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PostSubject: Amido Apolinar {The Divine Bolt} UPDATED   Amido Apolinar {The Divine Bolt} UPDATED I_icon_minitimeTue May 11, 2010 1:44 pm

Name: Apolinar, Amido

Age: 64

Gender: Male

Height: 9'2"

Weight: 173lbs

Appearance: Amido Apolinar's appearance as a normal hollow is his most basic of forms and yet it is the most pure in terms of primal combat and beast-like nature. Standing on two legs he reaches a full nine feet two inches tall however most of the time he runs on all fours, with tri-toed feet and hands that have powerful and long fingers Amido's limbs are made for speed and good grip to maintain control over his maneuverability. The most important feature about his limbs however would be the jagged lightning shaped blade-like formations on each of his limbs that start from the finger/toe tips and end about 6 inches off from his elbow and knee joints. His long and skinny yet muscular arms and legs connect to a likewise skinny torso that would seem to be that of a starved slave if not for the finely toned and visible muscle that made up it's structure. His neck is about the only think growing off his torso that isn't long and holds a proud head high covered in a white mask resembling a wolfs face in many ways, bearing sharp fangs and sporting two small lightning bolt-shaped pieces in place of ears. Amido's coloring except for the white mask is a deep blue save the blade growths on his limbs which are a pale bluish-white and his hollow hole is located in the center of his chest.

Personality: Amido is still early on in the stages of hollow evolution and thus doesn't show much personality. He tends to speak very little and doesn't show much emotion on the outside because on the inside he feels slightly wrong about the actions of killing and devouring souls. This doubt however is only the tiniest of whispers in a torrent of instinct, pain, and hunger that drives the beast from within allowing Amido to be the ruthless killing machine that he is. When Amido hunts he tries to maintain a cold and calculating grasp on the situation in order to determine what course of action to take in order to devour the most souls possible. He lacks fear for his own life and will often chase a helpless spirit until a shinigami shows up trying to protect it, purposely encountering stronger foes in order to eat their souls and become even stronger. Currently Amido is power hungry and will not accept anything less then being the strongest hollow to walk the worlds.

History: Amido Apolinar was once a living soul named Katsuya Myougenshi whom lived in the mountains of japan with his son, living off the land in harmony with nature. He tried to find a place in modern society however he never really fit in with his laid back nature, dislike for any form of currency, and obsession with the martial arts. In fact it was a wonder he managed to find a wife willing to have a child with such a man as he had no job or way of making money to speak of. In time his wife couldn't put up with him anymore and left him to care for his new born child alone and this is how he ended up living in the mountains. For years Katsuya raised his son Gatoma and finally seemed to have found peace and happiness in his simple life of self exile from the rest of the world. Days went by one by one as Katsuya continued to train both his body and his mind with his son right along side him as they both improved themselves together. Katsuya was proud of his young boy and how fast the child learned and developed, it wasn't long before they were both hunting and capturing animals for dinner with their bare hands and a few tools and traps.

All seemed well until one day a hollow happened upon their small camp site in the middle of the night. Katsuya awoke to a violent pain as he found himself being thrown through the air and into a tree. His eyes then slowly opened to witness a horrifying sight; a chain leading from his body to a mangled form that vaguely was recognizable as himself lying next to a bloody dead body that was his son. However as Katsuya's eyes looked up he could see a large beast of sorts clutching his son tightly in it's grasp, the boy was already out of breath to scream with as the monster slowly crushed every bone in his body causing terrible crunching noises to sound out. Katsuya got up and rushed the beast in a blind fury despite finding it hard to breath due to his soul's sudden exposure to the world outside of it's mortal vessel. The hollow simply swiped him aside however and swiftly devoured Katsuya's son before turning to Katsuya himself, tearing the chain that connected his body and soul apart to finalize his death. Katsuya could do nothing but struggle to his feet and run into the forest, not noticing the beast chasing behind nor the strange man in black whom appeared to fight the hollow. No, Katsuya merely kept running deeper and deeper into the darkness and for days his spirit dashed across the mountains crying from the pain of losing his only son as a powerful hunger grew within him and he experienced wracking pain as the remainder of the chain on his chest slowly ate away at itself...

It was only a matter of days until the final erosion took place and Katsuya began the process of hollowfication. The mask formed first showing his resistance to the monster within taking control however this didn't last long as his body exploded into reishi only to reform elsewhere as a newly born hollow, released his first roar throughout the night that pummeled fear into all the living animals that took residence on the mountain that night. Now the newly born Amido Apolinar scours the earth devouring souls in order to try and fill the pain left by the absence of his heart.

