Jin had always enjoyed reading manga when he was alive, and the idea of superpowers or unnatural abilities had fascinated him intensely, so when he came to the Academy and heard about these Kido arts every nerve in his body had overloaded with excitement, this was it, it had to be the first area he trained it called to him...his unseen destiny kido was where he was gonna excel. he spoken to the instructor who'd done a few basci test with him assesing his capabilities and had decided to start him off with a level 9 bakudou he'd give him a scroll with the incantation and told him of a spot where he could train it.

That was it Jin had taken off with a level of vigour that was the mirror opposite of his usual lazy nature, he'd walked to the training field and was presently heading towards the back of it,it was here he would train his sensei had told him of an apparatus they kept especially for the training of this spell although when jin reached it it was a little more simple that he'd expected. a large steel frame stood before him and hanging from the crossbar was a metal pendulum attached with a shiny metal cord but down there in the openness of the backend of the field they were at natures mercy and the harsh winds caused even this bulky tool to sway in the currents.Jin assumed from the setup that the aim was for him to stop the movement of this pendulum with his paralysing bakudou. That was an objective he refused to fail at............much like all his other objectives........infact this seemed to be the way he approached all his objectives upon realising this it struck him that for a lazy guy he really was rather determined. Damn once agiain he'd allowed his mind to wander but there was no time for frivillous actions like that he was here to train and train he would, he laid the scoll down open at his feet quickly memorising the incantation, once the words were firmly set in his mind he used what he been taught erlier that day in Kidou classes to release as much reiatsu as was possible for him

"Disintegrate, you black dog of Rondanini! Look upon yourself with horror and then claw out your own throat!"

as he spoke the words he felt the reiatsu flowing to his palms, -Its working i cant believe im doing this, this is amazing- the words span round in his head, he could see above the pendulum a red light beggining to glow he had to do this he was so close, more and more of his reiatsu flowed from his body pouring his being into the spell. the red glow edged futher over the metronome at a infuriatingly slow speed, he could feel that it was too much for him the kidou was overpowering his soul it pleaded with him for more reiatsu to fuel its creation but Jin just couldnt ablige he had nothing left. suddenly a crack began to streak down the glow before the whole paralysing spell shattered before his very eye's

"no why couldnt i.....so close" the words escaped his lips in a gasp as his heavy eyelids clamped shut sealing in all the fatigue he'd caused himself and leaving it too run rampant over his being, slowly the dark silence of unconsciousness gripped his mind as he fell into a recovering slumber.

tried to make the incantation indigo but failed not sure how it works lol

Approved +2 to kidou.

Jin's eyes slowly started to register that light had ceased to shine on them the pitch black that engulfed the hazel optics beneath acting as a wake up call.His muscles rejuvinated from a rest of unknown legnth he slowly sat up trying to workout what the time was and how long he'd spent unconcious, his gaze rose to see the still ticking metronome the antagonized winds never ceasing to torment this grassy plain, it was a mystery to him how in conditions like this the chill hadnt frozen him by now but he had to guess that was just another of the many perks to having already died.

the memories of his erlier failiure slowly flooded back to his conciousness harsh reminders of his futile attempt at Kidou, but he couldnt leave it like that even someone like him with his laxadasical attitude couldnt end a training session in failiure if nothing else it would crush his pride as a man...no he would have to re-attempt this, this time it would end in the glory of success.

his pushed himself up on legs that felt more like jelly than flesh, he had to assume that that collapsing in that crumpled heap hadnt helped his blood flow much leaving him now with an unstable set of limb's, which really begged the question now that he was dead did he even have a blood flow and if not then what other differnces where there clearly he had blood as he'd bled but what about atery's and if he ate too much would he clog them.......hmmm could a deead person suffer a heart attack. DAMMIT distracted again not the best start to his re-attempt, that was it no more foolishness he'd have to take this serioulsy. beside it was way past his bed time he wanted to get this over with the intoxicating prospect of sleep beckoned.

he jumped backward a strenuous action that took an unforseen toll on his newly awakend muscles epspecially in the leg department where they nearly gave way. He glared at the swinging metrnome staring down his innanimate enemy willing it to become trapped within his coming spell. he looked down to see the scroll with the incantation written lain dormant just as he'd left it, once again he held his palm up to face his swinging opponent. The words of the spell coursing through his thoughts.

"Disintegrate, you black dog of Rondanini! Look upon yourself with horror and then claw out your own throat!"
the words of the incantation once more bursting from his lips

the warm feeling of his reiatsu flowing out coursing down to stoke the embers of the proceeding spell. But even as his reiatsu built he could already feel it was futile, there was just no sustanance to it, it didnt feel right it was just a hollow shell of the potent weapon it should have been.

thoughts of faliure drenched his conscience a dark depression began to seep into his soul.

"lazy......useless.......wasteful......weak..." all the insults he'd endured over the years, all the words he'd shrugged off so eisily now came back to haunt him never seeming more true. NO this wasnt going to be it, there was no way he was going to prove those idiots right, yes he was lazy but he would show them that even he could achieve levels of strength that others could do no more than dream about. A new found conviction coursed through his body infusing every fibre of his being with inspiration. He was a man who'd be a Captain for him a level nine bakudou was nothing.

It was almost as if his reiatsu itself had become excited by this new torrent of emotion as it flowed though him, the spell was almost weaving itself he could feel it forming he wasnt even going to need the incantaion.

the reiatsu built in his palms faster,thicker....more potent.

and there it was that blissfull redl ight had once again formed above the metronome its warm paralysing glow dousing the swinging pendulum no longer at the itchingly slow crawl Jin had experienced erlier. as it reached toward the ground Jin could feel the reiatsu pouring forth from him but it mattered not he had enough to spare this was just a stepping stone on his path.

There it was the metronome fully ensnared by his trap even in the howling torrents of the night's gale the shiny tool moved not an inch. Pride filled him he'd succeded where all other's had expected him to fail, he'd acheived something great and it felt magnificent.

Approved +2 to kidou, just a few spelling and grammar mistakes otherwise very nice.