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Tenshineko

Tenshineko


Female
Number of Posts : 337
Age : 32
Location : Bleach rp
Job/Interests : Hobbie:Reading, Watching Bleach
Quote : Life is waunderful. Never give up on your dreams.
Registration Date : 2011-05-12

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PostSubject: Rank number 1 for Ren   Rank number 1 for Ren I_icon_minitimeFri Jun 10, 2011 10:07 am

Character Name: Ren Zugaikostu
Username: Tenshineko
Current Rank/Requested: Rank 0/ Rank 1
Solo Character Development Thread Links:

https://thebleachworld.darkbb.com/t2861-a-hidden-power-solo

https://thebleachworld.darkbb.com/t2969-a-friend-from-my-past-part-1-solo#22002

RolePlaying With Others Thread Links:
https://thebleachworld.darkbb.com/t2843-new-guy

https://thebleachworld.darkbb.com/t2818-new-beggining

https://thebleachworld.darkbb.com/t2890-new-friend-after-new-guy-anyone-is-welcome

Friendly Combat Training Thread Links:
https://thebleachworld.darkbb.com/t2995-helping-out-a-hollow-ten

https://thebleachworld.darkbb.com/t2955-a-spar-with-a-hollow-tenshineko

Enemy Fighting Thread Links:
https://thebleachworld.darkbb.com/t2913-one-on-one-onsal

https://thebleachworld.darkbb.com/t2965-no-thought-of-safety-tenshineko

Mission Thread Links:
None

Requested Stat Point Increases:
(+5 Per Rank Up. List as +# Stat Name. Ex: +5 Spirit Power.)



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Kaiyo
Soul Society Faction Leader
Kaiyo


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Number of Posts : 2748
Age : 30
Location : The Verse
Quote : Pain is weakness leaving the body
Registration Date : 2009-05-18

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PostSubject: Re: Rank number 1 for Ren   Rank number 1 for Ren I_icon_minitimeMon Jun 13, 2011 3:59 pm

Okay...Please try to keep your post length up Smile Solo's generally need to be a bit longer than as well- so i'm gunna say add in a solo and either a FCT or EFT ^_^
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DarkMaster

DarkMaster


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Number of Posts : 863
Age : 39
Location : In a daze.
Job/Interests : That's Officer DarkMaster to you, buddy.
Quote : I'm afraid of the dark.
Registration Date : 2010-07-18

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PostSubject: Re: Rank number 1 for Ren   Rank number 1 for Ren I_icon_minitimeSat Jun 18, 2011 11:36 pm

I agree with Kaiyo on the post length issue. Seeing as we don't have too many active hollows, I say just give me a solo and consider it approved
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Arawn

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Number of Posts : 3440
Age : 42
Location : Here, but there
Job/Interests : Anything, but not everything
Quote : You were close, but I was right
Registration Date : 2010-06-23

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PostSubject: Re: Rank number 1 for Ren   Rank number 1 for Ren I_icon_minitimeSun Jun 19, 2011 12:42 am

*wipes tears from his eyes* (Only makes sense if you were in the cbox)

First and foremost your post length needs much improvement. Quite afew of your post are composed of one or two sentences. At least 250 words would be reasonable size post. It doesn't have to be 250, just add more to posts such as being descriptive. Do work on that.

With the size issue the two solo are not acceptable.(I'm guessing the second is incomplete as it doesn't end in any way.

The RWPO are of considerable length, but again the short posting.

As a rank 0 application the requirements are lower than most ranks. I will agree with the previous 2; add a solo.
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Job/Interests : Anything, but not everything
Quote : You were close, but I was right
Registration Date : 2010-06-23

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PostSubject: Re: Rank number 1 for Ren   Rank number 1 for Ren I_icon_minitimeThu Jun 30, 2011 1:58 am

Approved now that it's updated. Don't forget to distribute points to your stats.
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