Each character gets 60 points to assign to either:

Spirit power: 15

Speed: 15

Intelligence: 10

Fighting skill: 20


Custom Hollow Abilities:


Ability 1: Overload - Overload is a latent ability that earns Amido the nick name "Divine Bolt" along with his impressive speed. The pale bluish-white blades on Amido's limbs are normally just blades, however they can be used to absorb or produce a high amperage electrical charge when charged with his reiatsu. There is little need for a high voltage since the electricity only needs to be channeled through the blades and into whatever directly touches them so instead the electricity is focused on being high in amperage, the part of electricity that is what kills someone. The power behind the electricity produced is proportional to the amount of reiatsu used and the amount of energy absorbed is likewise proportional to the electricity received(however there is a limit to what Amido can take. I.E. a White Lightning from a 3rd seat would do more harm then good.) When Overload is being used it is notable that the blades glow with a soft pale light and arcs of electricity dancing along the blades can occasionally be seen.

Ability 2: Wicked Bolt - By concentrating his reiatsu into the blades during the use of overload Amido can fire off blots of lightning of varying strength depending on how much energy he decides to pour into it. These bolts are all very fast and can range from causing a slight shock to causing a full on electrocution that could leave weaker foes dead, stunned, or unconscious.

Ability 3: Arc Step - This is Amido's fastest and possibly most deadly technique despite it not being used to directly attack an opponent. This ability requires a local source of electricity to be present, or a material that conducts electricity, well and within 5 feet of Amido's physical body. He then temporarily transforms into a bolt of blue electricity and can use other electrical currents as super speed highways to travel from one point to another in the blink of an eye. This technique can be used to only reform partially at first however once begun materialization must be completed ending the technique. It cannot be used for more than 1 turn and has a 5 turn cool down.




Rp sample: The days were passing by faster and faster as of late, giving way to the darkness of night early because of the seasons. This was a good thing for Amido Apolinar whom preferred to do his hunting at night when the cities came alive with street lights and bustling night crowds, a perfect time to go hunting for souls since most living humans would be off doing other things leaving the spiritually active areas fairly isolated allowing him to stalk and devour his prey in peace. Tonight was a cold night with a small down pour of snow that had already started to leave a soft powder of frosty white flakes scattered about the ground and topping buildings with thin layers of snow. Amido swiftly ran through the city on all fours using the roof tops and running along the sides of buildings leaving small scrape marks from his claws like signatures to let anyone whom might get the chance to be close enough to notice them know that some sort of beast was there. The pain in his hollow hole was gradually becoming worse day after day and the souls he consumed were less and less satisfying as time went on. Amido longed for satisfaction, for a delectable soul that had a flavor worth eating despite the whispers in his mind that told him killing these innocent souls was wrong. It wasn't long before Amido's roaming brought him to the scent of an average soul which he swiftly tracked down to an old grave yard that was in classic japanese style complete with a shrine at the back. Here he found the soul of a young priestess which he quickly pounced upon giving her only enough time to scream before devouring her which snuffed out her shrieks for a loud hollow's roar that echoed throughout the city letting his location be known to any nearby...


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PostSubject: Re: Amido Apolinar {The Divine Bolt} UPDATED   Amido Apolinar {The Divine Bolt} UPDATED I_icon_minitimeWed May 12, 2010 2:21 pm

Hey there ^_^
Please can you edit out the 'Custom Hollow Abilities' section of your app as it doesn't follow our template; please and thank you's Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Amido Apolinar {The Divine Bolt} UPDATED   Amido Apolinar {The Divine Bolt} UPDATED I_icon_minitimeWed May 12, 2010 3:39 pm

Your template doesn't have any thing for hollows powers what so ever. The template for them is incomplete really. Quincy also lack info for their bows in their respective template, so when bounto can start out like this...

https://thebleachworld.darkbb.com/accepted-custom-characters-f6/f-the-shinigami-t1209.htm

With all those crazy powers you expect a hollow or quincy to fight them bare handed?

How about them fighting a shinigami who starts out with kidou spells? Or a powerful human who could start out with just about any power that is more then capable of a 1 hit kill? Please let me know when the templates are updated to have the proper information and I'll gladly edit ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Amido Apolinar {The Divine Bolt} UPDATED   Amido Apolinar {The Divine Bolt} UPDATED I_icon_minitimeWed May 12, 2010 6:53 pm

Edited and ready for approval
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PostSubject: Re: Amido Apolinar {The Divine Bolt} UPDATED   Amido Apolinar {The Divine Bolt} UPDATED I_icon_minitimeWed May 12, 2010 7:28 pm

I approve this but im sure the application and powers situation will be resolved in good time...

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