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PostSubject: Etsuya Takahashi (Finished)   Etsuya Takahashi (Finished) I_icon_minitimeThu Sep 22, 2011 1:20 pm

Name: Etsuya Takahashi

Age-
Real Age: 150
Appearing Age: 17

Birthplace: Germany

Looks:

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A silver haired guy that has a gray eye and below his right eye he has a red tattoo that somewhat helps him to control his doll. He always wear weird clothings like on the picture above, this clothes was made by him. He has the height of 5'7".

Personality: Left alone by his parents when he was only a child , he learn to stand up on his own, he is also sometimes cold-hearted but despite this he never forgets what he promise and also he value his friends. He also learn that whatever happens he must push harder and also he learns that no matter how strong his enemies are he is stronger than them even in one aspects.

In battle he never gave up easily, he will try to protect everyone he values even his life is in risk. His battle attitude might be a little different from others, he will hesitate to kill people but he won't hesitate to fight with them, every battle he had was never finish since battle will continue if his/her enemy is still alive.

Gender: Male

Occupation: He is a student and also he work as a part time job in a convenient store somewhere in karakura town.

Special Characteristics: He is good at making clothes, he is also specialized in manipulating his power, he learn his power at the age of 5 meaning his father must seal this with the tattoo on his right eye. When he was 8 his father trained him and at the age of 9 he obtain his doll.

Race: Japanese/German

Doll Name: Jinton

Call Out Phrase: Harden, Jinton

Doll Description :

Sealed Appearance:

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Released Appearance
4 1/2 ft
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Doll's Personality

Even though this doll has the power of a weird fluid called non-Newtonian fluid he is still the kind of doll that has a good heart, He acts like Etsuya they may be sometimes cold-hearted but they are still willing to give anything for their friends. The dolls personality changes in different situation especially in battle, In battle this doll is more like a monster. Agressive, Merciless and Unstoppable are some of the words to describe how Meiton Acts in battle. His specialty is more on speed, Using the power of darkness Jinton and Etsuya uses their specialties to defeat an enemy.

Doll Powers: Non-Newtonian Fluid

Newtonian Armor- One of the properties of a non-Newtonian fluid is changing its property into solid state. Jinton changes into armor that protects Etsuya from any damage. The longer the enemy strikes this armor the harder it will be. If it hardens, the user will have a restriction in moving. Meaning the more it hardens the slower he moves.

Newtonian Blast - Jinton fires a blast at the enemy that looks like a byakurai, but the differencce is that this blast is made of Non-Newtonian Fluid and because of this the longer it stays on air the harder it will be. If this is used in short range no damage will be dealt.

Newtonian Weapon - Jinton Transforms into a weapon, This weapon can be change at Etsuya's will. The harder Etsuya grips the handle the stronger the weapon will be.

Stats:

Spirit Power:

20

Speed:

15

Technique:

5


Fighting Skill:

20


History:

The bount's existence is nearly gone, but some bounts are left and still living with humans. One of this bount is Tristan Takahashi,Etsuya's Father.Etsuya's power is controlling and manipulating a weir fluid called non-newtonian fluid with the help of his doll, Jinton. It was said that bount have the power like shinigami has, Bount has doll that works like zanpakuto, Etsuya first encountered his doll when he was at the age of 9. It all started...

Etsuya was born in germany because his Mother is a German, It was very hard for Tristan, Etsuya's Father, to cope-up with German peoples because he was a japanese. The other thing that gave them a hard time living there is that they were a special humans, they were a bounto and because of this they where force to live in japan, the land of the rising sun.

He was only 3 years old when they went to japan, They live in the town named Karakura. At the age of 5 his reiatsu is overflowing that his father needs to seal them because Etsuya may not control his power and eventually die. Years passed Etsuya learn fighting because his father trained him, His father knows the potential of Etsuya even at this young age he can manage to have a hand-to-hand fight with his father. At the age of 9 he started to get his doll. His father teaches him how to use this.

Years passed, His father and mother was gone without any goodbye from him. From that moment onwards he was left alone, the only companion he had was Jinton, His doll. From that moment also he started his quest on finding where did his mother and father gone to but before he find them the first thing he must do is to train his power and abilities.

