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Valberri

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PostSubject: Vito's Rank up thread   Vito's Rank up thread I_icon_minitimeTue Sep 10, 2013 10:22 pm

Character Name: Vito Ikatsuiji

Username: Valberri

Link to Character Bio: Vito Ikatsuiji

Current Rank: 0

Current Exp: [3/20]
Roleplays to be Evaluated: The test of Hand to Hand Combat (Solo)


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PostSubject: Re: Vito's Rank up thread   Vito's Rank up thread I_icon_minitimeThu Sep 12, 2013 12:27 am

The test of hand to hand combat: [3/10]

While it shortness isn't really a problem with the thread, it's the action that's troublesome. At first I couldn't quite envision the fight completely.

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Vito made his way around the giant student. One foot after another, after he had reached his final step to bring himself behind the man, his right leg would swing with enough force to turn his body and face the man's back.
Circling around to get behind someone, but then turning to face the man's back. Or was it meant to spin the man's body to face him? But it seems Vito ends up behind the man because the Bura attacks backwards. In the end I kind of figured the intent of the encounter. You catch yourself in like a handstand and do a sweep kick and then hit him in the head. Or something like that. A very quick battle with not much more than an instant KO on some big guy.
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