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Isaac Kennedy

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quote : “When lost in utter darkness, there is nothing left but forward.”
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PostSubject: Vectors Rank Up   Wed Aug 17, 2011 12:00 am

Character Name: Vector

Username: Vector

Link to Character Bio: Vector

Current Rank: 0

Current Exp: 6

Roleplays to be Evaluated:

http://thebleachworld.darkbb.com/t2893-field-experience-draylontis-and-vector

http://thebleachworld.darkbb.com/t2894-contracted-murder-open
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Arawn

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PostSubject: Re: Vectors Rank Up   Wed Aug 17, 2011 12:39 pm

You forgot to finish filling in the application, thought this was a WIP. Read threads and then checked profile to see rank and what not.



Field Experience: You posting fluctuated from short to medium. I noticed something minor. You don't use capital letters when your character speaks. Not just once, almost all the time. It's kinda odd. That aside it's a short thread. You get in, you get out. 3/10


Contracted murder: Much longer, and the same minor caps with speech. Also another thing I notice. Your character talks about getting paid way too often. Yes, he's an assassin, but constantly telling everyone is hardly assassin behavior. 3/10

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