Role Playing Sample:
(OOC: This is my old time RPing Very Happy Same name but this one is a shinigami)

Etsuya entered the training area, "(sighed) What a day, I think i need to train my abilities by doing it in real battle". He looked everywhere , looking for an enemy but still no one came. He swing his sword believing that this will train him and exercise him if there will be someone to come and train with him. He also do several exercises. After a while he wondered about something

If an enemy approached him he/she might have shikai or even worser a bankai, with that enemy i cannot defeat them. But that's impossible knowing that i'm in the academy.

After a while, He stood up and begin running in place. He waited for someone and approached him.

Damn...she needed a drink. What a cruel Head Captain...making his third seat deal with a bunch of freak'in munchkins...figuretively speaking at least. Latino origin, blazing red hair, amber eyes, a glare that can send arrancar and Menos Grande running for the hills...she is Tsubaki Kenpeki, third seat of Squad 1. And at the academy to teach about proper training techniques. The use of dummies for kido practice, finding the right sparring partner, using wooden swords...yuck, that was disgusting. Tsubaki never much liked swords. Her daggers were good enough for her.

Right now, she had her planning period. And thank goodness. The five foot eight tall woman didn't like to teach much, but she could do it. Tsubaki had hid alcohol all over the place...in secret stashes. She wasn't a Rangiku Matsumoto completely, but she still loved her drinks. As she neared the training area, there was one person there. A student. Great. But he was jogging in place...how weird.

"Oi, you need help with training or something? Just running in place isn't accomplishing much..." Was all she said as she approached the man. Then she tripped over her own feet and landed face first in the dirt. As she got up, Tsubaki laughed nervously before going stern and awaited an answer from the potential shinigami hopeful.

''yeah you look tough but are you really sure that you can train me , you accidentally trip and hit your face in the floor, oh! Sorry for the weird introduction. My name is Etsuya Takahashi , nice to meet ya! You can call me Etsuya for short .'' Etsuya greet the woman asked him if he needed any assistance.
''But if you can help me, i won' hesitate to reject it.''Etsuya smiled at the woman in front of him , he hold his sword and ready itself for training.

Tsubaki just waved it off. The guy seemed kind enough though. "I was asked by my captain to teach you young'ins about proper training methods. I can help train a potential full fledged shinigami I tink." The young woman brought out a tanto dagger in a reverse grip, seemingly from nowhere. "Nice to meet you, Etsuya. I'm Tsubaki Kenpeki, Third seat of Squad 1. Your goal is to force me to use my second dagger. I'll hold back at first, but I'll steadily get tougher on you. Understood?"

This should be good. Tsubaki is a brute. And a purely physical fighter. Speed was a specialty as well as stregth. She decided to go with her norm, up close and dirty. The girl charged the boy. At the last minute, she slid between the guy's knees and aimed a punch to the groin. Anything goes in a fight in her belief. Afterwards, she spun in the dirt to trip the guy with her feet. The redhead jumped up and jumped back. Luckily, she held back on strength so that she wouldn't incapacitate the guy with the groin shot. If she hit that is.

The attack was succesful and made Etsuya fall to the ground.

"No way!, She is too fast if i am right that speed of hers that she show me is not her full speed. Hmm, I still need to do something"

"Well

He stood up with his sword pointed to her. " Hmm, maybe your faster than me but still ...." Etsuya rushed towards her and tried to strike her with his sword but his sword slipped in his hand and fell into the ground. Etsuya was very embarrased at that time

"I can't show this feeling to her, she might think that i'm to weak. My weakness is handling a sword but still i can manage to deal damage using some of my known demon magics"
He jumped back and grab his sword from the ground " He-he-he, sorry 'bout that well i think it's time" Etsuya rushed again to his enemy and flash step at the back of his enemy."Ye lord! Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Inferno and pandemonium, the sea barrier surges, march on to the south! Hado#31 Red Fire Cannon" Etsuya generates a small orb of red crimson energy on his palm and release to the back of his enemy.

" I think that works"


Tsubaki watched the guy drop. Only to get back up and speak a little bit, even charging her. But his sword slipped from his hand. How embarrassing for the boy. "Always keep a firm hold on your weapon. If this wasn't training, I would have gone in there and slit your throat..."

