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With the Rebel Faction defeated, a new age of peace arises within the Soul Society... but for how long? A Blood War could be just around the corner.
 
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Isaac Kennedy

Isaac Kennedy


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Number of Posts : 65
Age : 32
Quote : “When lost in utter darkness, there is nothing left but forward.”
Registration Date : 2011-06-06

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PostSubject: Vectors Rank Up   Vectors Rank Up I_icon_minitimeWed Aug 17, 2011 12:00 am

Character Name: Vector

Username: Vector

Link to Character Bio: Vector

Current Rank: 0

Current Exp: 6

Roleplays to be Evaluated:

https://thebleachworld.darkbb.com/t2893-field-experience-draylontis-and-vector

https://thebleachworld.darkbb.com/t2894-contracted-murder-open
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Arawn

Arawn


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Number of Posts : 3440
Age : 42
Location : Here, but there
Job/Interests : Anything, but not everything
Quote : You were close, but I was right
Registration Date : 2010-06-23

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PostSubject: Re: Vectors Rank Up   Vectors Rank Up I_icon_minitimeWed Aug 17, 2011 12:39 pm

You forgot to finish filling in the application, thought this was a WIP. Read threads and then checked profile to see rank and what not.



Field Experience: You posting fluctuated from short to medium. I noticed something minor. You don't use capital letters when your character speaks. Not just once, almost all the time. It's kinda odd. That aside it's a short thread. You get in, you get out. 3/10


Contracted murder: Much longer, and the same minor caps with speech. Also another thing I notice. Your character talks about getting paid way too often. Yes, he's an assassin, but constantly telling everyone is hardly assassin behavior. 3/10
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