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PostSubject: Yukio's Rank Up Thread    Wed Aug 31, 2011 1:40 pm

Character Name: Yukio Koji

Username: Yukio

Link to Character Bio: Yukio Koji

Current Rank: 0

Current Exp: 7

Roleplays to be Evaluated:
Overdue Tax
School Trip

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PostSubject: Re: Yukio's Rank Up Thread    Wed Aug 31, 2011 2:00 pm

Overdue Tax (Still don't get the title): [4/10]

Decent sized posts and realistic (human reactions) make this an okay read. I will admit you do well for your strange ability. I did like the burning skin trick. Simple and yet effective. Strange as it might be I like this thread even though your character sounds like an annoying kid. If I were the hollow have killed you outright and ignore your questions. Twisted Evil


School Trip: [3/10]

Nothing wrong with post length. Do be careful with you color text. Looks like you made half you post blue by mistake. As far as meeting threads go this one is fairly cut and dry. And your character sounds like a flake. A little to happy for my taste.At least you're keeping in character.

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