The guy started muttering under his breath. Probably curses. "Don't worry too much. That's why this is called practice. Now come on..." And with a cocky attitude at that. Etsuya shunpoed behind her and did a full incantation of Hado 31: Shakkaho. The girl sighed, spun and swung up, slicing the red ball of energy in half and passing harmlessly on each side of her. "I may suck horribly at kido, but full incantations are hard to pull off without some sort of destraction..." A pair of explosions interrupted her.

As she looked back, and saw the damage, one of her eyebrows rose. "A future kido expert is in the making it seems." The redhead turned back and started walking calmly towards the trainee. Kido was not her forte. But she knew of a captain that was and visited the Academy frequantly.

As she neared the man, she started swinging her dagger. One aimed at the side, another aimed at the shoulder, one stab aimed at the crotch, a fist from the other hand to the jaw, and a spin kick to the side. If this kid doesn't start taking things seriously and fight with all that he is worth, the Gotei 13 are in serious jeopardy with the kinds of captains that might arise from this group.

"She's to fast for me."

Etsuya was going to dodge the first attack but there was another incoming attack aiming at his shoulder.
"He said the incantation for Bakudo#21, Bakudo#21 Red Smoke Escape" Etsuya places his hands palms down on the ground and a red smoke bursts forth from the point of contact and swiftly engulfs the surrounding area briefly obscuring the movements of the woman within the smoke allowing him to get away.

"Sorry bout that, I guess ill have to be more serious now.Well let's start now" Etsuya draws back his sword and flash step at the top of his enemy then flash step again at her front, He aim his hands at the foot of the girl and "Ye lord! Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Inferno and pandemonium, the sea barrier surges, march on to the south!, Hado#31 Red Fire Cannon" Again he uses this hado to target his enemy's foot.

"If i succesfully hits her foot, it will be easier for me to evade the incoming attacks" Etsuya smiled.

"That should damage a lot " Etsuya smiled and draw his sword again.

Like the incantation will even get off the ground at this range. With her free hand, she stopped it by clamping his mouth shut, perhaps making him bite his tongue? None the less, he still got away...barely. Perhaps she was taking it too hard? "You should have been serious from the beginning. Training is serious business. Even the captains wouldn't be where they are today if they didn't train. Now come on! Show me what you got!" Tsubaki screamed at the man.

Etsuya drew his sword. But he must have been lacking in brain power to think he could pull an incantation at such close range. Or even a kido shot. The girl sighed and kicked the man's hand away, making the spell go way away, blowing up a wall. "If I was a kido expert, I would show you how to properly utilize it. When used correctly or unorthodoxely, kido can be a major game changer. Now start using your head. Doing an incantation at such close ranges will not only not work, but could get you killed. I could have stabbed my dagger right into your jaw and into your head that time. Perhaps you need to see Captain Tomoshibi about practical kido usage..."

Etsuya had gotten distance during her little speech. She hoped he wasn't nearing graduation. Otherwise he needed some serious help on the practical combat front. Tsubaki threw her dagger at the man's knee. Shunpo and kido was his specialties it seemed. But she was a major physical fighter. Without shunpo, she charged right in to aim a punch to his face, hoping to break his nose and maybe knock some sense into him about kido usage. She aimed a kick to the knee and a fist to the side. Right afterwards, she kicked up some dust to his eyes and pushed him to a tree. Tsubaki then just stood there with her arms crossed, her hair waving in the slight breeze.

"Hmmm. I should be more serious fighting with a physical fighter , incantations wont work. I manage to dodge that dagger but if the battle lasts i wont able to dodge other attacks." Etsuya grins. Etsuya is nearly tired dodging some of his enemies attack . A smile can be seen on Etsuya's face at that time even though he his nearly wore out.

"Now's the time, Ueshukun ... " A strange voice from his zanpakuto was heard. " Frosted Innermost Soul call me" Etsuya heard his zanpakuto's name for the first time, he removed the ring he was wearing all the time.

"My father told me that I should remove this ring when im calling my zanpakuto's spirit, now's the time"

"Frosted innermost soul! Ueshukun! " Etsuya's sword begins to emit blue and yellow reaitsu, after a second it changes its appearance, It becomes a heavy sword that has a skull near the hilt, it's blade glows color blue that somehow looks like it emits a cold smoke. He rushes toward his enemy and pointed his index finger to his enemy. "Hado #4. Byakurai" Etsuya points his index finger and generates a concentrated lightning bolt towards his enemy.

