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Bishamon Saitou

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PostSubject: Bishamon Saitou's Rank Up Thread   Wed Aug 10, 2011 9:04 am

Character Name: Bishamon Saitou

Username: Bishamon Saitou

Link to Character Bio: Bishamon Saitou

Current Rank: 4

Current Exp: 4/60

Roleplays to be Evaluated:
Outnumbered
Finally getting too work

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PostSubject: Re: Bishamon Saitou's Rank Up Thread   Fri Aug 26, 2011 11:49 am

1ST THREAD - 6/10 - Good post and thread length. No real complaints about it.

2ND THREAD - 5/10 - Pretty much same as above.

TOTAL EXP - 11/20

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PostSubject: Re: Bishamon Saitou's Rank Up Thread   Wed Aug 31, 2011 1:34 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Bishamon Saitou's Rank Up Thread   Wed Aug 31, 2011 1:59 pm

Both threads 6/10 - Good threads, good post and thread length.

Total Exp: 12/20

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PostSubject: Re: Bishamon Saitou's Rank Up Thread   Mon Sep 05, 2011 1:27 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Bishamon Saitou's Rank Up Thread   Mon Sep 05, 2011 3:58 pm

And unwanted reunion: [5/10]

It's nice to see you two deepen your bonds. Seems like this won't be the last of such a thread. It's like two friends that like to hate each other. A little bit like the first run in. But it comes out better both in directions and description than the initial encounter. It was good exchange to say the least. Kinda surprised he was so nice after what happened the last time.

A morbid trap: [5/10]

Decent posting and length. I must say I enjoyed this thread more. For once it was a shinigami on the run and a hollow doing the chasing. And you played the part well. Nothing wrong with losing if you learn something from the whole experience.

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PostSubject: Re: Bishamon Saitou's Rank Up Thread   Thu Sep 15, 2011 2:17 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Bishamon Saitou's Rank Up Thread   Sat Sep 17, 2011 11:52 am

The still night: [5/10]

A somewhat confusing fight, not on your part, but overall. You kept a decent size on posting. Something lacking, but it still worked.


A hollow and Shinigami's: [3/10]

Started out well enough, but slowly you started to do some 3 sentence posts. Making a rather weak middle. A small note you did neglect to use capitals in a lot of your sentences. Careful with the color coding as well, left a whole sentence yellow when it wasn't supposed to.




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PostSubject: Re: Bishamon Saitou's Rank Up Thread   Mon Sep 19, 2011 1:28 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Bishamon Saitou's Rank Up Thread   Mon Sep 19, 2011 6:32 pm

Kyūsho-Jutsu: [5/10]

Wow, I had to check the name several times to make sure it was Bishamon that wrote this one. No offense, but it's an uncommonly big solo for you. Isn't it funny how crazy powerful old men show up to teach people their mystical kung-fu? And 90% of the time you find them in a bar, or another humble location. I felt he went easy on you, should have really let you have it. I will point out an observation, you went crazy with commas in the first paragraph. 19 the first sentence, 1 semi-colon, then finally a period. That aside nice build and content. Good job



Bright Sky: [3/10]

Strange feeling in this thread. Like neither one could figure what that other wanted out of it. A fight, then talk, then a fight. If that was the intent; success. If not it seems like Lorne and you were unsure how to proceed. Maybe I'm reading too much into this one. Skimpy posts, but makes up for it in number. Strange note; after this thread Lorne was never seen from again..... (BISHAMON KILLED HIM!!!)

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PostSubject: Re: Bishamon Saitou's Rank Up Thread   Mon Sep 26, 2011 12:18 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Bishamon Saitou's Rank Up Thread   Tue Sep 27, 2011 1:27 pm

I give field trip a 3/10 for decent length, but short posts. It was a nice thread collaborated between three members (which is hard to make work or complete the majority of the time.) Congrats on the rank up.
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PostSubject: Re: Bishamon Saitou's Rank Up Thread   Sun Oct 02, 2011 8:15 am

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PostSubject: Re: Bishamon Saitou's Rank Up Thread   Mon Oct 03, 2011 4:52 pm

Tough survival: [4/10]

Sorry I missed this, but it was buried by the many other post that day. That aside it was decent sized get to know the local crazy boy thread. Nothing too bad til it almost turned to a fight. Don't think it would have worked out too well it it had.

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