. The large shinigami unsheathed his Zanpakutou his handed covering over the whole hilt. Hissori didn’t want to get anywhere near those hands they would smash his ribs in as many places as they could be broken.

“My name is Dekai! And i need a victim for today! Everyone is too fearful of me. HAHAHA!"

Hissori tried to keep a straight face feeling like he was going to explode in laughter but he swallowed it all in one gulp. He then thought of what he just said again and busted out laughing. Dekai grew made and slashed his sword towards Hissori. He took two steps back easily dodging the attack. Hissori laughed again and then suddenly stopped with a serious look on him.

“Oh I am sorry. I just thought that it was pretty funny. I am Hissori Itazuki, good luck."

As Hissori unsheathed his Zanpakutou laughing a little bit more. Dekai swung his right leg to attempt to roundhouse kick Hissori in the face. Hissori saw the log sized leg coming and leapt backwards about 10 meters. As Dekai began to get his balance back from the kick. Hissori quickly rushed towards him slashing his blade across his right bicep. Blood began to fall already Hissori kind of felt sorry for Dekai but he didn’t seem to care. He fully ignored it and turned back towards Hissori. Hissori leaped into the air and pushed his sword down trying to strike him with great force. As it was about to connected with Dekai's shoulder he simple vanished. Hissori's eyes widened as his feet touched the ground he looked around him and felt a large hit to the back. Dekai had shunpo'd away and behind Hissori then punching him in the lumber vertebrae sending him about 15 meters. Hissori stood up and was thinking how such a heavy set person could move so fast or even Shunpo for that matter. Hissori was yet to learn how to Shunpo so he was very surprised.

“How the...How did you do that?!"

Dekai laughed as he swung his sword around looking at it as to say i didn’t hear that because I am to good to you. Instantly after he swung his sword he disappeared again, Hissori braced himself looking to each side and thinking that he was going to come from behind but instead Dekai re-appeared in front of him and swung his sword aiming for across Hissori's chest. He luckily dodged the attack pushing Hissori back from the amount of force Dekai was using. Hissori leapt back and began to think.

What could his weakness be...? Maybe it would be something the same as the hollow i killed... Seeing he uses speed if i injure his legs he wont be able to move as fast. I just need to be able to find a way of getting there in the first place...

Dekai then vanished again. Hissori began to run straight thinking that he would have to come from either in front of a side. Dekai appeared in front of him Hissori was ready for his attack as Dekai yet again slashed his sword attempting to get Hissori's chest. Hissori quickly used his left hand to charge up a red ball.

“Hadou #3 Crimson Strike!"

He blasted the red ball into Dekai’s right hand sending his sword back as Hissori used his right arm to slash his Zanpakutou across Dekai's left quad causing Dekai to fall to the ground with a large thump shaking the ground. Dekai grabbed his quad with his right hand covering over it.

“Ah! My leg. Now i can’t Shunpo as fast. Ok, i give up kid... You win."

Hissori laughed as he offered a hand up for Dekai. He accepted Hissori began to lift him up pulling up with all of his strength pushing a vein in Hissori’s head to be exposed as Dekai got to his feet. Hissori panted with great pain. He sheathed his Zanpakutou as did Dekai. Hissori then rolled his shoulder to crack it. He looked up to Dekai smiling and putting his hand out to shake Hissori's hand. Hissori put out his hand and shook it nearly crushing it in to as Hissori felt like screaming. Dekai then turned around and began to limp out. Hissori decided that he needed a good hour break before coming back so he left the dojo heading to the closed food stand.

Approved +1 to fighting skill, there was a lot of spelling and grammar lapses that let a good post down.