"Let's begin."

The dagger missed and so did some of her attacks. With a quick Shunpo, Tsubaki got her dagger back. Then the young man surprised her. He unleashed his shikai. "Well, that's a surprise. Mind if I start as well? Stay on your toes..." The Squad 1 third seat looked at her dagger's blade. On the blade was an engraving of a revolver. Good. "Shoot: Kenjuu!" The dagger in her hand soon turned into a huge revolver. A fifty caliber one and was even large when compared to others. From out of her sash on her left side, another pistol grip was revealed, having turned as well. Except that one was a fifty caliber Desert Eagle.

With the transformations of her daggers to pistols, her speed and strength increased slightly. But the biggest difference would be her fighting style. She pointed the massive pistol at her opponent and pulled the trigger. A high penetration shot going as fast as a bala was fired. Of pure spirit energy. She fired five more times, adjusting her aim. She was a marksman afterall. But even that didn't garuntee a hit...

before those bullets hit him something weird happened everything around him stops and suddenly he was in a familiar place.

"I saw this place once in my dream." A place where ice never melts. "Well, Well, I think you've heard me finally." A blue apparition standing in front of Etsuya was seen. "Ueshukun? " Etsuya asked. "Yes, im your zanpakuto I called you.....".

The bullets were about to hit him.. " First Transformation : Ice Barrier !" Then suddenly ice particles made of reiatsu gathered and made a barrier protecting Etsuya from the bullets. The first bullet was about to hit...

"Ueshukun told me that before the 2nd hit I must use this.."

"Second Transformation : Barrier Spike!" Etsuya's barrier released spikes , this spikes destroyed the incoming bullets.

"I won't let my guard down " Etsuya smiled and pointed his sword towards his enemy.

"First Element : Enchant Ice " Etsuya's sword released cold smoke that slows enemies speed.

Etsuya swing his sword to the side of his enemy making it miss.

"I think this will be easier her movement will slow down"

"I was just about to start" Etsuya smiled.

Things seemed to have slowed down as ice gathered in front of the young man. She held back on the bullets, otherwise they probably would have penetrated. What surprised her though, was that an ice spike came out of the barrier, destroying her bullets and heading towards her. With her strength and the pistol's weight and size, Tsubaki shattered the ice spike. The man then pointed his sword at her and used some type of cold smoke. The temperature dropped, but she ignored it.

The man came up to her, aiming a swing to her side. The redhead tried to move out of the way. That was when she noticed she got slower. Instead she used her giant pistol to block it. Tsubaki grinned at his proclamation. "In that case, whoever is unable to fight first loses. Don't hold back now. Cause I'm gonna use both pistols and use the shots at full strength!" The girl took out her other pistol as she pushed the young man back. She also rotated the revolver chamber to switch shots.

This time, the bullet from her Desert Eagle stood up to the high penetration shot. Any barrier would be hard pressed to block them outright, unless they were just so much stronger than she. As Tsubaki charged forward after the first shot, she fired two more, aiming for the legs and adjusting her aim. As they closed, she aimed the massive revolver at him and fired. This time, a shotgun like blast. Not armor piercing, but the closer the range, the more damage they would do to a person.

"Didn't I tell you there is another thing Ueshukun told me ? " Etsuya smiled . The bullet was about to hit , "Third transformation: Ice Shield" Etsuya created a shield made from the ice around him. He receive the first damage,the first bullet,.

"No way this bullet is so strong, i can't handle 2 or more bullets"

The woman rushed at him and fire 2 more bullets , He blocked this using his shield. After blocking this bullet the shield was destroyed. the woman fired another bullet straight at him but this shot was different from the others it looks like it was stronger.

"Bakudo #39 Enkosen " He uses his reiatsu to make a shield blocking the 4th bullet , but the power of bullet makes Etsuya's reiatsu weaker.

"I can't go any longer, but still i must push on"

Etsuya hides somewhere in the training area.

"I must hide and wait for my reiatsu to gain a little power so I can battle her again"

The Captain of the Eleventh Division felt the power of the two fighting and chuckled to himself. Ever since he became a vizard he felt weird, but stronger. With his Reiatsu supression cloak on he made his way to the two and watched. "Don't hold back Thurd Seat Tsubaki. Make him earn the win!". His voice rang with power and he smiled as he watched the boy fight with someone who was from the First Division.

The guy blocked her shots with a different ice shield and even an Enkosen. Confirming that he is indeed a future kido expert. Then he ran. That infuriated her. A strategic retreat is fine, but running away to hide in a different part of the Shinigami Academy training grounds? She hoped the captain of Squad 11, now making himself known, didn't see that. What was the point in training if you're just gonna run away to recover.

"YOU COWARD! COME OUT AND FACE ME LIKE A MAN! OR DO YOU NOT HAVE THE BALLS TO STAND UP TO ME!" She insulted Etsuya's manhood. Seriously? What man runs in training? Especially to recover? At the first bush/tree sets, she riddled it in bullets, blinded by rage so that she couldn't use her average sensing abilities to find him. After 15 total shots with her Desert Eagle, the weapon started glowing, "reloading".

After just six more shots at the next set, the enormous revolver was too. Now both of her weapons were recharging. The woman just starting knocking down trees and using her pistols as blunt force weapons while they recharge. And kept going until she found the low life.

Etsuya is hiding somewhere in the area, He was hiding somewhere in the rocks.
"Ba-Ka, insulting me won't help. I hide here cause kido with no incantations wont work if I will just combine some of my techniques with this kido it will work."
"He said the incantation for Hado #54. Haien" He whispered silently the incantation for abolishing flames. Then a saucer like ice pops out at the back of The girl. "Who told you I will hide forever! Hado #54. Haien" fires a oblong blast of purple spiritual energy from his hand.

"at the speed of my Ice blast it won't be easier for her to dodge this and since I think that she won't able to fire those gun she won't able to block it. It will incinerate her completely when it makes contact, a dangerous hado."

Watching the oblong blast of purple spiritual energy going to his enemy.

(to be continued ... )


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PostSubject: Re: Etsuya Takahashi (Finished)   Etsuya Takahashi (Finished) I_icon_minitimeThu Sep 22, 2011 3:46 pm

Aside from the powers, the rest of the application is good.

1. General power: "Ice Crystal" - Not sure what you are going for here considering ice and crystals are two completely different substances. Ice is just a solidified form of water, which can be pretty versatile when used properly. Crystals on the other hand are already hardened minerals and less flexible to change. But on the other hand is much denser and less susceptible attacks. Even so, its a bit redundant if all you will be going for is big chunks ice.

2. 2nd ability - "Pentagonial Crystal" - First. is that the right spelling you were going for or did you mean "Pentagonal." Moving on. I'm not sure on how the mechanics of the technique work considering you want "damage" to be dealt, yet it seems it is only able to contain a target. The rank 0 technique you have is over powered. Removing 50% of someones speed is quite a bit, even for one post. It wouldn't take long for you to out match anyone in terms of speed. Even at mid ranks your speed would be greater than a captain's speed.

3. 3rd ability - "Crystal Movement" - This technique is just overpowered in general. Solidifying the air and locking movements is not just contained to a person by the looks of it. You would be able to stop attacks from practically anything making you untouchable. Even more so with the higher rank techniques.

4. Miscellaneous - How big is your doll in its current and then subsequent forms? It would be nice to have a description of your dolls personality as well since you interact with it in the living world.
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PostSubject: Re: Etsuya Takahashi (Finished)   Etsuya Takahashi (Finished) I_icon_minitimeThu Sep 22, 2011 10:52 pm

- I edited it and finish it -
Also i change it to crystal element only.
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PostSubject: Re: Etsuya Takahashi (Finished)   Etsuya Takahashi (Finished) I_icon_minitimeFri Sep 23, 2011 12:20 am

With the powers you are wanting it would seem better for you to just create a Superhuman if you are wanting the character to be used directly. If you want to keep your character a bount, you need to remember that the doll you summoned is the one that needs the abilities to attack and defend for you.
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PostSubject: Re: Etsuya Takahashi (Finished)   Etsuya Takahashi (Finished) I_icon_minitimeFri Sep 23, 2011 3:43 am

-I'll have to WIP it , and change it.

Well im done editing it, made lots of changes Very Happy
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